PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 [spoiler=(Corrupted AI)] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/23w40e8.jpg[/IMG] [spoiler=(Lore)] This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: ● If this card destroys a monster by battle, you can activate one of the following effects depending on the destroyed monster's Attribute: ●Light - Increase your life points by 500. ●Dark - Inflict 500 points of direct damage to both players. ●Earth - Destroy 1 card your opponent controls. ●Fire - Select 1 trap card from your deck and add it to your hand. ●Wind-Return 1 monster on the field to their owner's hand ●Water-This card gains 100 ATK. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Point out any errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 First of all, this is pretty good for a newcomer. The card is balanced, but you got some errors, Here This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: ● If this card destroys a monster by battle, you can activate one of the following effects [b]based[/b] on the destroyed monster's Attribute: ●Light - Increase your [b]Life Points [/b]by 500. ●Dark - [u]Inflict 500 damage to both players[/u]. ●Earth - Destroy 1 card your opponent controls. ●Fire - [b]Select 1 Trap Card from your Deck[/b] and add it to your hand. ●Wind-Return 1 monster on the field to their owner's hand ●Water-This card gains 100 ATK. There's unbalanced start there, i spotted this is the troll only for EARTH, FIRE, WIND. The rest 3 is bit unuseful, though for FIRE it is overdoing without a drawback, so yeah. Should need a drawback for FIRE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 WATER's effect is the only one that's meh 100 atk is a bit too little, I'd made it 200, but then cap the max at it can't exceed 3200 atk or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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