LRPXD Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [center][img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/7479/260988.jpg[/img] [size="3"]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned OR Tribute Summoned. Once per turn, you can reveal this card from your hand to downgrade this card's level by 1. If this monster's level is 4 or lower, halve this card's ATK and DEF. When this card is Summoned both you and your opponent must draw 3 cards, if either player draws a non-Monster Type card, banish it. Select 1 unoccupied space on your Spell/Trap Zone, all monsters drawn by this card's effect are placed on that space stacked face-up, this pile is treated as an Equip Spell Card and is equipped to this monster. Monsters equipped to this card cannot activate it's effect(s), declare an attack, be Tributed, or be used as a material for a Fusion Summon or a Synchro Summon. Increase this card's ATK and DEF equal to the total level of monsters equipped to this card x 100. If possible, this card gains the effect(s) of the monster on top of the pile that's equipped to this monster until the End Phase. During each End Phase send the top card of the pile to the bottom of the pile.[/size] To summarize: -This card can only be Normal Summoned or Tribute Summoned -Both you and your opponent must draw 3 cards, any non-Monster Cards among them are banished. -All monster that were drawn by this card's effect are placed on a empty Spell/Trap Zone and that pile is treated as an Equip Spell Card equipped to this monster. -This card's ATK and DEF increases equal to the total level of monsters on the pile x 100. -This card gains the effect of the monster on top of the pile every turn it's a different monster (maybe). -The pile is destroyed when this monster leaves the field or if a card destroys it that has effects similar to Heavy Storm, Giant Trunde, Mystical Space typhoon ect. -When this card leaves the field, the monsters used are returned to it's owner's graveyard. [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 Wow that's one loooooooong lore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 Well, you've got quite the effect there, This card can work wonders in power-up decks, especially with an Axe of Despair or two! I rate 8/10. (I will not comment on wether I think its OP'ed or not since everything i make is OP'ed! lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [quote name='Varion' timestamp='1310629016' post='5353749'] Wow that's one loooooooong lore. [/quote] Lol I know sorry all my cards have long lores that's why I give reps for people who read them and comment on them. [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1310629428' post='5353756'] Well, you've got quite the effect there, This card can work wonders in power-up decks, especially with an Axe of Despair or two! I rate 8/10. (I will not comment on wether I think its OP'ed or not since everything i make is OP'ed! lol) [/quote] Lol it's fine if you think it's op'd as long as you have reason for it. But anyway thanks again for the rate and comment 2 steps away from perfection anyway i'll repay you by rating your card(s) 2morrow if your cards as op'd as you say i'll help bring drawbacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 Artwork: 10 - Very cool pic. Balance: 8 - Not overpowered or underpowered. Lore (Effect) : 11 - One of the best card effects out here. OCG (Official Card Grammar): 10 - Perfect, no mistakes How it all Fits Together: 10 Card (The Average of the all Above): 9.8 - One of the most creative cards on YCM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kristoferjm Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 It's a very good picture, and a pretty need idea, although the major loss is honestly it's effect. It's pretty wordy, and it feels like it just does too much. In an actual duel it'd be something I'd leave out of my deck just so I wouldn't have to take ten minutes to explain to my opponent what's going on. Aha, this might be just me though. Good card anyways:] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 I agree, most of my friends are short tempered, and would leave before I explained the effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 "If possible, this card gains the effect(s) of the monster on top of the pile that's equipped to this monster" <---I don't get why you want this card to gain its effects PERMANENTLY, I'd only have it temporarily Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 Good idea, kinda like Hundred Eyes Dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [quote name='Varion' timestamp='1310630471' post='5353771'] Artwork: 10 - Very cool pic. Balance: 8 - Not overpowered or underpowered. Lore (Effect) : 11 - One of the best card effects out here. OCG (Official Card Grammar): 10 - Perfect, no mistakes How it all Fits Together: 10 Card (The Average of the all Above): 9.8 - One of the most creative cards on YCM. [/quote] Why thank you for the rating. I wasn't to sure about the OCG if anyone could help and fix it, that would be nice. Anyway appreciate the rating 9.8 [quote name='kristoferjm' timestamp='1310632599' post='5353800'] It's a very good picture, and a pretty need idea, although the major loss is honestly it's effect. It's pretty wordy, and it feels like it just does too much. In an actual duel it'd be something I'd leave out of my deck just so I wouldn't have to take ten minutes to explain to my opponent what's going on. Aha, this might be just me though. Good card anyways:] [/quote] Lol yea I get you I could leave some things out but I like creating effects that work together it's really fun but yea explaining the effect of this card would leave your opponent confused saying wtf. Thanks for the comment much appreciated. [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1310634416' post='5353837'] "If possible, this card gains the effect(s) of the monster on top of the pile that's equipped to this monster" <---I don't get why you want this card to gain its effects PERMANENTLY, I'd only have it temporarily [/quote] Oh snap I wanted this card to only get the effects temporarily but not sure how to word it. I only want this card to gain the effect of the card on top of the pile then it switches to another monster this card loses the 1st card's effect then switches to the next monsters effect and gains it's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 (sigh) I didn't think it would have come to this BUMP! (facedesk) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 We should make counterfit versions of this and take them to duel tournaments! (hehehehe) we would destroy them all! (whomp there it is!