Zakuza13 Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 here is my first YU card [spoiler=Royal Army][img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7717/446370.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Tactics Cards][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/3661/446370n.jpg[/img][img]http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/4707/446370h.jpg[/img][img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/4482/446370w.jpg[/img][img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/5786/446370c.jpg[/img][img]http://img542.imageshack.us/img542/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/286/446370d.jpg[/img][img]http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/7717/446370.jpg[/img] [/spoiler][spoiler=Asgard Protector][img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/7717/446370.jpg[/img][spoiler=Lore]You Must Tribute 3 monsters to Summon this Card. This Card Cannot be destroyed by battle or by the effects of a Monsters, Spells, or Trap Cards.This effect can not be negated by any means. You Can Special Summon This Card from your Graveyard or from play as long a you pay half your life points.[/spoiler][img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/286/446370d.jpg[/img][img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/5199/446370m.jpg[/img] [/spoiler][spoiler=Tactics][img]http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5786/446370c.jpg[/img][img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/3995/446370i.jpg[/img][img]http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/7503/446370q.jpg[/img][img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/7717/446370.jpg[/img] [/spoiler][spoiler=Imp Army][img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/4482/446370w.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Unit Cards][img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/5972/446370o.jpg[/img][img]http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/2087/446370g.jpg[/img][img]http://img803.imageshack.us/img803/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/7717/446370.jpg[/img][img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/5143/446370p.jpg[/img][img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/5143/446370p.jpg[/img][img]http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/1649/446370z.jpg[/img][img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/5852/446370f.jpg[/img][img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/388/446370r.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 Okay, looking at these. They seem better than your others, though I wish you would have made more of them effect monsters. Vanillas (Normal monster cards) are just...boring. Also, most of them have 1800 ATK. Could you vary it just a little? OCG seems alright. Not quite sure why you have other sentences in parentheses at the bottom of Angelic Thunder and Steal. Steal should have the bottom like this: Select and activate 1 of the following effects: -Select 1 card in your opponent's hand. Add the selected card to your hand. -Select 1 face-up Equip Spell Card on your opponent's side of the field. Unequip the Equip Card and add it to your hand. Also, you have Durant and Flunky up twice. I'll help you with the others later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted July 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 [quote name='Nu-Mou Knight' timestamp='1310410361' post='5345786'] Okay, looking at these. They seem better than your others, though I wish you would have made more of them effect monsters. Vanillas (Normal monster cards) are just...boring. Also, most of them have 1800 ATK. Could you vary it just a little? OCG seems alright. Not quite sure why you have other sentences in parentheses at the bottom of Angelic Thunder and Steal. Steal should have the bottom like this: Select and activate 1 of the following effects: -Select 1 card in your opponent's hand. Add the selected card to your hand. -Select 1 face-up Equip Spell Card on your opponent's side of the field. Unequip the Equip Card and add it to your hand. Also, you have Durant and Flunky up twice. I'll help you with the others later. [/quote] the parentheses at the bottom are the chants from the game it came from. for more effect monsters i will try but its hard to think them up. thanks for steal fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 I would gladly comment here tomorrow, after I get some sleep. Would you put the lore of the cards that have effects, because it would be easier to correct any mistakes. I see some good stuff with a quick browsing, but we'll see tomorrow! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted August 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted August 4, 2011 Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 Okay, let's see here. I'm liking the Gulcasa and Durant series, and don't forget to make "Dragon Knight" when you update next. But, I think Spec Summoning 3 of the "Dragon Knights" is a bit much, unless you plan on making them pretty weak. For other cards, I don't remember if I said anything in your other topic, but monsters don't "Get an attack points boost." They "Gain X ATK" or "Increase its ATK by X points". By the way, could you not put the in-game quotes at the bottom of "tactics" cards? It's just...unnecessary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted August 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew 2.0 Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 I looked through these quickly and saw a few things. 1. Great overall set. If you Pull bits of these together, you may have a pretty solid deck 2. Minor grammar issues. "There", not "their" for Flunky and Kylier or whatever it is. 3. Your divine needs to be 3 sacs. and have more to it. Obilisk has 4000 and an effect, make me want to have your divine instead of Obilisk. 