Kakrum Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 these are my first cards Edit: Thanks to SteamboatStitch for helping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 Spell Card, Trap Card, End Phase, Graveyard, and Deck all need to be capped.Names in card effects need to be in quotes.Some of them need backgrounds in the picPretty cool for your first cards.I like how they work together.6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 Some errors but for your first cards they are really good ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteamboatStitch Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 I really like these. Did you do the art yourself? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakrum Posted February 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 No I found the pictures online. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteamboatStitch Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 Well, again I like these cards, so I'd like to help. As Arpeejajo said, there are some grammar errors. Here is a small list with the effects reworded to be more accurate. (If you would like me to remove the list, I will do so.) Elemental Wolf - Air During your Standby Phase, select and activate one of the following effects: - Draw 1 card. - Draw 2 cards. (This effect can only be activated if there is another monster with "Elemental Wolf" in it's name on your side of the field.) Elemental Wolf - Earth This monster gains 300 DEF points for every monster with "Elemental Wolf" in it's name on your side of the field. Elemental Wolf - Fire This monster gains 300 ATK points for every monster with "Elemental Wolf" in it's name on your side of the field. Elemental Wolf - Water As long as this card remains face up on the field, all monsters with "Elemental Wolf" in it's name on your side of the field gain 200 ATK and DEF points. Elemental Wolf - Lightning This monster gains 500 ATK points for every monster with "Elemental Wolf" in it's name on your side of the field. Elemental Wolf - Metal As long as this card remains face up on the field, all monsters with "Elemental Wolf" in it's name on your side of the field gain 300 ATK and DEF points. Elemental Wolf - Ice This card gains 100 ATK for every monster with "Elemental Wolf" in it's name on your side of the field. Elemental Wolf - Wood If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card, Special Summon 1 "Elemental Wolf - Wood" from your hand or deck. Elemental Wolf - Dark During the End Phase of your turn you must discard one card from your hand or this card is destroyed. Elemental Wolf - Light During the End Phase of your turn you may add 1 monster with "Elemental Wolf" in it's name from your Graveyard to your deck and shuffle your deck. Elemental Wolf - Light and Dark Elemental Wolf - Light + Elemental Wolf - Dark This card's attribute is considered both Light and Dark. All effects that are in play that affect either attribute apply. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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