Omniwarrior Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Here are Bakugan cards! [img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/9587/432133.jpg[/img] [img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/9587/432133.jpg[/img] /img560.imageshack.us/img560/1152/432133k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/9587/432133.jpg[/img] [img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/9587/432133.jpg[/img] [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/9587/432133.jpg[/img] That's all for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Okay, let's take a look a these. First off, get your cards from your other Bakugan topic and edit them into this one. When you do, I'll consider reviewing them. Second, Tigrerra, or whatever she's called, doesn't have her img code complete. Make sure you copy the whole url when you click on the card. Images are...kinda junky here. Drago's isn't his original form, I don't think. Preyas and the rest, excluding Skyress, all have white backgrounds. Try searching on DeviantArt for better pics, including Sky, who only has that blue-green background. Types...okay, Fake Types are generally hated upon. Especially since I don't see any real direct support other than Drago's effect, which needs some fixing of its own (explained below). If you do plan on making this into a big, well-supported Bakugan set, I guess I can deal with it. But, give them each a real Type. Preyas could be Aqua or Fiend, or even Fish, Gorem is either Rock or Warrior, and the rest are pretty obvious. Then, type in the "Type" box on the Card Maker "(Real Type) / Bakugan". OCG is better than some, but that isn't saying much. I'll try to help you fix 'em up below: Drago's equipping of any monster in your hand or [b][i]D[/b][/i]eck (hint) is a little OverPowered. If I put Hydranoid on him, then pay 500 [b][i]L[/b][/i]ife [b][i]P[/b][/i]oints (hint again), I've practically put my opponent in check on the first turn. Also, I'm pretty sure "can" is the word in YGO, not "may". But, that's probably just my obsessive side talking. If anything, I'd say make him more interesting. The only incentive I have to use his effect is to Special Summon. For example, you could increase his ATK and/or DEF by the Level of the equipped monster x(times) whatever. Preyas is probably the best here. Remember though, Attributes (DARK, LIGHT, WATER, EARTH) are in all caps. Try giving him a special, but not crazily powerful effect for when he's a certain Attribute. For example, this is what one of said effects might look like: "While this card is a WATER monster, it cannot be destroyed by Monster Effects." Tiger I can't see. Sky is "meh". Her effect is just WAY over-the-top. If you have Drago and her out, whom Drago can Spec. Summon as soon as he's brought out, Sky becomes a Blue-Eyes with only 500 Life Points and a pinch of luck. Either tone down the effect, give it an exception(like Drago having to be on your opponent's side of the field), or change it. Also, when referencing another card by name, it should be in quotes, as in "Drago". Gorem is...okay-ish. 4000 DEF is just wayy too much. Tone it down to 3000, at most. Also, his last sentence should be "This card can only be destroyed while in Defense Position." Not "DEF Position". Hydra has a few problems of his own. The first bit is okay, but when he inflicts the 1000 damage, you have to specify the type of damage. Here, it would be Effect Damage. As in "inflict 1000 points of Effect Damage to its controller." I'll give you a 5.5/10. I kinda like these, but they need to be done better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 I see a lot OCG errors here and there, Gorem is WAY, Way overpowered DEF: 4000 level 6 6/10 This needs work, especially OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmperorNiro Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Agreed with Knight and Varion, learn. you willg e tit someday 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 OMG. Bad. OCG: acceptable Effects: OPed. (most of em) Pics: Get the f*** OFF of google and on to Deviantart. 4/10. (I dont even LIKE the newer bakugans...why am i even on this thread..) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Avoid using pics with blank/plain backgrounds. I know these are Bakugan, but you're making them into yugioh cards so change the their types from Bakugan to Dragon, Beast etc. When you have card names in the description, use quotation marks. You have some OCG errors: deck >> Deck life points >> Life Points graveyard >> Graveyard Attributes are written in all caps eg. DARK In cards such as Skyress with similar Description change "this monster" to "this card" When you're talking about positions, its written as Attack Position, or Defence Position. your gorem is overpowered. 4000 LP is too much. In hydranoid, the ocg should be "The attacking monster is also destroyed." That pretty much covers the basics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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