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 If this monster's level is 4 or lower, halve this card's ATK and DEF. Get rid of this, this is only make this card UPed. And 1600 original ATK is pretty weak, give it at least 2000? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1310754427' post='5357839'] If this monster's level is 4 or lower, halve this card's ATK and DEF. Get rid of this, this is only make this card UPed. And 1600 original ATK is pretty weak, give it at least 2000? [/quote] yeah, you can only get a total of 600 ATK points from the effect, and if you halve the ATK, that leaves a measly 1400 ATK (Celtic Gaurdian...) so ATK could go higher! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1310753481' post='5357800'] We should make counterfit versions of this and take them to duel tournaments! (hehehehe) we would destroy them all! (whomp there it is!) [/quote] Hahaha I promise alot of your opponents will be saying WTF to this card's effect and explaining it to them will require alot of patience if your opponent is short tempered. [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1310754427' post='5357839'] If this monster's level is 4 or lower, halve this card's ATK and DEF. Get rid of this, this is only make this card UPed. And 1600 original ATK is pretty weak, give it at least 2000? [/quote] Wow this the 1st time someone actually called my card up'd I'm so happy for the 1st time I didn't make a op'd card (cough) anyway this card gains the [b]total level[/b] of the monster equipped to it doesn't mean this card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each monster rather then this card gains 100 ATK and DEF equal to the star level of each monster meaning if this card is equipped to two 4 star monsters this card gains 800 ATK and DEF. Sorry for the confusion I can understand why people make that mistake my OCG is equivalent to a Noobs and hopefully someone fixes it. Anyway as usual a rep for u and everyone else who read this card's lore. You all deserve it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Welche the crab Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Too complicated that it's unrealistic and therefore in the wrong section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 [quote name='Welche' timestamp='1310757849' post='5357990'] Too complicated that it's unrealistic and therefore in the wrong section. [/quote] Why unrealistic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Welche the crab Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Would Konami ever print a card that is this complicated? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 well... maybe... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 [quote name='Welche' timestamp='1310757849' post='5357990'] Too complicated that it's unrealistic and therefore in the wrong section. [/quote] lol hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha are you here just to troll me because theirs alot of cards with long complicated effects in the RC section. I like making these type of cards because I want to separate my cards form the usual/typical cards I hate seeing the same cards do the exact same thing over and over with a different drawback a little creativity never hurts. regardless I'll give you a rep. [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1310758727' post='5358046'] well... maybe... [/quote] I think Konami can make this card they have made alot of unique cards that do odd effects so I can't see why this card can't be a possibility. If they do I'll buy this card instantly to troll my opponents Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Welche the crab Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Then all of RC needs a reminder this is REALISTIC cards, not long effect cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 [quote name='LRPXD' timestamp='1310757442' post='5357968'] Hahaha I promise alot of your opponents will be saying WTF to this card's effect and explaining it to them will require alot of patience if your opponent is short tempered. [/quote] lol, we'd make them forfiet, we'd be unbeatable!! *fiend, fiend, fiend* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 16, 2011 Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 Sure i'll help fixing, you dont say you want to before This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Tribute Summoned. Once per turn, you can reveal this card from your hand and downgrade this card's Level by 1. If this monster's Level is 4 or lower, halve this card's ATK and DEF. When this card is Summoned, both you and your opponent must draw 3 cards. If either player draws a non-Monster Card, banish it. Then select 1 your unoccupied Spell and Trap Card Zone, all monsters drawn by this card's effect are placed on that Zone and treated as an Equip Cards and equipped to this card. [s]Monsters equipped to this card cannot activate it's effect(s), declare an attack, be Tributed, or be used as a material for a Fusion Summon or a Synchro Summon.[/s] Increase this card's ATK and DEF equal to the total Level of monsters equipped to this card x 100. This card gains the effect(s) of the top monster equipped to this monster, until the End Phase. During each End Phases, swap the top equipped card and the bottom card. No i understand you make this card's ATK was very weak, hope this is helps ^^. 1600 is now not UPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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