manmodthanatos Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 so, this is my first time tossing any cards up here for view, i've been making them for a while for fun but, i've been getting more and more curious about whether or not i'm horrible at this. If something's not right, or anyone has any opinions, i'd like to hear what everyone has to say, i'm certainly not an expert so every bit of advice counts. [spoiler=Monster Cards][spoiler=Legendary Producer Izangi][img]http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5905/214489.jpg[/img] Once per turn, you can add 1 "Wandering Musician" monster from your graveyard to your deck. You can add 1 "Assistant Producer" monster from your deck to your hand instead of conducting your normal draw during your Draw Phase.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Legendary Producer Izanami][img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/5905/214489.jpg[/img] Once per turn, you can select and Banish 1 Spell or Trap card in your Deck that designates 1 or more "Wandering Musician" monsters. During your third Standby Phase after this effect's activation, set the removed card on the field. As long as this card is in the graveyard, increase the ATK of all your "Assistant Producer monsters by 200 points.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Assistant Producer Amaterasu][img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/5905/214489.jpg[/img] Once per turn, negate the activation of your opponent's Monster Card effect and set it in the face-down position. While you control another Spellcaster-Type monster, this card cannot be attacked.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Assistant Producer Tsukuyomi][img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/5905/214489.jpg[/img] Once per turn, negate the activation of your opponent's Spell Card and Set it face-down until the End Phase. When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your hand in the face-up Attack Position. That monster's effect is negated and is destroyed during your opponent's End Phase.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Assistant Producer Susano'o][img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/5905/214489.jpg[/img] Once per turn, negate the activation of your opponent's Trap Card and return it to the face-down position until the End Phase. This card cannot be selected as a target by your opponent's card effects.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Assistant Producer Yata][img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/5905/214489.jpg[/img] Once per turn, select 1 Set card on your opponent's side of the field. Pick it up and look at it, then return it to its original position. The selected card cannot be activated or flipped until your next Standby Phase.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Assistant Producer Yasakani][img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/5012/214489o.jpg[/img] Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on the field to have this card's Level become equal to the selected monster's Level, until the End Phase. When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, the Battle Phase for that turn ends immediately.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Assistant Producer Kusanagi][img]http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/5905/214489.jpg[/img] During either player's Damage Step, when a face-up Spellcaster-Type monster you control battles, you can send this card from your hand to the Graveyard to immediately destroy both monsters. You can Banish this card in the Graveyard to return 1 "Wandering Musician" card from your Graveyard to your Hand.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Wandering Musician Aquios][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/5905/214489.jpg[/img] This monster gets the following effect(s) while you control a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s): ● DARK: This card can not be destroyed by battle. ● LIGHT: Half any battle damage you take when this monster is attacked.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Wandering Musician Monolith][img]http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/5905/214489.jpg[/img] This monster gets the following effect(s) while you control a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s): ● DARK: If a card effect is negated, that card is immediately destroyed. ● LIGHT: This card gains 500 DEF[/spoiler] [spoiler=Wandering Musician Aether][img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/5905/214489.jpg[/img] This monster gets the following effect(s) while you control a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s): ● DARK: When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. ● LIGHT: When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict 700 damage to your opponent.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Wandering Musician Aeris][img]http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/255/214489e.jpg[/img] While this card is in your hand, you can activate 1 of the following effect(s) while you control a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s): ● DARK: You can send this card from your hand to the Graveyard to return up to 2 monsters your opponent controls to the owner's hand. ● LIGHT: Once per turn, you can reveal this card to your opponent, select 1 card in your opponent's hand, the selected card is Banished until your opponent's End Phase.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Synchro Monsters][spoiler=Legendary Musician Aquarian][img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/5905/214489.jpg[/img] 1 "Assistant Director" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Water-Attribute monsters This monster gets the following effect(s) when this monster is Synchro Summoned using a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s): ● DARK: During the End Phase of a turn when this face-up card attacked or was attacked and was destroyed by battle, Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. ● LIGHT: When this card is selected as an attack target, increase your Life Points by the ATK of the attacking monster.