[♣Toot♣] Tinkering Fury [19/??]

[·Toot]

[center][font="Courier New"][color="#00bfff"]This Is A New Archetype (That I Most Likely Won't Finish). [/color][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#00bfff"]Their Are Bits & Bots. If You Haven't Guessed by Now, They Are All Machine-Type.[/color][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#00bfff"]My Intention For Them Is To Be Some Kind Of Bounce Deck.[/color][/font][/center][center] [/center][center] [/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://i1024.photobucket.com/albums/y308/Toot4/475e9258.png[/img][/font][/center][center] [/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Monsters][/font][/center][center] [/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Bot Monsters][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=TOOT1-EN001][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/8157/242084z.jpg[/img][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Lore][color="#000080"]If this face-up card is returned to your hand: Special Summon 1 Level 3 "Bot" monsters from your hand. Send this card from your hand to the Graveyard: Increase the ATK all face-up "Bot" monsters you control by 300.[/color][/spoiler][/spoiler][/font][/center][center] [/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=TOOT1-EN002][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/9122/242084a.jpg[/img][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Lore][color="#008080"]If control a face-up monster that has "Bot" in it's name: Special Summon this card from your hand; select 1 card on the field and return it to the owner's hand. Once per turn while you control a face-up "Bot" monster: Inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card in their hand. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: Add it to your Deck Instead; then shuffle it.[/color][/spoiler][/spoiler][/font][/center][center] [/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=TOOT1-EN007][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/4853/242084.jpg[/img][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][/spoiler][/font][/center][center] [/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=TOOT-EN008][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/4681/242084p.jpg[/img][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Lore][/font][/center][center][color="#00ffff"]1 "Bit Artillery" + 1 or more non-Tuner Synchro monsters[/color][/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#00ffff"]When this card is Synchro Summoned: Return up to 2 Level 3 or lower Machine-Type monsters in your Graveyard to your Deck to have this card gain ATK equal to the combined ATK of the returned monsters. Once per turn, If your opponent activates a Spell, Trap or Effect Monster's effect: Return 1 card you control to your hand to negate and destroy it.[/color][/font][/spoiler][/spoiler][/center][center] [/center][center] [/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=TOOT-EN009][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/1905/242084q.jpg[/img][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Lore][/font][font="Courier New"][color="#f4a460"]1 Synchro Tuner monster + 2 or more non-tuner Synchro monsters[/color][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#f4a460"]This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. When this card is Synchro Summoned: Return 3 Machine-Type monsters to your hand and have this card gain ATK equal to the combined ATK of the returned monsters. If your opponent activates a Spell, Trap or Effect Monster's effect: Send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard; negate and destroy it. Once per turn, you can activate one of the following effects:[/color][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#f4a460"]Discard 1 "Bit" monster: Destroy 1 card your opponent controls.[/color][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#f4a460"]Discard 1 "Bot" monster: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from either player's Graveyard.[/color][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][/spoiler][/spoiler][/font][/center][center] [/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=TOOT-EN012][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/4853/242084.jpg[/img][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Lore][color="#a0522d"]Once per turn, if this card were to be destroyed, it is not destroyed. If this card is sent to the Graveyard: Return up to 2 cards on the field to the owner's hand; add this card to your Deck and shuffle it.[/color][/spoiler][/spoiler][/font][/center][center] [/center][center][spoiler=TOOT1-EN013][/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4853/242084.jpg[/img][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Lore][color="#ff0000"]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by its own effect. You can add 2 "Bot" monsters from your field or Graveyard to your Deck: Special Summon this card from your hand. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Once per turn: Add 1 face-up "Bot" or "Bit" monster to your hand; return two cards your opponent controls to his/her hand. If a "Bot monster you control is returned to your hand; inflict 600 damage to your opponent.[/color][/spoiler][/spoiler][/font][/center][center] [/center][center][font="Courier New"][/spoiler][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Bit Monsters][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=TOOT1-EN004][img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/7305/242084f.jpg[/img][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][/spoiler][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=TOOT1-EN005][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/9729/242084e.