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[Alcander's Back] Something I came up with [New Set-Updated 16/07/11]

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▼AlcaNdeR▼ Newbie

▼AlcaNdeR▼

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Hi, well ive just decided to return to YCM and I made this card something random, dont know why but i also been working in a set and this one is part of that set so im going to edit this post by adding new cards. Enjoy, feel free to CnC

BTW-Images by me.

[center][IMG]http://i753.photobucket.com/albums/xx171/AlcaidPB/Biosuit.png[/IMG]

[spoiler=-Lore-]
2 Machine-Type Tuners + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.
As long as this card is face-up: Place 1 counter on this card each time a monster you control is banished. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect: You can remove 1 counter from this card instead. Once per turn: You can banish 1 monster you control; select 1 Machine-Type monster from your Banished Zone. This card can activate the selected card's effect(s) as it's own effect(s) until the End Phase. If this card is destroyed by battle: Special Summon 1 Synchro Material Monster you used to Synchro Summon this card; its effect is negated. When this card is destroyed: It is banished.[/spoiler]

[IMG]http://i753.photobucket.com/albums/xx171/AlcaidPB/Ignition.png[/IMG]

[spoiler=-Lore-]
This card can only be equipped to "Biosuit Overlord". Once per turn: Banish up to 3 cards in your Graveyard. Increase "Biosuit Overlord's" ATK equal the number of cards you banished this way x 300 until the End Phase. If "Biosuit Overlord" is the only monster you control: It inflicts piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. If you have no cards in your Graveyard: Destroy this card and "Biosuit Overlord".[/spoiler][/center]


[spoiler=Gear Maker-EN002]
[center][IMG]http://i753.photobucket.com/albums/xx171/AlcaidPB/GearMaker-1.png[/IMG]

-Lore-
When this card is Summoned: You can banish 1 monster from your hand. During your next Standby Phase: Special Summon the banished card; its effect is negated. Destroy the monster you Special Summoned due to this effect during your next End Phase; destroy this card. When this card is destroyed by this effect: Add it to your Deck; shuffle the Deck [/center][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Cyber Junk Bounder-EN001]
[center][IMG]http://i753.photobucket.com/albums/xx171/AlcaidPB/CyberJunkBounder.png[/IMG][/center]

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-Lore-[/center][center]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Machine-Type Monsters you control and Banish up to 4 monsters in your Graveyard: This card's ATK is equal the number of your banished monsters x600. Once per turn, when your opponent Special Summons a monster: you can add 1 of your Banished monsters to your Deck, if you do, destroy the target monster. During each turn, declare 1 card's name. Banish all cards with this name in both player's Graveyard. During your opponent's Battle Phase, you can Tribute this face-up card to destroy 1 monster on the field and inflict damage to both players Life Points equal to the ATK of this card. Destroy this card if you have no cards in hand.[/center][/spoiler]

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ragnarok1945 Newbie

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"During your opponent's Battle Phase, you can Tribute this face-up card to destroy 1 monster on the field and inflict damage to both players equal the ATK of this card"

This is just a watered down form of Ring of Destruction, personally that trap effect is better than this card's effect here

"During each turn, declare 1 card's name. Banish all cards with this name in both player's Graveyard" <---Personally I don't feel that effect is necessary, makes it a bit broken

8/10

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okay, here goes.
Your card: [b]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Machine-Type Monster you control and banish up to 4 monsters in your Graveyard. This card's ATK is equal the number of your banished monsters x600. When your opponent Special Summons a monster you can add 1 of your banished monsters to your Deck, if you do, destroy that card and shuffle your Deck. During each turn, declare 1 card's name. Banish all cards with this name in both player's Graveyard. During your opponent's Battle Phase, you can Tribute this face-up card to destroy 1 monster on the field and inflict damage to both players equal the ATK of this card. Destroy this card if you have no cards in hand.

[/b]With fixes: [b]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Machine-Type [u]Monsters[/u] you control and [u]Banishing up to 4 monsters in your Graveyard :[/u] This cards ATK is equal to the number of Banished cards x600. When your opponent Special Summons a monster: [u]You may add 1 of your Banished monsters to your deck, if you do, destroy the target monster.[/u] During each turn: Declare 1 cards name. Banish all monsters with that name in both players Graveyards. During your opponents Battle Phase: you can tribute this face-up card to destroy 1 monster on the field and inflict damage[u] to both players Life Points equal to the ATK of this card.[/u] Destroy this card if you have no cards in your hand.

[/b]Whew! well thats what I see, there may be more, but to me, this looks fine!
Good luck, keep posting!

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BFG Studios Newbie

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i really like the second card, the zombie

Here's an OCG fix if you want:
[b]
When this card is Summned: You can banish 1 monster from your hand. During your next Standby Phase: Special Summon the banished card; its effect is negated. Destroy the monster you Special Summoned due to this effect during your next End Phase; destroy this card. When this card is destroyed by this effect: [u]Add it to your Deck.[/u][/b]

The underlined part is where I want you to add something:
Tell the user of this card where to put the card in their deck, not just puck it in your deck...
Choose either
- "Add it to the top of your Deck."
- "Add it to the bottom of your Deck."
- "Add it to your Deck; shuffle the Deck."

I like the card either way
8.5 / 10

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[b]Tribute this face-up[/b] card to destroy 1 monster on the field and inflict damage to both players Life Points equal to the ATK of this card. [b]Destroy[/b] this card if you have no cards in hand.

This card is already destroyed when you activate the first effect, thats what i mean. So the last sentence is not needed

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ragnarok1945 Newbie

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[quote name='▼AlcaNdeR▼' timestamp='1310829981' post='5360315']
@Maha Guns. Yeah I know but the Tribute thing is optional [b] you can Tribute...[/b] so if you didnt Tribute the monster, anyways it will be destroyed if you have no cards in hand.

@Ragnarok. Thanks for the advice you're right.
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good you made the modification, I can raise my rate to 9.1/10 now

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[quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1310878652' post='5362133']
hehe, alcander, you should always ask BFG for OCG corrections, he's never wrong. lol :lol:
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i can make mistakes... i had to fix something just now
@sky - Thanks for the complements anyhow... im glad i feel important lol
@AlcaNdeR - Still liking the cards, keep em coming... if you want lol ;)

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