4.Get better names. Things you can not only spell but remember are helpful, also ditch the "hunter", "bandit", etc. names. Come on man, BE ORIGINAL!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted August 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 the names are fine i don't need fancy names for those cards "hunter", "bandit", etc. those are their original names from the game they came from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew 2.0 Posted August 14, 2011 Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 oh. I didnt know these came from anywhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted August 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2011 it is cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted August 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted August 19, 2011 Report Share Posted August 19, 2011 For future reference, when you update your set, post the name of cards you've added. Anyway, I can see you've added "Dragon Knight", but he's a bit strong to be Special Summoning 3 with Durant and Gulcasa. Perhaps you could lower his stats or ony Summon 2 with the effect of Brongaa Mode or Durant the Dragon Knight. Also, Marietta is practically invincible as is. It'd probably work to remove her protection from being destroyed by battle, since 4000 ATK is already enough to protect from it. If you still want to protect from total destruction, you could just make Marietta return to the hand when destroyed by battle. 6.5/10, you're slowly getting better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted August 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2011 Bump comment anyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Metallium Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 lol good cards 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted August 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2011 bump comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted August 26, 2011 Report Share Posted August 26, 2011 The monsters, you will need to have their pics get backgrounds. And with Vanilla monsters, you might wanna try and make support cards for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted January 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 bump new cards added comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoRWBY65 Posted January 9, 2012 Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 These cards seem to be good. The only thing is, people on this site complain alot if you have just plain white backgrounds on created cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted January 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 sry nothing i can do about it this are the best pictures i can get Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoRWBY65 Posted January 9, 2012 Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 [quote name='Zakuza13' timestamp='1326080758' post='5755762'] sry nothing i can do about it this are the best pictures i can get [/quote] Alright. If that is the case, I give them 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted January 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted January 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2012 bump new cards added 367, Awakened 367,Asgard Sevant, Asgard High Sevant in Asgard Protectors Judgement Zero added Shield Barrier update in Tactic Cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted January 25, 2012 Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 They look good...can't think of any of the OCG problems right now....sorry ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted January 25, 2012 Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 My biggest problem is with cards that are protected from attacks, spells, traps, and effects. If I find any of these, I will open fire. So far the cards I personally think are overpowered are: Judgment Zero; Angelic Thunder; Shield Barrier; Reincarnation-- anything with total negation/protection, and destruction is suspect. Marietta (again total protection, and she should require 4 Tributes); Awakened 367 (same reason) Lorca Lakeside (really? Boosted direct attacks? That would make me a lot less merciful as a duelist); Should your direct attack units have so much power when they do direct attacks? I think they should perform them at half power, but I do not remember what other direct attacks are like -- not that they'd survive more than a turn against anyone I can think of (say 'hello' to my old friend 'Skilled Dark Magician!') Speaking of skills, Necromancer's is not one I would give to a Tier-1 creature. Tier-2, maybe, since 'Chaos Command Magician' can negate effects that target him, but not destroying Spells/Traps and allowing the player to add one of his/her own. That's a two-for-one for certain. I think you could have him either select one of the two effects or simply remove one of them. Same for Witch, lest you think I missed her. What does 'Piercing Damage' mean (Asgard Servants)? I assume 'Banished' means 'Removed from play.' Giffion Rider? I thought it was a Griffin at first. They must be different animals, then. I see Aegina Eine Artwaltz (and her sister)'s ability as similar to 'Bond of Brothers' in the anime (back in the Ceremonial Duel). Except no LPs are paid. I think this is good. I have no idea what these characters are capable of in the original source, but it may be possible to give your cards of them more ATK and DEF. I mean, if any of them are fielded against a monster as basic as 'Skilled Dark Magician' they'd be done pretty quickly. It is your call as creator, though. For printing purposes, you may want to start finding ones that have lighter backgrounds than black. I had a lot of trouble with this with my Celestial Being Deck. Also I agree that you can remove the incantations. They only serve to shrink the size of your text, which will not help the player, in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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