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Legendary Musician Megalith][img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/5905/214489.jpg[/img] 1 "Assistant Director" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Earth-Attribute monsters This monster gets the following effect(s) when this monster is Synchro Summoned using a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s): ● DARK: You can negate the effect of any card that targets your opponent's monster and destroy it. ● LIGHT: This card gains 200 DEF for each "Musician" monster in your Graveyard[/spoiler] [spoiler=Legendary Musician Empyrean][img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/5905/214489.jpg[/img] 1 "Assistant Director" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fire-Attribute monsters This monster gets the following effect(s) when this monster is Synchro Summoned using a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s): ● DARK: When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. ● LIGHT: When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each "Musician" monster in your graveyard.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Legendary Musician Opaque][img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/5905/214489.jpg[/img] 1 "Assistant Director" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Wind-Attribute monsters When properly Synchro Summoned, Banish this card to activate the following effect(s) when this monster is Synchro Summoned using a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s): ● DARK: Return 1 card on your opponent's side of the field to the owner's Deck for each "Producer" monster in your Graveyard. ● LIGHT: Your opponent Banishes 1 card in their hand for each "Producer" monster in your Graveyard[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Ritual Cards][spoiler=Dawn, Spirit of Passion][img]http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/5905/214489.jpg[/img] This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "The Twilight Contract". While at least 1 other monster exists on your side of the field, your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. Once per turn, if you control no other monsters, you can Special Summon 1 LIGHT monster from your hand. For every face-up LIGHT monster on your side of the field, increase the ATK of all "Musician" monsters on your side of the field by 500.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Dusk, Spirit of Pain][img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/5905/214489.jpg[/img] This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "The Twilight Contract". While at least 1 other monster exists on your side of the field, your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. Once per turn, if you have 2 or less cards your hand, you can add 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to your hand. For every face-up DARK monster on your side of the field, increase the ATK of all "Producer" monsters on your side of the field by 500.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Magic Cards][spoiler=Tribute Band][img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/5905/214489.jpg[/img] This card can only be equipped to a "Musician" monster you control. Select 1 "Musician" monster in your Graveyard, the effects of the equipped monster and the selected monster are switched until your End Phase. If the equipped monster is destroyed, you can immediately equip this card to another "Musician"monster you control.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Starlite Inspiration][img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/5905/214489.jpg[/img] You can only equip this card to a "Musician" monster. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 500 points. The equipped monster is treated as a LIGHT monster. If the equipped monster would be destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead, and make the Battle Damage to the controller of the equipped monster 0.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Spirit of Music][img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/5905/214489.jpg[/img] If you activate this card, you cannot Summon other monsters this turn. Send 1 monster you control to Special Summon 2 "Fan Tokens" (Spellcaster-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) and 2 "Bouncer Tokens" (Spellcaster-Type/Dark/Level 1/ ATK 0/ DEF0) in Defense Position. The tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. When an "Fan Token" is destroyed, the controller of that token gains 500 life points. When a "Bouncer Token" is destroyed, the opponent receives 500 points of damage.[/spoiler] [spoiler=The Twilight Contract][img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5905/214489.jpg[/img] This card can be used to Ritual Summon "Dawn, Spirit of Passion", or "Dusk, Spirit of Pain". You must also Tribute at least 1 "Producer" monster(s) from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 10 or more from the field or your hand. During your Main Phase, you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard. If you do, Special Summon 1 "Musician" monster from your hand or deck.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Trap Cards][spoiler=Creeping Depression][img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/5905/214489.jpg[/img] You can only equip this card to a "Musician" monster. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 700 points. The equipped monster is treated as a DARK monster. If the equipped monster would be destroyed as a result of battle, destroy both monsters immediately before damage calculation.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Master MC -NEW-][img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/5905/214489.jpg[/img] If you control 1 or more "Musician" monsters, place 1 "Bass Counter" on each monster your opponent controls for each "Musician" monster you control. A monster that has 5 or more then 5 "Bass Counters" is immediately destroyed.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Backstage Pass -NEW-][img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/5905/214489.jpg[/img] This card can only be activated when a "Musician" monster you control is selected as an attack target. Negate the attack and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the selected "Musician" monster.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Hallowed Beat -NEW-][img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/5905/214489.jpg[/img] Each time a "Musician" or "Band" monster you control is destroyed, add 1 "Bass Counter" to this card. Once per turn, you can move 1 "Bass Counter" from this card to 1 monster your opponent controls. A monster with 5 or more "Bass Counters" is immediately destroyed.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] I have a lot more for this archtype, but for now I just want to see if I'm moving in a good enough direction before adding the rest of them, so, that being said, Questions? Comments? 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manmodthanatos Posted July 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 just gonna bump this, i added 3 new cards, just to spice things up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
