BFG Studios Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 I felt that Demons could be used to make some good effect: So i made 3 cards... 1 simple, 1 advanced-ish, and 1 just an effect, but still awesome ... Hope you like! [b][size="4"][spoiler=EDITED! --- Collective Power Soldier --- Simple Effect] [img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/5217/390021e.jpg[/img] Lore: If this card destroys a monster your opponent controls by battle: This card can attack once again in a row. If this card inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points during the second attack: Gain Life Points equal to the same amount. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Dark Crafting Master --- Advanced Effect] [img]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/2952/390021.jpg[/img] Lore: During your opponent's Main Phase 1: Your opponent must discard 1 card from their hand to conduct their Battle Phase this turn. When your opponent's monster declares an attack: You can banish 1 card from your hand; negate the attack. This card is destroyed if this effect is activated more than once per turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=EDITED! --- Psychopathic Slayer --- It's an Effect...] [img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/2952/390021.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, if this card destroys a monster your opponent controls: You can pay 800 Life Points; destroy 1 Set Spell or Trap card your opponent controls. If a Spell Card is destroyed due to this effect: This card can attack again in the same turn. [/size] [/spoiler] [/b] All artwork by JazinKay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 great cards, awesome pics, Great OCG(as always) I love Collective Power Soldier! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 thanks (for the comment and complement) I like power soldier too... mainly because the effect is simple, yet affective ... then again, i like all my cards lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Wow, awesome 9/10 [quote=BFG Studios]This card can attack once again in a row.[/quote] Shouldn't that be: "This card can attack one more time."? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 [quote name='Varion' timestamp='1310712430' post='5356994'] Shouldn't that be: "This card can attack one more time."? [/quote] well... i was using the new OCG, and i got this part from "Kachi Kochi Dragon", an Xyz Monster http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Kachi_Kochi_Dragon [i]2 Level 4 monsters Once per turn, if this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to allow this card to [b]attack once again in a row[/b].[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Varion, Varion, Varion... Haven't we learned not to correct BFG's OCG? Its almost impossible! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1310713137' post='5357008'] Varion, Varion, Varion... Haven't we learned not to correct BFG's OCG? Its almost impossible! [/quote] [s]o please, i suck[/s] lol, thanks for the complement! i swear i make mistakes too, and i listen to what people have to say about my ocg... i'll review it an see if im right or wrong i am happy when i'm right tho ... lol im sure you all will learn correct ocg... i know it took me a while... i swear i got better when the ":" and ";" came out into the ocg tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 for power soldier there's already cards that can do the same thing, I recommend you add another effect to it Crafting Master on the other hand is much better for constantly making your opponent lose cards, but I still don't see it lasting on the field very long 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Sorry, I'm not familiar wit Zexal OCG, only with the previous seasons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 1 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1310729274' post='5357174'] for power soldier there's already cards that can do the same thing, I recommend you add another effect to it Crafting Master on the other hand is much better for constantly making your opponent lose cards, but I still don't see it lasting on the field very long 8.4/10 [/quote] 2 [quote name='Varion' timestamp='1310729704' post='5357181'] Sorry, I'm not familiar wit Zexal OCG, only with the previous seasons. [/quote] 1. thanks for the rate... i kind of knew that these wouldn't last for very long, but i just hoped for the better... I'll look into changing its stats 2. i kind of expected you not to be, since zexal JUST came out... either way, thanks for the suggestion before though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 2ND CARD is like my card long ago. Which i like it, First card seems, fine . Yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1310754219' post='5357831'] 2ND CARD is like my card long ago. Which i like it, First card seems, fine . Yeah [/quote] great minds think alike, huh? lol glad you like my cards anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 added 1 new card, just to let y'all know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
â–¼AlcaNdeRâ–¼ Posted July 16, 2011 Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 I like them all For the soldier monster: [b]If this card sends a monster your opponent controls to the Graveyard as a result of battle[/b] - If this card destroys a monster your opponent controls.. I think Anyways, pictures are good, i like the effects too pretty useful cards. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 16, 2011 Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 the 3rd card seems fine, 700 is to cheap. 800 maybe, 100 make it difference. The rest is great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 ok i changed it, and yes, 800 does make this card different... and i also kinda wanna know whether the stats on the last card is good or not (OP'd ?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 16, 2011 Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 it not attack once again in a row but gain 1 additional attack. Im rather confused, but i think that still acceptable = balance, We have MST/ Shrink and etc. They can still chain this, so it is alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 ok... i guess the "in a row" ocg doesn't fit this card, and i think ur right with yours... i'll change that soon thanks for liking it anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 16, 2011 Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 You welcome BFG ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 any other comments? bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Wow, this just got shoved off the first page... lol but, seriously, any other comments? or are these card perfect! kidding of course, but comment bump BTW I updated the Lore on Collective Power Soldier... please review! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 for Slayer given that it can attack again, that's fine, but I'm unsure if you want to allow it to attack directly or not 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Hey! just cause the cards name is psycopathic Slayer, dosen't mean the pic has to be a girl! lol I love this card! but... can you attack, pay, destroy, attack agian, pay, destroy, ect. ect. ect.? if yes, this card could clear the field and attack directly,in 1 turn, which may be OP'ed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phœnīcius Infīnius VII Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Just fix the simple yet annoying OCG errors, otherwise they seem pretty balanced IMO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1310881952' post='5362304'] Hey! just cause the cards name is psycopathic Slayer, dosen't mean the pic has to be a girl! lol can you attack, pay, destroy, attack agian, pay, destroy, ect. ect. ect.? if yes, this card could clear the field and attack directly,in 1 turn, which may be OP'ed... [/quote] [quote name='SSxMINI LUCAS' timestamp='1310883507' post='5362370'] Just fix the simple yet annoying OCG errors, otherwise they seem pretty balanced IMO [/quote] @sky - lol... i get it ... ... anyway, i'll enter a "once per turn" in there so that doesn't happen... thanks for pointing that out. @SS - Can you point out the simple, yet annoying, OCG errors... i'd really like to know what they are, [i]please[/i]? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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