Eternal Desecration Set

[monkeyofevil]

My first cards. Please review, although i admit some may be overpowered.

 

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Shadowknight - The card ive been dreaming of making for 5 years. What i wanted was an unstoppable beast, but thats no fun so i toned it down. tell me if its still too strong.

 

blade of eternity- had to have a way of summoning shadowknight to make it playable.

 

dragon warrior lv4- a basic run of the mill monster. not too great, but not too bad either.

 

dragon warrior lv 7- just a stronger version of dw4 with an added effect.

 

dragon warrior 10 - a much more beast version of dw4, with a wicked avatar like effect.

 

card revival - like monster reborn with a cost but works on any card. this one might be too strong.

 

sirhc, sacred dragon of fire - a dragon warrior support card. also is the only card right now that works with shadowknights effect. good attack but defense is its weakness.

 

so tell me what you think. i think its allright but thats just admiration of my own work and holds no merit in the real world.

[Junk Raver]

Welcome to the site ^_^

 

IMG tags are better to use, as you get more comments, and its less hassle for the viewers.

 

There are Grammar errors and OCG errors in your cards

 

But do not worry, everyone, or most, start off that way

 

In time you get better ^_^

 

Good effort ^_^

[RestLess-BoTics]

You did a great job in effort for these cards.

Once you improve on the quality and uniqueness of the images, the uniqueness fo the effects, and the grammar, your cards will be about perfect. Keep up the excellent work. :)

[monkeyofevil]

thanks for the feedback. i know i can change a few things to make it look more like a real card grammar wise, but what is an OCG error. I know OCG is the format used in japan but I dont know how to incorporate that into my cards. That is if im thinking of the right OCG.