Johan Liebert Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/2485/282557.jpg[/img] [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/2485/282557.jpg[/img] [img]http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/2485/282557.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9443/282557y.jpg[/img] [img]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/2485/282557.jpg[/img] [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/2485/282557.jpg[/img] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/2485/282557.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Eh, I suppose these are alright. But your Levels are WAY out of proportion. Monsters with less than 2000 ATK should generally be Level 4 or lower. 2500 to 2000, 5 or 6. You have guys with 2250 ATK (Thundercracker) at Level 7. Do you see my point? Also, these are all boring Normal monsters. Jazz 'em up (or at least a few) with effects that would relate to their stories. Optimus' pic could use a bit of work, he looks kinda claustrophobic. Otherwise, they're okay. You can write in proper English, a skill that seems to be fading around here. I'll give you a 5/10, since they aren't really impressive, but not terrible by the same token. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johan Liebert Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 [quote name='Nu-Mou Knight' timestamp='1310438174' post='5346906'] Eh, I suppose these are alright. But your Levels are WAY out of proportion. Monsters with less than 2000 ATK should generally be Level 4 or lower. 2500 to 2000, 5 or 6. You have guys with 2250 ATK (Thundercracker) at Level 7. Do you see my point? Also, these are all boring Normal monsters. Jazz 'em up (or at least a few) with effects that would relate to their stories. Optimus' pic could use a bit of work, he looks kinda claustrophobic. Otherwise, they're okay. You can write in proper English, a skill that seems to be fading around here. I'll give you a 5/10, since they aren't really impressive, but not terrible by the same token. [/quote] thx for the advice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gojira/Godzilla Posted August 28, 2011 Report Share Posted August 28, 2011 too underpowered, optimus would be an earth type, grindor would be wind-(HELICOPTER) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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