Four-Dimensional Cards

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[spoiler='Semi-rant on being ignored']So, a while ago, I posted a TL;DR of cards as my first cards with images. I got very few replies. Then, when I posted a single, I got lots of replies. So, OCG updated of the first group of the first cards![/spoiler]

These cards are based on the concepts and structures of four-dimensional space.

[spoiler='4-Dimensional Space']
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If this card would be destroyed or leave the field due to the effect of a card, you can banish one card in your hand and one card you control to negate the effect of the card and destroy it. Each player can control up to 10 Monster Cards and Spell or Trap Cards. If this card leaves the field, each player destroys cards they control until they control 5 or less Monster Cards and 5 or less Spell or Trap Cards.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Tesseractal Arena']
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You can only activate this card while you control a face-up "4-Dimensional Space". If this card is face-up on the field but you do not control a face-up "4-Dimensional Space", destroy this card. Players may target monsters they control for attacks, except the attacking monster, in addition to monsters thier opponent(s) control.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Endless Jar - Klein's Bottle']
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You can only activate this card while you control a face-up "4-Dimensional Space". If this card is face-up but you do not control a face-up "4-Dimensional Space", destroy this card. Neither player takes battle damage from battles involving the equipped monster. The equipped monster is not destroyed as a result of battle (Damage calculation is applied normally). When this card leaves the field, destroy the equipped monster and all monsters you control, then take damage equal to the total ATK of all monsters that battled the equipped monster.
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[Glogatha]

hmm, decent, but the first one could use a better pic! btw, no need to feel ignored, add me as a friend so I can keep up with you and post on your stuff!

[TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di )]

[u][i][b]Tesseract[/b][/i][/u] Brings me back to 6th grade
Creative but yeah 4-D needs a better picture

[Wave_Sine]

If there were a good pic on the Internet that conveyed the idea, I would use it. But for now, mediocre drawing skills and Paint.NET skills will have to suffice. Sorry.

Any comments on OCG, rulings trouble, or other issues?

[TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di )]

When you attack your own monsters you still take damage?

[ragnarok1945]

for the first two, unless you drew those via paint, the pics suck

4 Dimension: Great, Seal of Orichalcos effect with minor modifications, I'm not impressed

for Tesseractal I'm unsure what you plan to use that effect for..........

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[quote name='Deschwitat1170' timestamp='1311262434' post='5374273']
When you attack your own monsters you still take damage?
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Yes. That's what happens with Confusion Chaff, so that's what should happen here.


First was drawn by hand then edited in Paint.NET. It's the starfield, isn't it? That's what lowers the overall quality of the image.

Second is a wireframe of a tesseract that I found with Google.

Anyone with more constructive ratings and OCG fixes?

[Jarl Ballin]

Yeah the first card's artwork, even if it's handrawn, kinda sucks. (LOL banish). I find it's effect interesting, but is is practical?

Now onto the second. You can only activate it if there's a "4-dimensional space" on the field, but if there's not it's destroyed...if it's face up (face-up=activated so LOL at the redundancy). And again I find it's effect intresting, but is it practical?

And the third. (LOL again at redundancy). Nobody takes battle damage yet battle damage is applied normally (LOL at more redundancy). So if it's destroyed...life pretty much sucks for you.

Overall it's a nice idea (the 4th dimension and all that jazz) but executed poorly. Keep trying, believe in the power of friendship, and you should have some cool cards.

[Wave_Sine]

Both the Tesseract card and the Klein Bottle card are written with a "Toon"-style clause, that destroys them if "4-Dimensional Space' leaves the field.

Yeah, the Klein Bottle is an OCG mess, with a combination of new and antiquated OCG.

Rating, comments, OCG fixes? (I've heard enough about the art on '4-Space', btw)

[Wave_Sine]

bump

[ragnarok1945]

oh yeah, for the Tesseractal Arena cube picture

did you take that idea off the Captain America film?

[Wave_Sine]

No, I found it online. Like, 2 or so years ago. Or at leas when these cards were first posted, which was about a year ago. Nothing but the wording of the cards has changed since the first posting.

[Kazekage dragon]

It is a very strange concept but it seems cool. I can see what you mean about the cards working like Toon World related cards. One thing I really don't understand is T Arena when you are saying about targeting your monsters or your opponents monsters, Confusion Shaft for both players? Also EJK Bottle is something I would never consider using unless I had a PMD on the field because that would just kill me! Other than that, the cards do seem usable and very interesting! I'd love to see more of these cards!
And don't worry, you're not the only one who gets ignored a lot, at least you have comments; Imagine a thread with 25 replies... And they're all bumps...