Amazoness Power deck (rate and comment)

[Raven des blutroten Mondes]

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[IMG]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa396/NeoXRaven/amazoness%20power/Amazoness-WolfCharmer.jpg[/IMG][spoiler=Lore]If this Monster is destroyed as a rusult of battle youcan special summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your deck.[/spoiler]

[IMG]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa396/NeoXRaven/amazoness%20power/Amazoness-Prophet.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=Lore]This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard.WHile this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster With this effect:
-Once pre turn, you can look at the top card of your opponents deck and choose to either pot it back on top of the deck or at the bottom.[/spoiler]

[IMG]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa396/NeoXRaven/amazoness%20power/Amazoness-Princess.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=lore]he young Princess of the amazon.[/spoiler]


[IMG]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa396/NeoXRaven/amazoness%20power/Amazoness-Ninja.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=lore]Flip:destroy 1 monster on the field.[/spoiler]

[IMG]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa396/NeoXRaven/amazoness%20power/Amazoness-Executioner.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=lore]Once per turn, you can equip this card to a face-up "Amazoness" monster you control, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF. When the equipped monster destroys an opponent's monster by battle, draw 1 card. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.)[/spoiler]

[IMG]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa396/NeoXRaven/amazoness%20power/Amazoness-EliteScout.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=lore]This monster can only attack if there is 1 or more monsters on your opponents side of the field.[/spoiler]

[IMG]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa396/NeoXRaven/amazoness%20power/Amazoness-DragoonShaman.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=lore]If your opponent declares an attack against a dragon monster you control this card is destroyed instead, and you take no battle dammage[/spoiler]

[IMG]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa396/NeoXRaven/amazoness%20power/Amazoness-valkyrie.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=lore]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Valkyrie's guiding Light". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 7 or more as a Tribute from your firld or hand.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler=Spell and Trap][IMG]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa396/NeoXRaven/amazoness%20power/ValkyriesguidingLight.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=lore]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Amazoness-valkyrie". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 7 or more.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler=extra][IMG]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa396/NeoXRaven/amazoness%20power/Amazoness-ShadowKnight.jpg[/IMG]
[spoiler=lore]1 DARK Tuner + 1 non-Tuner "Amazoness" monster
This card has to attack if possible and if it doesn't it is destroyed.When this Monster is destroyed instead of sending it to the graveyard it is removed from play.[/spoiler]
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[Knight of Emotion]

They actually have an Amazoness archtype already XD.
But these are pretty good.
(Btw why a ritual? Just asking.)

[Raven des blutroten Mondes]

i know they do i was just adding too it and just felt like it

[おジャマ・キング]

Somewhat good OCG, just work on it a bit more
OT: Something about the artwork of these cards doesn't feel Mayan

[Raven des blutroten Mondes]

do you guys think i should finish this set or start something else

[おジャマ・キング]

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do you guys think i should finish this set or start something else
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look@poll

[Time Psyduck]

Amazoness monsters don't have a dash in their names, it's just Amazonness whatever. For example, it's "Amazoness Queen" rather than "Amazoness - Queen". They're also all Warrior-Type, aside from one, and have a certain visual style that these cards seem to lack.

What you've got isn't terrible, but they're not really Amazoness. Maybe you could rename them and make your own archetype out of them?

On the cards themselves:
Wolf Charmer is broken. Search any level 4 or lower monster in the game? It's going to see use in basically any deck not using Solidarity.
Prophet is nice.
Princess has no level. It's hard to say whether it's any good without it, but 1400 normal monsters usually aren't.
Ninja is a Man-Eater Bug with lower stats. Man-Eater Bug is worse than Old Vindictive Magician, who is worse than Ryko. Ninja is bad.
Executioner has a nice effect, it's just a shame it's also the one beatstick amongst these cards. The ATK should be low, to encourage it's use as a Union Monster.
Elite Scout is terrible. A 1200 ATK Level 4 that can't attack unless they have a monster? I may as well run Beaver Warrior.
Dragoon Shaman is interesting support for dragons, but nothing special, and out of place here. It also needs rewording so the effect is either a) optional or only happens if the dragon would lose.
Valkyrie is OK, but non-effect monsters aren't usually very good. This one has the same ATK as Divine Grace - Northwemko, who has a useful effect, and her ritual spell has a secondary effect. I'd rather use Northwemko.
Shadow Knight is basically un-summonable, since you need a level 11 monster. Dark Synchros usually work the other way, with the level of a (usually high-level) Dark Tuner removed from the level of another monster. The negative effects mean it's not even an appealing option to make the effort to bring it out anyway.

[Raven des blutroten Mondes]

thanks for all the good advise ill fix the cards and post them up asap