LRPXD Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 [spoiler=A reverse Gemini O.O] [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/7479/260988.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can Special Summon this card from your hand when your opponent summons an Effect Monster. If this card is successfully summoned removed up to 5 Gemini monsters from your graveyard to increase this card's ATK and DEF by 400 for each Gemini monsters removed by this effect. This monster cannot be destroyed by battle against Effect monsters, any Battle Damage you take involving this card is doubled. When this card engages battle against a Gemini monster, double this card's ATK and DEF until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn, when this card engages battle against a non-Gemini Effect monster send that card back to it's owner's hand after the Damage Step and put 1 Forbidden Seal Counter on it (max. 1). Effect Monsters with a Forbidden Seal Counter are treated as Gemini monsters it's effects are negated and can only activate once it is Normal Summoned again. Forbidden Counters are removed once the monsters leaves the field. After the the 7th turn this card was summoned. Normal Summon this monster again as a Normal monster. [spoiler=Story of the card] Two witches with the proficient art of the Forbidden Techniques, they yet to reach up their potential but powerful enough to go toe to toe against their rival Dark Magician Girl, they may seem innocent and weak at first but don't let that fool you their power is immeasurable, such promise were praised on these girls but everything went wrong once they heard the declaration of the high king they were both banished and sealed to an endless realm where time stood still, reasons were that there Forbidden Magic required the souls of the dead which was illegal and a unnatural form of magic they were kept in there for 5 years until one day they escaped all was seen during the escape were 5 mysterious seals.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Forbidden Spells] [img]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/4567/260988n.jpg[/img] This card can only be equipped to a face-up monster on your side of the field with "Forbidden" in it's name. The equipped monster gains 50 ATK and DEF for each removed from play monster on your side. Once per turn you can send 1 of your removed from play monsters back to your Graveyard to switch the Battle Position of 1 Defense Position Monster on your opponent's side of the field into face-up Attack Position it must declare an attack during your opponent's next Battle Phase.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=A monster than can equip a card pile >.<] [img]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/7479/260988.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned OR Tribute Summoned. Once per turn, you can reveal this card from your hand to downgrade this card's level by 1. If this monster's level is 4 or lower, halve this card's ATK and DEF. When this card is Summoned both you and your opponent must draw 3 cards, if either player draws a non-Monster Type card banish it. Select 1 unoccupied space on your Spell/Trap Zone, all monsters drawn by this card's effect are placed on that space stacked face-up, this pile is treated as an Equip Spell Card and is equipped to this monster. Monsters equipped to this card cannot activate it's effect(s), declare an attack, be Tributed, or be used as a material for a Fusion Summon or Synchro Summon. Increase this card's ATK and DEF equal to the total level of monsters equipped to this card x 100. If possible, this card gains the effect(s) of the monster on top of the pile that's equipped to this monster until the End Phase. During each End Phase send the top card of the pile to the bottom of the pile.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Serande a card everyone loves <3] [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/5161/260988g.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can Special Summon this card from your hand if you control a face-down Defense Position monster.This card is also treated as an EARTH monster. While this card is face-up on your side of the field all Flip Effects are negated. Each time a monster is flipped, increase your life points equal to the Flipped Monster's level x 100. If your opponent controls a monster with an ATK that's higher than this card's ATK, you can pay life points equal to it's DEF minus it's level x 100 to flip that monster into face-down Defense Position. Once per turn you can pay 2000 life points to select 1 face-up monster you control and flip it into face-down Defense Position. During the Damage Step only when this card battles, you can flip 1 face-down monster you control to have this card gain ATK equal to the Flipped Monster's DEF until the end of the Damage Step. This card can inflict piercing damage.[/spoiler] [spoiler=A sorceress with the heart of fire :3] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9323/260988aq.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, This card cannot be Special Summoned except when you take 1000 points or more damage from a card your opponent controls. If this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard inflict damage to your opponent's life points equal to this monster's level and the destroyed monster's level x 100. If this card inflicts 1000 or more points of damage to your opponent, Special Summon 1 FIRE Monster from your Graveyard whose DEF is lower than 1000 that monsters effect(s) are negated and cannot be tributed for a Tribute Summon or be used for as a material for a Synchro/ Fusion/ Xyz Summon and is sent to the Graveyard during the End Phase. Every time your life points decrease you can Special Summon 1 "Flare Blitz Token" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK ?/DEF ?). It's ATK and DEF are equal to the amount of life points reduced and cannot declare an attack. If you control 2 or more "Flare Blitz Token" you can tribute them to Special Summon 1 FIRE Monster from your Graveyard or hand whose DEF is lower than the total DEF of the tributed "Flare Blitz Tokens"[/spoiler] [spoiler=Twins of the demented world] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/7479/260988.jpg[/img] You can discard this monster from your hand to select up to 3 cards with "Toon" in it's name from your Deck and add it to your hand. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Uprising Of A Demented World". When this card is successfully Ritual Summoned you can banish atleast 1 card with "Ritual" in it's effect from your Graveyard and select 1 card from your Spell/Trap Zone, that card is treated as "Toon World". If you control "Toon World" on your side of the field this monster cannot be effected by card effects your opponent controls and can attack twice in the same battle phase. While this card is on the field OR Graveyard inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent for each time your opponent activates a Spell/Trap Card OR Special Summons a monster from his/her Deck OR Extra Deck. [spoiler=Ritual Spell] [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/7707/260988i.jpg[/img] You can banish this card from your hand OR Graveyard to search through your Deck and select 1 "Toon World" and add it to your hand. This card can be used to Ritual Summon "Rulers Of The Demented World". You must also banish monsters on your field or hand whose total Levels equal 8 or more. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Goodbye! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 Comments @ all these are going to my last cards here until December nothing @ all you can just comment on 1 card, I just want comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 you have overdone it a little. We all know how lazy the Members are. i managed to read through 1 Effect..and then i lost my motivation to read the others..keep it shorter next time (if there is a next time) i read through the Alternator.. And i will read through the other cards .. other time. Just to tired right now.. This card would be horribly UP'd...If there wouldnt be the nice "reveal" effect. Most useful after 4 turns i'd say... but still a risky thing. Many decks have a lot of Spells and Traps..if youre unlucky..you Summon a monster with low stats..for way to high costs Nobody would Tribute more than 1 monster for this..i'd love to have something added wich would make you do that...but the effect is long enough by now xD 8.5/10 for that card.. As i said, im gonna read through the other cards as soon as im back in here .. tomorrow i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 2, 2011 Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 it's interesting for the ritual I'm surprised though you didn't give it the regular toon effect, attacking directly....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 2, 2011 Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 well, I'm gonna make some comments! *cracks knuckles* Forbidden Duo: Very interesting, nice pic and interesting story,(why must they hate dark magician girl! TT-TT) Wonderful effect, as always!(except one flaw, but I'm not goin there) 9/10 Alternator of the Fallen: you already know how I feel about this wonderfully long card! Serenade, warlock of peace: aren't warlock's dudes? anyways, gotta lil confused with the whole, defense minus level x100... still wonderful card! still, I think that even for your wonderful talent, this still has room for improvement. 8/10 Pheinox Flare Sorceress: OMG! this is your best card Imo! holy jesus, this card would work wonders, to bad fire isn't played as much... The token part is the best effect I've seen in awhile! 10/10 for this one, send it to Konami now! I want it now! Rulers of the Demented World: wow! the creating a toon world would make pegusus' head expload! it's probably good that you left out the attacking directly, it may be op'ed then... wonderful yet again 10/10 this would be in every toon deck imagianable! you are by far the most creative person of YCM, I'll miss you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted August 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 [quote name='Dr.Gentle' timestamp='1312229981' post='5405402'] you have overdone it a little. We all know how lazy the Members are. i managed to read through 1 Effect..and then i lost my motivation to read the others..keep it shorter next time (if there is a next time) i read through the Alternator.. And i will read through the other cards .. other time. Just to tired right now.. This card would be horribly UP'd...If there wouldnt be the nice "reveal" effect. Most useful after 4 turns i'd say... but still a risky thing. Many decks have a lot of Spells and Traps..if youre unlucky..you Summon a monster with low stats..for way to high costs Nobody would Tribute more than 1 monster for this..i'd love to have something added wich would make you do that...but the effect is long enough by now xD 8.5/10 for that card.. As i said, im gonna read through the other cards as soon as im back in here .. tomorrow i guess [/quote]Thanks dude I give you a rep thanks for the rating and the suggestions I'll be back in Decmber I got to finish my FF set and my Random Set in the Pop Culture Section before I leave this site again for college and work. Anyway once i'm back I'll follow everyone's suggestion of shorter effects hope to see you guys there. [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1312258295' post='5406567'] it's interesting for the ritual I'm surprised though you didn't give it the regular toon effect, attacking directly....... [/quote] If I gave it the effect to attack directly it would be broken I rather keep the effect on attacking twice since their twins. Anyway rag this goodbye keep up with the comments on this section without you this section we'll be a ghost town. [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1312262144' post='5406658'] well, I'm gonna make some comments! *cracks knuckles* Forbidden Duo: Very interesting, nice pic and interesting story,(why must they hate dark magician girl! TT-TT) Wonderful effect, as always!(except one flaw, but I'm not goin there) 9/10 Alternator of the Fallen: you already know how I feel about this wonderfully long card! Serenade, warlock of peace: aren't warlock's dudes? anyways, gotta lil confused with the whole, defense minus level x100... still wonderful card! still, I think that even for your wonderful talent, this still has room for improvement. 8/10 Pheinox Flare Sorceress: OMG! this is your best card Imo! holy jesus, this card would work wonders, to bad fire isn't played as much... The token part is the best effect I've seen in awhile! 10/10 for this one, send it to Konami now! I want it now! Rulers of the Demented World: wow! the creating a toon world would make pegusus' head expload! it's probably good that you left out the attacking directly, it may be op'ed then... wonderful yet again 10/10 this would be in every toon deck imagianable! you are by far the most creative person of YCM, I'll miss you! [/quote] Thanks Shattered Sky so many 10's I'm so freakin happy and your comments are very entertaning to read. I'll miss this section so many cool people here but not many reply on my cards since they have long effects. Anyway keep making great cards I'll rate some of them if I have time you'll do great here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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