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Toot1-EN006][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/4853/242084.jpg[/img][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Lore][/font][font="Courier New"]1 "Bit" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Machine-Type monsters[/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"]When this card is Synchro Summoned: Select 1 card you control and 1 card your opponent controls; return the selected cars to the owners hand. If this card is returned to your Extra Deck: Special Summon 1 Synchro Material Monster used to summon this card. If this card is sent to the Graveyard: Add 2 Machine-Type monsters in your Graveyard to your Deck and shuffle it; Draw 1 card.[/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler][/font][/center][center][spoiler=Tinker Monsters][/center][center][spoiler=TOOT1-EN015][/center][center][img]http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4853/242084.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/center][center][spoiler=TOOT1-EN016][/center][center][img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/7523/242084w.jpg[/img][/SPOILER][/center][center][spoiler=TOOT1-EN017][/center][center][img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/1905/242084q.jpg[/img][/center][center][spoiler=Lore][/center][center]Cannot be Set. If this card is Tribute Summoned by Tributing a "Tinker" monster: Add1 card you control to your Deck; destroy 1 card on the field. When a card is added to your Deck or hand: This card gains 200 ATK and DEF.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/center][center][spoiler=TOOT-EN018][/center][center][img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/4853/242084.jpg[/img][/center][center][spoiler=Lore]2 "Tinker" or "Bot" Monsters[/center][center]This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by returning the above cards you control to the Deck. (You do not use "Polymerization".) When this card is Fusion Summoned: Select up to 2 cards on the field; add the selected cards to the owner's Deck or hand. Once per turn, you can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Tinker" monster from your hand.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/center][center][spoiler=TOOT1-EN019][/center][center][img]http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/4894/242084c.jpg[/img][/center][center][spoiler=Lore]1 "Tuner Mercenary" + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters[/center][center]This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. When this card is Synchro Summoned: Add 2 level 3 or lower Machine-Type monsters in your Graveyard to your Deck; this card gains ATK equal to the combined monster's ATK. Once per turn, send 1 card from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard: Select monster in either player's Graveyard; this card's effect is the same as the selected monster.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/center][center][/spoiler][/spoiler][/center][center] [/center][center] [/center][center] [/center][center] [/center][center][spoiler=Spells][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=TOOT1-EN011][img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9729/242084e.jpg[/img][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Lore][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#4b0082"]Equip to a level 3 or lower "Bot" monster you control. The equipped monster can attack your opponent directly. If the equipped monster were to be destroyed, you can send this card to the Graveyard instead.[/color][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][/spoiler][/spoiler][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=TOOT1-EN014][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/1194/242084l.jpg[/img][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Lore][/font][font="Courier New"]When a card is returned to a player's hand, place 1 Lug Counter on this card. You can remove 3 Lug Counters from this card; activate one of the following effects:[/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"]Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Machine-Type monster from your Deck.[/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"]Return 1 card on the field to the owner's hand.[/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"]All Machine-Type monsters you control gain 1000 ATK until the End Phase.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][/spoiler][/font][/center][center] [/center][center] [/center][center] [/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=Traps][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=TOOT1-EN003][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/4853/242084.jpg[/img][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][/spoiler][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][spoiler=TOOT1-EN010][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/4853/242084.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][/spoiler][/font][/center][center] [/center][center] [/center][center] [/center][center] [/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#ff00ff"]How Are They?[/color][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#ffa500"]OCG Fixes Appreciated[/color][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#8b0000"]I Give Reps For Constructive Feedback.[/color][/font][/center][center] [/center][center] [/center][center][color="#808000"]Credits Go To[/color][/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#696969"]JazinKay[/color][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#696969"]HPDoom[/color][/font][/center][center][font="Courier New"][color="#696969"]♣Toot♣[/color][/font][/center]

