Varionius Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [left]Alright, after the great reception of Phoenix Dragon, I created these. [/left][left][img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4024/447411g.jpg[/img][/left][left] [/left][left][spoiler=Lore]While you control a LIGHT "Lux Aeternitas - Spectrum Eagle", your opponent cannot destroy any monster you control using a card effect. When this card battles a DARK monster with a higher ATK than this card, this card gains 300 ATK until the End Phase. When this card battles a DARK monster with a lower ATK than this card, reduce the ATK of all monsters you control by 200 until the End Phase. When this card leaves the field, activate one of the following effects:- Gain 1000 Life Points- Negate the effects of 2 Face-Up monsters until the End Phase.[/spoiler][/left][left] [/left][center] [/center][center] [/center][left][img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/5674/447411.jpg[/img][/left][left][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card cannot be Special Summoned, except, by sending 1 "Lux Aeternitas - Spectrum Eagle" you control to the graveyard to Special Summon this card from your hand or deck. When this card battles a DARK monster with a higher ATK than this card, negate the effects 1 monster your opponent controls until the End Phase. When this card battles a DARK monster with a lower ATK, negate the effects of 1 monster you control until the End Phase. Negate all card effects that target this card, while you control this card, your opponent cannot target another Face-Up monster you control as an attack target, except this card.[/spoiler][/left][left]Pls Rate and comment.[/left] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 Can someone comment/rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ragnarok1945 Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 it's Winged Beast, not Winged-Beast for the type "When this card leaves the field, activate one of the following effects:- Gain 1000 Life Points- Negate the effects of all Face-Up monsters until the End Phase" <---the 2nd effect is OPed for a Skill Drain. Yes it applies to your end as well, but it's still too much. I'd only make it effect ONE monster, and that's it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 Edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 HOLY SH*#! first off, spectrum eagle is freaking awesome! nice skill gain, minor attack boost, attack loss for balance and atk that is fine for the effect! 9.7/10 thunderburst eagle is pretty awesome to, but since it doesn't have the attack boost, when it battles a stronger monster, sure you can negate an effect, but that won't keep it alive. and tribute monsters usually attack weaker cards, so this hurts you more IMO. 8/10 *jelous face* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 [quote]*jelous face*[/quote] LOL Tnx for the rating, + 1 rep for you and ragnarok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 While you control this card, your opponent cannot destroy any monster you control using a card effect. When this card battles a DARK monster with a higher ATK than this card, this card gains 300 ATK until the End Phase.[s] When this card battles a DARK monster with a lower ATK than this card, reduce the ATK of all monsters you control by 200 until the End Phase.[/s] When this card leaves the field, activate one of the following effects: - Gain 1000 Life Points - Negate the effects of 2 face-up monsters until the End Phase. [b]All monster negated should fine. Striketrough not a real drawback., so remove it. Of course this one need a real drawback to activate it first effect IMO [/b] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 "Lux Aeternitas - Spectrum Eagle" you control to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card from your hand [s]or deck[/s]. When this card battles a DARK monster with a higher ATK than this card, negate the effects 1 monster your opponent controls until the End Phase. [s]When this card battles a DARK monster with a lower ATK, negate the effects of 1 monster you control until the End Phase[/s]. Negate all card effects [this is bit too much]that target this card. While you control this card, you opponent cannot target another face-up monster you control as an attack target, except this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 [quote name='Varion' timestamp='1311577453' post='5385352'] Edited. [/quote] ok now it should be good, I'll give you the 9.1/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
▪ατємυ▪ Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 Beautiful artwork, kind of unbalanced on spectrum's effect, on thunderburst, it shour be "your opponent", not "you opponent". Other than that, great work. 8.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 Tnx.Could you highlight the you opponent part, I coldn't find it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
▪ατємυ▪ Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 [quote name='Varion' timestamp='1311619846' post='5386461'] Tnx. Could you highlight the you opponent part, I coldn't find it. [/quote] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card cannot be Special Summoned, except, by sending 1 "Lux Aeternitas - Spectrum Eagle" you control to the graveyard to Special Summon this card from your hand or deck. When this card battles a DARK monster with a higher ATK than this card, negate the effects 1 monster your opponent controls until the End Phase. When this card battles a DARK monster with a lower ATK, negate the effects of 1 monster you control until the End Phase. Negate all card effects that target this card, while you control this card, [b]you opponent[/b] cannot target another Face-Up monster you control as an attack target, except this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 Tnx.Edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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