Lovely Gusto Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 I have been lurking on this site for some time now, I am a huge fan of Yugioh and am trying to get competitive. In real life I am working on a syncro deck and a elemental Hero deck. I was hoping to One day be able to have my own cards made real (I doubt that will ever happen, but peopel gotta aim big) Anyway I wanted to show you guys my cards i have been working on, I can take constructive critisim, I am also not up to date on the grammar and such used since I am new to this site, please help me out and let me know what you think. I made this deck to resemble me, I am big on Love and living with gusto. [img]http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/4713/458463z.jpg[/img] [img]http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img807.imageshack.us/img807/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/8831/458463j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/3397/458463u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/1279/458463.jpg[/img] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/4725/458463s.jpg[/img] Lore: Guardian of Love and Gusto + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters This card can not be destroyed in battle (Damage calculation still applies) as long as this card is on the field it is the only "Love and Gusto" monster your opponent can attack. When this card destoys a monster on your oppnent's side of the field you may destroy another monster as long as the selected monster's ATK and DEF points are lower than the destroyed monster's attack points. When this card is destroyed you lose life points equal to this card's ATK Points. I will be updating, I hope no matter how bad it may be you guys will coach me along the way, I hope to get known around this community, it looks like a great place to be, and it is always lively. Also I'm sorry if this is not counted as realistic due to the pictures but I tried. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovely Gusto Posted July 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drcrisis Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 All too OP. Nerf it all pretty much, ATT power wise by about 300 if its over 2000, 200 if its under. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovely Gusto Posted July 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 [quote name='drcrisis' timestamp='1311927115' post='5398010'] All too OP. Nerf it all pretty much, ATT power wise by about 300 if its over 2000, 200 if its under. [/quote] Too powerful? Hmm, I can see that with my Synchro monster and the Pacifist. But I don't know about everyone else, I tihnk it's pretty fair given the high level cost, other than 3 cards all my other ones are around the 1600 and under mark (With the exception of the Guardian) But I will tone some of them down, thanks for the advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 I think too that they are a bit powerful especially your field spell. You also have a monster with 1800 ATK that can attack twice per turn without a drawback. But you are new here. I am sure that you will make your next cards better ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovely Gusto Posted July 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 [quote name='groniack' timestamp='1311927937' post='5398020'] I think too that they are a bit powerful especially your field spell. You also have a monster with 1800 ATK that can attack twice per turn without a drawback. But you are new here. I am sure that you will make your next cards better ones. [/quote] I see, yeah it does seem a bit cheap lol, okay I will lower some attack points and nerf the field spell, thanks a lot!Okay edited the field spell, my boxer, and my synchro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 for your synchro can you write out the lore, it's too small to read it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovely Gusto Posted July 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1311956573' post='5398559'] for your synchro can you write out the lore, it's too small to read it [/quote] Okay, I added the lore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 "With this card destoys a monster on your oppnent's side of the field you may destroy another monster as long as the selected monster's attack points are lower than the destroyed monster's attack points" That seems a bit too easy to kill off the 2nd monster with just that condition alone you might want to make it more specific than that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 Yakuza is so awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drcrisis Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 Boxer + Attack directly equip + Brothers in Arms = 2 turn gg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovely Gusto Posted July 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 Thanks for the feedback guys, I really appreaciate it. I edited my Synchro's effect and added a new card "Oznij" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovely Gusto Posted July 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 [quote name='~King Crouton~' timestamp='1311977437' post='5399427'] Yakuza is so awesome. [/quote] Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 decent, but ppl are gonna getcha when they see the cosplay card and some others... anyways, nice first try. [spoiler='suggestion']When an attacking card battles a defense position monster, its called piercing damage. (new ocg crap) [/spoiler] yakuza is wicked! yakuza+ human wave tactics + ATK boosting field = YAHTZEE! btw, whats a gusto? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovely Gusto Posted July 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1312005720' post='5400489'] decent, but ppl are gonna getcha when they see the cosplay card and some others... anyways, nice first try. [spoiler='suggestion']When an attacking card battles a defense position monster, its called piercing damage. (new ocg crap) [/spoiler] yakuza is wicked! yakuza+ human wave tactics + ATK boosting field = YAHTZEE! btw, whats a gusto? [/quote] Yeah some of the cards like "Cosplay" and a few others I couldn't find good pictures that represented them, so I'll try to find a anime picture that better represents cosplaying. And Thanks I like the Yakuza too. Gusto is more of a way of living or feeling, it means to have lots of vigor or enjoyment when doing something, pretty much it means to greatly enjoy sometihng or have lots of vigor.And thanks for the grammar help, I dind't know about the armor piercing thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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