[·Toot]

bump

[Knight of Emotion]

I like how the effects involve returning cards to their hands and stuff. Those kinds of effects can make a game longer.
I'm not the kind that's the best with OCG errors...sorry if I can't point out minor OCG errors (If there are).
But overall... I like the cards. 9/10..

[·Toot]

thnx for the feed back

[NickiMinaj]

[b][color="#FF00FF"]I really like the set, especially what you've done with separate "Bits" and "Bots." But, if you have a Bit-Bot Master, I would suggest changing the two or more non-synchro tuner monsters to 1 "Bit" Tuner Monster and 1 "Bot" Tuner Monster. Also, maybe change Buzz Bot or Pup Bot to a Tuner, so that you could have at least one lower leveled "Bot" Tuner monster in your arsenal. This way you can have actual Bits and Bots in your Bit-Bot Master.

Also, if you're going to use Bit Artillery to summon Embezzle Bot, only to require another Synchro Tuner monster to summon Bit-Bot Master, shouldn't Embezzle Bot be a Tuner as well? That way Bit-Bot Master is able to be summoned using one of your machines?

Basically just some aesthetic changes...but depending on whether you want to change them.

8.5 / 10[/color][/b]

[·Toot]

[quote name='NickiMinaj' timestamp='1311521061' post='5383105']
[b][color="#FF00FF"]I really like the set, especially what you've done with separate "Bits" and "Bots." But, if you have a Bit-Bot Master, I would suggest changing the two or more non-synchro tuner monsters to 1 "Bit" Tuner Monster and 1 "Bot" Tuner Monster. Also, maybe change Buzz Bot or Pup Bot to a Tuner, so that you could have at least one lower leveled "Bot" Tuner monster in your arsenal. This way you can have actual Bits and Bots in your Bit-Bot Master.

Also, if you're going to use Bit Artillery to summon Embezzle Bot, only to require another Synchro Tuner monster to summon Bit-Bot Master, shouldn't Embezzle Bot be a Tuner as well? That way Bit-Bot Master is able to be summoned using one of your machines?

Basically just some aesthetic changes...but depending on whether you want to change them.

8.5 / 10[/color][/b]
[/quote]



ya know it took me 2 times times to actually understand what you meant lol
my idea for them was to have all the bit monsters tuner monsters, while the bot monsters stayed as effect monsters
but it's a great idea, i'll look into it
thnx for the fb

[·Toot]

lol i added a booster pack thing

[The Twizzler]

The monsters are super cute.

Also, it goes well with your booster pack format.

[NickiMinaj]

[color="#FF00FF"][b][center]The pack just makes it even better! 9 / 10. Sorry that I was confusing. I just thought that when something is a "Bit-Bot Master" it might need to have bits and bots...plus it's a machine... [/center][/b][/color]

[ragnarok1945]

for Dupe Bot, you might want to consider some restrictions on the tokens

beyond that though the cards are fine the way they are

9.1/10

[·Toot]

lol thnx for the FB guys

[·Toot]

new monster added

[▪ατємυ▪]

Great set. Especially the bouncing factor, not many cards do this. 9.3/10.

[·Toot]

thnx for the FB

new spell added

[ragnarok1945]

[quote name='♣Toot♣' timestamp='1311553183' post='5384542']
new monster added
[/quote]

mind putting a new next to the monster you added? Makes it easier to find

[·Toot]

of course

If I understood you correctly, it would be Bot Flyer TOOT1-EN013

probably not though lol

[ragnarok1945]

so mainly it's used to clear your opponent's field relatively quickly

it's nothing really NEW, but the effect is good, so I'll give you 8.4/10

[·Toot]

Some of the tinker monsters are added

[ragnarok1945]

"Once per turn, you can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Tinker" monster from your hand"

For that effect in Mercenary, you still may want to consider putting restrictions on the summoned Tinker monster

[·Toot]

yeah i was thinking about negating the effect... any good?

[ragnarok1945]

that would work, though I wouldn't negate it PERMANENTLY. Maybe for like 2 turns

also you might want to say that summoned monster you can't use it for XYZ or synchro food for that turn

[·Toot]

yeah that sounds reasonable
I'll fix it next time i edit the 1st post

[·Toot]

WAY NAY! Bump!

[ragnarok1945]

is the set almost completed by now, Toot?

[·Toot]

yep lol