Kuroda Kaito Posted July 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311195384' post='5372406'] for Shining Guardian "for each Shine Counter on this card, you lose 500 LP and you can take 1 Equip Spell Card from your Deck and equip to this card" <---you need to state WHEN you lose those LP, is it during the end phase? last effect is similar to Shinato's effect, which is all right, nothing too new 8.3/10 [/quote] Well thanks for the feedback, very thank you [quote name='Neos the Ancient' timestamp='1311196457' post='5372486'] If you used an actual Yu-Gi-Oh card template, I'd think they'd be better. [/quote] Well but i think they look great in this new card template, that give this Set something different from the others you know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 3 new cards added, please comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 Come on, i need comment to improve my OCG, and 2 new cards added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 21, 2011 Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 put a new next to the 5 added cards so we know where to look Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311269511' post='5374633'] put a new next to the 5 added cards so we know where to look [/quote] OH thanks for the advice, fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 Gamma Break is really boring for just the 500 atk/def gain you should give it another effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311310403' post='5376580'] Gamma Break is really boring for just the 500 atk/def gain you should give it another effect [/quote] Oh well cause i cant think of anything while i made that, guess that i've to think more , anyway thanks for your feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 New card added and fixed "Gamma Break" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2011 Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 Blazing Ruler is ok except for 1 thing "When this card is selected as an attack target, you can remove 1 Monster in your Spell/Trap Card Zone to negate the attack" <---that effect should be limited to once per turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311366206' post='5378191'] Blazing Ruler is ok except for 1 thing "When this card is selected as an attack target, you can remove 1 Monster in your Spell/Trap Card Zone to negate the attack" <---that effect should be limited to once per turn [/quote] Oh thanks ragnarok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 2 new cards added, go to the first my son Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 "When this card is destroy by your opponent's Spell or Trap Card during its activation, banish this card" <--that sentence I don't see the point for Return from the dead, you didn't say it's a continuous, so that means it lasts only 1 turn. If say you activate this card then your opponent activates MST or something, it'll destroy this card and the whole effect becomes useless therefore that sentence should have been like the FIRST sentence or something 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311744940' post='5390893'] "When this card is destroy by your opponent's Spell or Trap Card during its activation, banish this card" <--that sentence I don't see the point [b]Damn my stupid OCG (totally suck at OCG ) well i meant that "When this card is destroyed by your opponent's Spell or Trap card, this card will be remove from play instead"[/b] for Return from the dead, you didn't say it's a continuous, so that means it lasts only 1 turn. If say you activate this card then your opponent activates MST or something, it'll destroy this card and the whole effect becomes useless[b]Oh i get it, thanks, will fix it [/b] therefore that sentence should have been like the FIRST sentence or something 8/10 [b]Thanks for rating [/b] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 let me know when you do, along with the new card additions, k? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311808469' post='5393203'] let me know when you do, along with the new card additions, k? [/quote] OK i will Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted July 28, 2011 Report Share Posted July 28, 2011 Template is awesome!! Try using the New OCG then I'll think of giving you suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2011 [quote name='ｔｒｉｎｉｔｙＳＯＵＬ' timestamp='1311816510' post='5393723'] Template is awesome!! Try using the New OCG then I'll think of giving you suggestions [/quote] well i currently use the new OCG now but still not getting used to it, well will practice more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2011 3 new cards added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon7OP Posted July 28, 2011 Report Share Posted July 28, 2011 They seem to work well together, and look like a powerful archetype. The custom card designs are sweet, and the images are good. Thing is, it's difficult for me to review them while they look like this. They are awesome, but they aren't Yu-Gi-Oh cards(at least in looks), and it throws me off. They all look like good cards, and aside from some minor OCG, they seem fine. But I would suggest changing the border colors so tha it's easier to tell different kinds of cards apart. The Synchros aren't easily discernible from the regular monsters, and it's fairly easy to miss tha in the effect descriptions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 28, 2011 Report Share Posted July 28, 2011 Squid's effect is meh for just preventing synchros from being destroyed in battle, had hoped for more Shooter's effect is barely any different from Brain Control, unimpressive Holy Sword is a little like Nightmare Steel Cage's effect to some extent, is that where you pulled it from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 [quote name='Dragon7OP' timestamp='1311882249' post='5396164'] They seem to work well together, and look like a powerful archetype. The custom card designs are sweet, and the images are good. Thing is, it's difficult for me to review them while they look like this. They are awesome, but they aren't Yu-Gi-Oh cards(at least in looks), and it throws me off. They all look like good cards, and aside from some minor OCG, they seem fine. But I would suggest changing the border colors so tha it's easier to tell different kinds of cards apart. The Synchros aren't easily discernible from the regular monsters, and it's fairly easy to miss tha in the effect descriptions. [/quote] Well this is Realistic Card so i'd like to try something realistic and i want them to be special so i use Japanese then i put the English lore under the card to make the different [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311883520' post='5396238'] Squid's effect is meh for just preventing synchros from being destroyed in battle, had hoped for more Shooter's effect is barely any different from Brain Control, unimpressive Holy Sword is a little like Nightmare Steel Cage's effect to some extent, is that where you pulled it from? [/quote] Oh sorry for disappoint you, i was out of idea but i'll try to improve the lore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 Are you selling this card design? I'll DEFINATELY buy a few cards done in this format. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 [quote name=' Kuroda Kaito' timestamp='1311901998' post='5397091'] Well this is Realistic Card so i'd like to try something realistic and i want them to be special so i use Japanese then i put the English lore under the card to make the different Oh sorry for disappoint you, i was out of idea but i'll try to improve the lore [/quote] for Holy Sword I'm not saying that effect is crappy, I just wanted to know if you were inspired by that Nightmare Steel Cage's effect for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yinwang Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 those are severely awesome looking, but they dont start looking like yugioh cards, as well as the last two are "gundam 0" [url=http://www.cheappoloshirtsnow.com/]Cheap Polo Shirts[/url]|[url=http://www.cheappoloshirtsnow.com/mens-big-pony-collection-c-34.html] Work Polo Shirts[/url]|[url=http://www.cheappoloshirtsnow.com/mens-ralph-lauren-shorts-c-39.html] Sport Polo Shirts[/url]|[url=http://www.buyguccishop.com/]Cheap Gucci Shoes[/url]|[url=http://www.buyguccishop.com/gucci-boots-c-59.html]Cheap Gucci Boots[/url]|[url=http://www.buyguccishop.com/gucci-sneakers-c-54.html]Cheap Gucci Sneakers[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 [quote name='OmegaWave' timestamp='1311904453' post='5397229'] Are you selling this card design? I'll DEFINATELY buy a few cards done in this format. [/quote] Well i'm not planning to sell the template but i'll think about that [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311911496' post='5397660'] for Holy Sword I'm not saying that effect is crappy, I just wanted to know if you were inspired by that Nightmare Steel Cage's effect for it [/quote] Well yes i was inspire by that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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