PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 First Archtype. I'm a little new to OCG... [spoiler=(Monsters)] [spoiler=(Jetman)] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/4411/398660.jpg[/img] [spoiler=(Lore)] As long as this card remains face-up on the field, it is also treated as a Machine-Type. You can tribute this card to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Rock Warrior)] [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4411/398660.jpg[/img] [spoiler=(Lore)] As long as this card remains face-up on the field, it is also treated as a Rock-Type. If this card destroys a monster by battle, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap card your opponent controls. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Berserker)] [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/4411/398660.jpg[/img] [spoiler=(Lore)] When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, select 1 "Galaxy HERO" from your deck and add it to your hand. Once per turn; during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 card to destroy 1 Set Spell or Trap card on the field. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Velvin)] [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/4411/398660.jpg[/img] [spoiler=(Lore)] As long as this card remains face-up on the field, it is also treated as a Machine-Type. You can pay 500 Life Points to negate a card effect that targets "Galaxy HERO" monster(s) you control. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can Special Summon 1 Lvl 5 or lower "Galaxy HERO" from your Graveyard. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Wormhole Warrior)] [img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/4411/398660.jpg[/img] [spoiler=(Lore)] As long as this card remains face-up, all "Galaxy HERO" monsters you control gain 200 ATK and DEF. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Galaxy HERO" monster from your hand. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Hard Fang)] Image: By HP Doom [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/4411/398660.jpg[/img] [spoiler=(Lore)] As long as this card remains face-up, it is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. If this card destroys a monster by battle, increase this monster's ATK by 300. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Visionary)] Image: By HP Doom [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/4411/398660.jpg[/img] [spoiler=(Lore)] Once per turn; during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 card to flip Face-up 1 Face-down monster your opponent controls. If you use this effect, this card cannot declare an attack until your next Battle Phase. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Steambreaker)] [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4411/398660.jpg[/img] [spoiler=(Lore)] As long as this card remains face-up, it is also treated as a Machine-Type. If this card destroys a monster by battle, it can declare another attack. This card cannot declare a direct attack. If this face-up card is targeted for an attack, you can switch the battle position of this monster. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Spells)] [spoiler=(Galaxy Beacon)] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/4411/398660.jpg[/img] [spoiler=(Lore)] You can only activate this card if a face-up "Galaxy HERO" monster you control is destroyed by battle. Special Summon 1 "Galaxy HERO" whose ATK is lower then the destroyed "Galaxy HERO" monster's ATK. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Extra Deck)] [spoiler=(Synchros)] [spoiler=(Chainman)] [img]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/4411/398660.jpg[/img] [spoiler=(Lore)] "Galaxy Hero - Beserker" + 1 Non-Tuner "Galaxy Hero" As long as this card remains face-up on the field, it is also treated as a Machine-type. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 1 "Galaxy HERO" monster from your Graveyard. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Steel Warrior)] Picture made by: HP Doom [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/4244/398660u.jpg[/img] [spoiler=(Lore)] 1 tuner + "Galaxy HERO - Rock Warrior" Can only be Special Summoned by Synchro Summon. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card destroys a monster by battle, add 1 Level 3 or lower "Galaxy HERO" monster from your deck to your hand. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 eye for an eye effect, but good way to kill synchros and XYZs really fast Galaxy Beacon's effect is meh for summoning, nothing really new, but it balances out 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheezeman224 Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 Hmmmm interesting effect for "Jetman" and too thumbs up for remembering the new OCG rules for the HERO monsters 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted July 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311617162' post='5386297'] eye for an eye effect, but good way to kill synchros and XYZs really fast Galaxy Beacon's effect is meh for summoning, nothing really new, but it balances out 9/10 [/quote] Yea...I know it's nothing really new. Since I'm a little new to OCG...I'm just going to stick with original and maybe some new effects...but nothing too major because I know I will mess it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 that's perfectly ok btw, how big a set you plan to make this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
▪ατємυ▪ Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 Nice effect on Jetman. Start of a Machine/Warrior deck-theme maybe? Anyway, 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted July 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 Bumb Added Galaxy HERO - Rock Warrior! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 you must mean for the 1st sentence it is ALSO treated as a rock-type, right? Otherwise there'd be no point to make it a warrior type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted July 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311651540' post='5387903'] you must mean for the 1st sentence it is ALSO treated as a rock-type, right? Otherwise there'd be no point to make it a warrior type [/quote] Thanks for pointing that out Ragnarok. Fixed and Added Berserker and the first Synchro: Chainman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Guy Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 Nice! I like where this is going. Add to this. At the mo, I'd rate it 8.5/10, mainly because of Berserker's 'meh' pic and the fact it's not finished. Great work anyways! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 for Berserker that's almost TOO much spell/trap destruction effect might want to cut down on that number a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted July 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 Fixed Berserker's Effect! Added Velvin! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 nothing really new in terms of effect curious why you said lv5 or lower though, and not lv4 or lower...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted July 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311720797' post='5389694'] nothing really new in terms of effect curious why you said lv5 or lower though, and not lv4 or lower...... [/quote] I chose Lv 5 because it is a small beat down stick. Also I fixed Berserker's effect and added Wormhole Warrior Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 a little like Legendary Ocean's effect for 200 atk/def boost, I like it the summoning effect shouldn't be really imbalanced or not, I'll give this 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 Added Steel Warrior! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 Added Hard Fang and Visionary! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 2, 2011 Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 Fang is meh for just atk boosting Steel Warrior I'm unsure if you should allow the adding for more than once per turn, in the event you activate a card effect to get it to attack more than once Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 Added Steambreaker! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 4, 2011 Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 for the last effect, that's not actually a smart idea its def is lower than its atk and all that it's completely different from Little Winguard, with stats of 1400/1800. Yes you can switch to to def after attacking, but it has higher def and therefore it works So here you should have made the def higher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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