Glogatha Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/9523/442447x.jpg[/img] I really like this card, and as you should know, I'm terrible with new OCG! so corrections are more than welcome! Lore: When this card is activated, Both players must select and Banish 1 monster on their side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field: Monsters that are Summoned(including Special Summoned) are Banished until the turn player's forth Stand-by Phase then Summoned to the field. When this card is destroyed, all cards Banished by this cards effect are returned to their owners decks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 1st you should post this card's lore on the bottom of the card so it's easier for people to correct your OCG. I would fix your OCG but my OCG is atrocious. Anyway I like this card really does stall for 4 turns since this card's effect makes all monsters that were summoned banished for 4 turn so neither you or your opponent can't attack with monsters that were summoned unless it's a D.D Survivor I think or does it get banished again due to this card's effect O.O. Anyway the only way your opponent can attack if he/she controls another monster after this card's activation of banishing of 1 monster, or if your opponent controls a monster like Jinzo but that's seems somewhat likely. Mix this card with Gravity Bind or Limited Area B will make your opponent go insane lol 8.8/10 I like the idea great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 this is going to be utter hell on synchros because you didn't say ignoring the summoning conditions, so the synchro monsters can't come back that would be quite a difference 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 8/10 As the title says useful for stalling BTW Cool Picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Thx! XD if anyone has any OCG fixes, please tell me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1310667978' post='5355142'] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/6710/442447.jpg[/img] [/quote] I'll give the OCG a try. [spoiler=Lore]When this card is activated: Both players must select and banish 1 monster on their side of the field. While this card is face-up on the field: Monsters that are Summoned are banished until the turn player's fourth Standby Phase. When this card is destroyed, all cards banished by this effect are returned to their owner's Decks.[/spoiler] interesting card...But Mobius should be able to get around it. Set monster, Tribute Mobius, same ruling for Future Visions. This card will go bye bye before it touches the Monarch. Still, nice card 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lvl1hero Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 hmmm... i guess OCG is fine... ... and yeah it would be useful if you could copy and paste the effect/lore on this card right below it... so we, ourselves, could copy and paste it and possibly assist you in fixing the OCG... ... but dont you think 4 turns is too long?... heck... even 3 turns is too long... but at least 3 sounds more reasonable... ... i know its for stalling... but i dont know... ... seems... kinda unfair/OP... somewhere along that line... ... anyone's opinion on what i said?... agree or disagree... i'd just like to hear why... [u]Overall Rating[/u]: [b]4/5[/b] [i](for its creation)[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Thx, I'll fix what needs to be fixed, and thanks for the rating, it's the highest I've ever gotten![quote name='lvl1hero' timestamp='1310689286' post='5356214'] ... but dont you think 4 turns is too long?... heck... even 3 turns is too long... but at least 3 sounds more reasonable... [/quote] Lightforce Sword Banishes any card for 4 turns, doesn't it? I really see no problem with that... thx for the comment though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lvl1hero Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1310689631' post='5356219'] Thx, I'll fix what needs to be fixed, and thanks for the rating, it's the highest I've ever gotten! Lightforce Sword Banishes any card for 4 turns, doesn't it? I really see no problem with that... thx for the comment though! [/quote] ... yeah but... that [b]Lightforce Sword[/b] banishes just [b]1[/b] card... this one banishes [i][u][b]every[/b][/u][/i] monster that hits the field for [u]4 turns[/u]... and it gets to banish [u]one more card[/u] when its played (would also require that you have at least one monster on the field yourself to activate but thats a small price)... ... its a great card i tell you that... never seen a card like this before... thats why its a bit on the edge with its effect... ... there are also a lot of cards that gets boosts and spells that can take advantage of this card... so thats why i mentioned the 4 turn being too long... ... if anything... this card should be limited to just 1... and even then 4 turns is way too long... ... besides... the card stats that [b]only[/b] when it gets "[u]destroyed[/u]"... both players will then get their banished cards back... ... there are cards like [b]Giant Trunade[/b] that can bypass things like this... [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Tyranno_Infinity"]Tyranno Infinity[/url] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Return"]Return[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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