Glogatha Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/6710/442447.jpg[/img] You must pay Life Points During your Stand-by Phase in order to activate this cards effect, during your Main Phase you may summon one "Homunculus" Token with /Light/Spellcaster-Type/LV1/ATK 0/DEF 0/. Increase the Monsters ATK and DEF by the amount of Life Points paid in order to activate this card. When this card is destroyed, gain half the Life Points you paid. You may not conduct you Battle Phase on the turn this card was activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KardGame Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 Sorry, but i do not see much potential with this card, it seems slightly overpowered because it summons monsters and strengthens them and you gain 5000 lifepoints when that card is destroyed. I like the potential but i would give a small edit. If you edit it and i like it , I will donate 100 points to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 This belongs in the pop culture forum. Why? Because it's based on Full Metal Alchemist. I'll still give you some points on it Your pic could be better imo Why is this an equip card? There are some ocg errors with punctuation, and summon >> Summon I don't get why you're paying life points to increase the ATK/DEF of tokens. And then there is the "gain 5000 Life points when this card is destroyed"...way overpowered card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 [quote name='Shadow Ninja' timestamp='1310427555' post='5346522'] This belongs in the pop culture forum. Why? Because it's based on Full Metal Alchemist. [/quote] You shouldn't assume before you know, I didn't like a lot of FMA, but I was always into alchemy and science. Thank you for your critisism, I will fix any mistakes i find! (P.S. I had just made an equip card before this, and made a mistake, only human right! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 for paying half your LP, the atk/def boosting might end up being too much combined with the LP gaining effect, I mean yes it means you can't recycle the effect to do it over and over, but it's still OPed 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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