litenite Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 good cards but you posted Assistant Producer Susano'o in Assistant Producer Amaterasu so youll need to fix that. other than that all the cards are really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manmodthanatos Posted July 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 cool, first responder, thanks for the input, glad you like them xD fixed the error with Amaterasu, and added 3 new monsters and 1 magic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 ah, music cards, so long I've see those I recommend each time you update it, add a NEW so we know what to look for, k? Tribute Band's effect is OPed due to it depends which effects and all that I recommend you give it a card for switching those effects 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manmodthanatos Posted July 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Alright, first rating, like that, xD hopefully we can bump it up to a full 10 by the time I'm done with this whole archtype lol, but for now, quick update; Using that -NEW- system now, the new ones i'm posting will have that near their "click here" name, make things easier Tribute Band's effect, works only for "Musician" monsters, so it won't change the effects of normal monsters outside this archetype and not the producers or spirits either. I've changed Tribute Band to an Equip card though, make it a bit less OPed and easier to get rid of (i think at least?) I think I'm doing an ok job so far? xD got 3 new cards to comment on, the Ritual cards have made their appearance, lemme know what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neos the Ancient Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Like the idea, but most of the cards didn't seem to be very "Musician"-y. Also, you have 2 copies of Assistant Producer Susano'o in your list. 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manmodthanatos Posted July 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 ah, sorry about that lol, still a little new to this system so i know i probably have a few errors bouncing around, i fixed it though, so all should be well for the moment xD. glad you like the idea though. as for them being music-y, lol, i'm trying not to do it from a standard point of view, these cards may not seem too musical, since you would probably expect guitars or drummers. what i was thinking about was more inspiration and what the process is like, you have your street musicians (Wandering Musicians) who get signed by producers (Assistant producers) and become icons (Legendary Musicians), the musician's effects, comes from their inspiration, if there's darkness on their side, the dark effect activates because it inspires their music (and vice versa for light). the magic cards and ritual cards are kind of the same xD, so my musician archtype is less of maybe what you're used to, but i thought it would make it a bit interesting? lol, lemme know if it's a cool direction, even if it's not what you're expecting. as for the updates; first trap card is up, not quite sure if i did that one right but, i'm still a bit new to this lol, and 1 new monster and the synchro for it, bit of a new direction for the new monster, tried mixing things up a bit, lemme know if it's a good addition to the group xD as always, comments are always appreciated, much thanks to the people who've already given an opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manmodthanatos Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 Just a quick bump, i wanna see if anyone thinks the new monsters are horrible xD, anyone lemme know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 I like them, especially Izanami! I feel like Ive seen some of the pics in manga, but oh well, other than that their all pretty good! (p.s I gave you a rep cause I think you should get noticed!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 You need more Trap cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manmodthanatos Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Very cool xD I'm glad for the shout out, makes me happy to hear what people like specifically. Thank you for the rep too, this archtype is getting more attention then I thought it would, I'm glad to see that my ideas are cool enough for the recognition. As for trap cards, ask and you shall receive, today's update, 3 new trap cards, lemme know what you think, i've introduced "Beat Counters" into the game, let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manmodthanatos Posted July 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 Gonna bump this again, see what people think about my Bass counters idea, not sure if they're a bit OPed but, we'll see lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manmodthanatos Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 looks like i need another bump, really need someone's opinion on this, my bass counters may be a bit overpowered, what do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manmodthanatos Posted July 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 gonna bump this again, if it stops getting feedback all together i'll try something new xD might have stretched this archtype a little far, so we'll see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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