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[center][center]Okay I've been out of card making for a long time now, so long that I have no idea how to write the Neo OCG! But this will be my first attempt to follow the Neo OCG! I know they may be off but this is my first attempt at it ^^' so I'll happily take any criticism as long as it is fair and I'm also open to suggestions and ideas for more cards. So here's my set, I will add 5 new cards every now and then... until the set is finished. So here are the first 5 cards for my Creatures of Fate Set!
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Once per turn: You can banish 1 Spell or Trap card on your field; Then send 1 level 4 or lower monster from your deck to your hand.
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[center][center]If there are no cards in your graveyard: this monster can attack your opponent directly; Each turn you can banish 1 card in your graveyard.
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[center][center]Discard this monster from your hand: Then send 1 banished card to your deck. 3 turns after this monster was discarded; You can special summon it to the field.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]FLIP: Banish 1 monster in your hand; Then destroy 2 cards on your opponents field.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]This card cannot be Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned except by the Spell cards "The Spirit of A Fate Guardian" and "Death And The Fate Maiden": Each turn this card destroys a monster: This card gains ATK equal to half the destroyed monster's original ATK. When this monster is used as a tribute to Tribute Summon or Special Summon a monster; Add half of this cards ATK to the summoned Monster's ATK.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]You can tribute 1 "Fate" monster: Then Special Summon this monster. When this monster is Special Summoned: Banish 1 monster from your hand; Inflict damage to your opponent's life points equal to the ATK of the banished monster.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You can tribute 1 "Fate" monster: Then Special Summon this monster. When this monster is Special Summoned: Banish 1 card in your graveyard; Send 1 other banished card to the Graveyard.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned. You can remove from play 1 "Fate" card in your Graveyard to Special Summon this monster from your hand; This monster can attack your opponent directly.
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This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned. You can banish 1 "Fate" card in your Graveyard to Special Summon this card from your hand: When this monster leaves the field; Special Summon 2 Mist Tokens (Aqua-Type/DARK/level.4/ATK 0/DEF 1500) in Defense Position.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned. You can remove from play 1 "Fate" card in your graveyard to Special Summon this monster from your hand: After this monster attacks: its DEF is used for damage calculation only. After each successful attack; this monster is placed into defense position.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]You can tribute 1 "Fate" monster: Then Special Summon this monster. When this monster is Special Summoned: Special Summon any Level 4 or lower monster from your hand.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]When this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell, Trap or Effect Monster's effect; Special Summon 1 level 5 or lower monster to the field from your hand or deck.
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[center][center]When this card is activated, destroy 2 monsters with 1500 ATK or more on your field: Then take control of 1 monster your opponent controls; That monster is destroyed during the End Phase.
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[center][center]Subtract 1000 Life Points: You can send all of your cards that were banished to your deck, your deck is then shuffled; For every "Fate" card returned to your deck, you inflict 100 damage to your opponent.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]When your opponent inflicts damage to your Life Points: Send all of your cards that were banished to your deck, your deck is then shuffled; For every "Fate" card sent to your deck, destroy 1 card in your opponent's Field.
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[center][center]This card can only be equipped to a tuner monster: During your next Main Phase: banish the equipped monster: Then Synchro summon any monster in your Extra deck; You then tribute Life Points equal to 200x the Level of the summoned monster.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]When your opponent declares an attack: You can activate this card. Your opponent flips a coin. If the result is heads: The attack continues normally. Then set this card. If the result is tails: Half the ATK of the attacking monster.
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[center][center]Negate the activation of a Spell, Trap, or a monster's effect and banish that card; If this card is countered, banish this card and send 1 "Fate" card from your deck to your hand.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]While this card is on the field; Your opponent can only activate 1 Spell OR Trap card during each players turn. Banish 1 card from your deck that card is not affected by any Spell, Trap, or monster's effect: Tribute 1 "The Guardian of the Temple of Fate"; Then Special summon the original banished monster to your field.
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[center][center]This card can only be activated while "The Temple of Fate" is on the field: Activate this card with the Spell card "The Soul of a Guardian"; Special summon the monster "Guardian of the Temple of Fate" from your hand.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]This card can only be activated while "The Temple of Fate" is on the field: Activate this card with the Spell card "Death and the Fate Maiden"; Special summon the monster "Guardian of the Temple of Fate" from your hand.
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[center][center]Durring each of your Standby Phases: Banish 1 monster in your graveyard; Summon 1 token with that monster's DEF to your field. If the Field Spell card "The Temple of Fate" is on the field: You can subtract 500 life points once per turn; Summon 1 Giant Token (Warrior-Type/EARTH/level.4/ATK 0/DEF 2500) in defense position.[/center][/center]
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[center][center]When your opponent declares an attack: Negate the attack and equip this card to the attacking monster; That monster is forced into defense position and cannot change positions. That monster looses 500 DEF each turn. When the equipped monster is used as a tribute; Return 1 banished card to your hand.[/center][/center]
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When this monster is successfully Synchro Summoned: The monster with the highest attack on the field (except this card) is banished. Once per turn: You can banish 1 monster on your field in order to banish 1 card in your opponents field or graveyard.
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[center][center]When this monster is successfully Synchro Summoned: Send all of your cards that have been banished into your deck, the deck is then shuffled; For every monster that was sent to the deck by this monster's effect, this monster gains 200 ATK and DEF.
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Cody Frost Newbie

