zsil33 Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 This is my first card, and it would be great if you could help me make it balenced, and help me with the OCG. Thanks! [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/1385/461036.jpg[/img]lore: This card gains the same number of attack and defence as you have lifepoints. If you have less than 1000 lifepoints this card can attack your opponents lifepoints directly. Tribute this card to destroy all monsters on the field with less than half of this cards current attack points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 What if you summon it when you have 8000 life points? Its a little overpowered in that way, maybe you should limit its summoning to when the player has 4000 or lower life points. I'm not the greatest at OCG either but I think this is mostly correct: When this card is Summoned, it gains ATK and DEF equal to your Life Points. If your Life Points are lower than 1000, this card can attack your opponent directly. You can Tribute this card to destroy all face-up monsters on the field with less than half the ATK of this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zsil33 Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/1385/461036.jpg[/img] This card can only be summoned when you have 4000 or less life points. When this card is Summoned, it gains ATK and DEF equal to your Life Points. If your Life Points are lower than 1000, this card can attack your opponent directly. You can Tribute this card to destroy all face-up monsters on the field with less than half the ATK of this card. Hows that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 A lot better Oh and: This card can only be Summoned if your Life Points are 4000 or lower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 It is very good now and it is your first card very good work 9/10 remember that cosmic is not a type you might want to change it to Winged Beast or Dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zsil33 Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/1385/461036.jpg[/img] I think it looks most like a dragon I've also made a couple more [img]http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/1385/461036.jpg[/img] [img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1385/461036.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 Just telling you. If you get artwork from another person on YCM. Give credit to the owner And it is right to show credit to the owner of ANY image you don't own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zsil33 Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 Ok thanks, yeah the art isn't mine so the credit goes to whoever produced them, and they are really good pieces of art work!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 The Ritual Monster is kind of useless. I mean.. Piercing damage really beats the crap out of it COUGHCYBERENDDRAGONCOUGH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zsil33 Posted August 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 I suppose I didn't think of that, any ideas how to improve? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2011 Report Share Posted August 1, 2011 for Ultima and its modifications it should be balanced the way it is see had you said tribute the card and kill all monsters with its FULL atk, it would have been somewhat broken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zsil33 Posted August 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2011 Yeah thanks for the help!! [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/index.php?&app=forums&module=extras§ion=legends#"][color="#1e4371"][/color][/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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