Glogatha Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 [img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/1481/442447o.jpg[/img] [img]http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/6710/442447.jpg[/img] [img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/6710/442447.jpg[/img] I appreciate all critisisim and would like tips if possible! I will also post more cards as I finish them! :3 [img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/6710/442447.jpg[/img] [img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/6710/442447.jpg[/img] This card is the last preview(and its also my favorite!) please tell me if you like it. i tried my best, and would love good or bad feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 these have potential, but it's still not quite there... i see a good amount of OCG (official card grammer) errors... but right now, i feel the need to not help with all of them Here are a few minor tips: Capitalize some of the more important terms: - "lifepoints" = "Life Points" - "battle phase" = "Battle Phase" - "heads" and "tails" = "Heads" and "Tails" - "level" = "Level" - for "Type 1 Corruption", simply say "If you cannot pay, this card is banished." It improves on the last sentence and it could possibly mean the last sentence isnt necessary - for "Night Homunculus", please say [b]exactly[/b] what type of monster; for example: "Fiend-Type monster" - for "Slight Miscalculation", when talking a about a monster's stats, stay ATK or DEF: "decrease the monster's ATK by 500" and "double the attacking monster's ATK points" ALSO: - for "Night Homunculus", don't use pictures with Text in them -- If you want to, just crop out the text or make it invisible - It is usually a good idea to give credit to who/where you got the pic from hopefully these few minor tips will help with your set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 [quote name='BFG Studios' timestamp='1309674697' post='5329840'] these have potential, but it's still not quite there... i see a good amount of OCG (official card grammer) errors... but right now, i feel the need to not help with all of them Here are a few minor tips: Capitalize some of the more important terms: - "lifepoints" = "Life Points" - "battle phase" = "Battle Phase" - "heads" and "tails" = "Heads" and "Tails" - "level" = "Level" - for "Type 1 Corruption", simply say "If you cannot pay, this card is banished." It improves on the last sentence and it could possibly mean the last sentence isnt necessary - for "Night Homunculus", please say [b]exactly[/b] what type of monster; for example: "Fiend-Type monster" - for "Slight Miscalculation", when talking a about a monster's stats, stay ATK or DEF: "decrease the monster's ATK by 500" and "double the attacking monster's ATK points" ALSO: - for "Night Homunculus", don't use pictures with Text in them -- If you want to, just crop out the text or make it invisible - It is usually a good idea to give credit to who/where you got the pic from hopefully these few minor tips will help with your set [/quote] Thanks Much! Will fix asap! < : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmperorNiro Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 what BFG said, and lol change the name of this deck, it's like a copy to Toot's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 [quote name='The Prince Of Legends' timestamp='1309675069' post='5329845'] what BFG said, and lol change the name of this deck, it's like a copy to Toot's [/quote] I didn't know that I "stole it" lol, but I don't know how to change the topic title... sowwy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 3, 2011 Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1309676178' post='5329858'] I didn't know that I "stole it" lol, but I don't know how to change the topic title... sowwy [/quote] Click "Edit" under your post then click "Use Full Editor" change title from there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2011 [quote name='BFG Studios' timestamp='1309676382' post='5329861'] Click "Edit" under your post then click "Use Full Editor" change title from there [/quote] Mission Complete! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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