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Alright, time to review your set. And just because I like you doesn't mean I'ma cut you ANY slack.

Nule
Lore: Once per turn: You can banish 1 Spell or Trap Card on your side of the field; Add 1 Spell or Trap Card OR 1 level 4 or lower monster from your deck to your hand.

Okay, it's starts are pretty good, but the banishment for a Spell/Trap card seems TOO good. You can basically get rid of a useless card on your side of the field and search for Mirror Force, Solemn Judgment, Solemn Warning, Super Polymerization, Future Fusion, etc AND that is a no-no. You make Monster Reborn WAY to easy to get as well as any other Spell/Trap in the Limited list! FIX! NOW!!!

Black Horse
Lore: This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned. You can banish 1 "Fate" Card in your Graveyard to Special Summon this card (from where? Your hand? Your Graveyard? Your Deck?): This monster can attack your opponent directly. [u][i]For every successful attack;[/i][/u] Gain 300 Life Points.

Okay, this card is quite unique. The none Normal Summon/Flip Summon clause is quite something, but the banishment of a "Fate" CARD makes it somewhat specific and somewhat versatile, all in 1. Still...WTF? A random life gain? Nah, it doesn't need that effect. The direct attack clause would be good enough.

Unknown Creature
Lore: This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned. You can banish 1 "Fate" card in your Graveyard to Special Summon this card (from where?!): When this monster leaves the field; Special Summon 2 Mist Tokens (Aqua-Type/DARK/level.4/ATK 0/DEF 1500) in Defense Position.

Level 4 Tuner...summons level 4 tokens...*thinks about it* That's weird...it looks OPed, but I may be wrong...

Dark Fate
Lore: When this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell, Trap or Effect Monster's effect; Special Summon 1 level 5 or lower monster to the field from your hand or deck.

Okay this one is...interesting. It can summon Scrap Searcher to your opponent's side of the field and wipe out his monsters OR it can Special Summon Dandylion for a nice set up. The card's requirements are strange...with it leaving the field and all, but it may not be that difficult. It seems okay though.

Twist in Fate
Lore: When this card is activated, destroy 2 monsters on your side of the field: Take control of 1 monster your opponent controls. That monster is destroyed during the End Phase.

Okay, a Typical Mind control with a -2 restriction. It doesn't look bad because you need to clear out your field, but when I think about it with cards like Dandylion, Spore and Glow-Up Bulb which LOVE to be sent to the Graveyard...idk. It gives me weird vibes.

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I edited the cards! Here's the previous lore:
Lore: Once per turn: You can banish 1 Spell or Trap Card on your side of the field; Add 1 Spell or Trap Card OR 1 level 4 or lower monster from your deck to your hand.
and the new one for Child of fate!
Once per turn: you can banish 1 Spell/Trap card on your field; then send 1 level 4 or lower monster from your deck to your hand.

I did it for all the cards u said to edit AND the one ragnarok said

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