Mehmani Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 [img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/3866/85880.jpg[/img] [i]If you control no monsters: you can Special Summon this card from your hand and take 1000 damage. When this card is removed from the field: return 1 card on the field to it's owner's Deck.[/i] Jazin Kay's archive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Animefan #1 Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 I can't see anything wrong with this, Yu-gi-oh needs more compulsory card destruction effects! Perfect OCG! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 i dont like paying life points to use a Lv2 monster... but o well, as long as the card works... some minor OCG errors [b]If you control no monsters[u]: Y[/u]ou can Special Summon this card from your hand[u];[/u] take 1000 damage. When this card [u]leaves the field[/u]: [u]R[/u]eturn 1 card on the field to [u]its[/u] owner's Deck.[/b] The word after a colon is ALWAYS capitalized, not the case for semi-colons tho Semi colons come when where are either 2 effects in 1 sentense or after a clause Remove from the field has been replaced by "leaves the field"... shorter and less confusing than remove from play, which is now "banish" It's = It is... Its is control Yes, i am a Grammer Nazi Card = 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 shame it has to be the 1000 damage, was hoping for smaller simple, don't really see anything wrong with the rest of the effect though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted July 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2011 [quote name='BFG Studios' timestamp='1311796896' post='5392657'] i dont like paying life points to use a Lv2 monster... but o well, as long as the card works... [b]Machine Duplication, use 3 Level 2s for an Xyz or Synchro Summon and return 3 cards on the field to their owner's Decks? Doesn't sound like a bad idea to me.[/b] some minor OCG errors [b]If you control no monsters[u]: Y[/u]ou can Special Summon this card from your hand[u];[/u] take 1000 damage. When this card [u]leaves the field[/u]: [u]R[/u]eturn 1 card on the field to [u]its[/u] owner's Deck.[/b] The word after a colon is ALWAYS capitalized, not the case for semi-colons tho Semi colons come when where are either 2 effects in 1 sentense or after a clause Remove from the field has been replaced by "leaves the field"... shorter and less confusing than remove from play, which is now "banish" It's = It is... Its is control [b]Those were sloppy errors on my part, I apologize.[/b] Yes, i am a Grammer Nazi [b]Oh the irony.[/b] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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