Just Crouton Posted August 3, 2011 Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TotemAvatar.jpg[/img] [color=#ff8c00][b]Totem Avatar[/b][/color] When this card is Summoned: You can add 1 "Totem Avatar" from your Deck to your hand. Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can declare a Level from 1 to 12; this card becomes that Level until the End Phase. This card cannot be used as a Synchro Material Monster. This card can only be used as Xyz Material for a "The Totems" monster. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsBraveShogun.jpg[/img] [b]The Totems: Brave Shogun[/b] 2 Level 4 Monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Target 1 Warrior-Type monster in your Graveyard; Equip it to this card. This card gains ATK equal to half the ATK of the monster equipped to this card. You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; This card gains the effect(s) of the monster(s) equipped to this card until the End Phase. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsRagingBeastKing.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]The Totems: Raging Beast King[/b][/color] 2 Level 4 Monsters Face-up Beast-Warrior-Type monsters you control, other than "The Totems: Raging Beast King", cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Face-up Beast-Warrior-Type monsters you control gain 800 ATK, and if they attack a Defense Position monster, inflict Piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsCrystalSorceress.jpg[/img] [b]The Totems: Crystal Sorceress[/b] 2 Level 4 Monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned: Place 1 Spell Counter on this card. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Target 1 Spellcaster-Type monster you control; Place Spell Counters on face-up cards you control that can have Spell Counters place on them x the targeted monster's Level. Face-up Spellcaster-Type monsters you control gain 100 ATK for each Spell Counter on the field. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsShiningUnicorn.jpg[/img] [b]The Totems: Shining Unicorn[/b] 2 Level 4 Monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Tribute 1 other face-up Beast-Type monster you control; Special Summon 2 Level 3 or lower Beast-Type monsters from your Deck. Those monsters are destroyed during the End Phase. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsZeusDrill.jpg[/img] [b]The Totems: Zeus' Drill[/b] 2 Level 4 Monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; During this turn: If you control another face-up Thunder-Type monster: This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: Target up to 2 cards your opponent controls; Those card's effects are negated until your next Standby Phase. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsWarriorofPoseidon.jpg[/img] [b]The Totems: Warrior of Poseidon[/b] 2 Level 3 Monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Face-up Sea Serpent-Type Monsters you control gain 400 ATK for each of your banished Sea Serpent-Type monsters and are unaffected by your opponent's card effects until the End Phase. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsOceansFury.jpg[/img] [b]The Totems: Ocean's Fury[/b] 2 Level 3 Monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon as many of your banished Aqua-Type monsters as possible. Banish them at the End Phase. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsBigFreezeWhale.jpg[/img] [b]The Totems: Big Freeze Whale[/b] 3 Level 3 Monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Banish cards your opponent controls for each of your banished Fish-Type monsters. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsAssaultsaurus.jpg[/img] [b]The Totems: Assaultsaurus[/b] 2 Level 4 Monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Reveal any number of Dinosaur-Type monsters in your hand; Destroy a number of cards your opponent controls equal to the number of Dinosaur-Type monsters revealed by this effect. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsHeavyMetalBeetle.jpg[/img] [b]The Totems: Heavy Metal Beetle[/b] 2 Level 4 Monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Tribute 1 face-up Level 4 or lower monster your opponent controls; Special Summon "Beetle Army Tokens" (Insect-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1200/DEF 1200) on your side of the field equal to the Tributed monster's Level. The tokens cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsDivineRulersIdol.jpg[/img] [b]The Totems: Divine Ruler's Idol[/b] 2 Level 4 Monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Face-up "Koa'ki Meiru" monsters you control cannot be destroyed during the End Phase of this turn. While this card has no Xyz Materials: You can Tribute this card; Negate the activation of a Spell Card / Trap Card / Normal Summon / Flip Summon / Special Summon and destroy the Spell Card, Trap Card, or Summoned monster. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsDreadnoughtDragon.jpg[/img] [b]The Totems: Dreadnought Dragon[/b] 2 Level 8 Monsters Once per turn: You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; Tribute 1 other Dragon-Type monster. Check all monsters your opponent controls, your opponent's hand, and all cards they draw (until the end of your opponent's 3rd turn after this effect's activation); Destroy all monsters with ATK equal to or less than the Tributed monster's ATK. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsHarpieShredder-1.jpg[/img] [b]The Totems: Harpie Shredder[/b] 2 Level 4 Monsters This card is treated as "Harpie Lady" (While it is on the field and in the Graveyard). Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Destroy cards your opponent controls for each face-up Winged Beast-Type monster you control. If you do: This card cannot attack this turn. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/TheTotemsKingdomCome.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]The Totems: Kingdom Come[/b][/color] 3 Level 10 Monsters The Xyz Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Xyz Summoned: Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. While this card has Xyz Materials: This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Choose 1 Divine-Beast-Type from your hand or Deck; Place it on your side of the field in face-up Attack Position. That monster's effect(s) are negated, and any damage they inflict becomes 0. When this card leaves the field: Send all monsters Special Summoned by this effect to the Graveyard. [img]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/Pure-WorldTribeKing-1.jpg[/img] [color=#4b0082][b]Pure-World Tribe King[/b][/color] 3 "The Totem" monsters Cannot be used as a Fusion Material Monster. Can only be Special Summoned (from your Extra Deck) by sending the above cards from either side of the field to the Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization".) This card gains 500 ATK for each Xyz Material on each monster used as a Fusion Material for this card. When this card is destroyed by battle: Choose 1 monster from your Deck; Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. [IMG]http://i898.photobucket.com/albums/ac187/Deraj_2010/GreatCatastropheTribeApocalypse-1.jpg[/IMG] [color=#4b0082][b]Great Catastrophe Tribe Apocalypse[/b][/color] 3 "The Totem" monsters Can only be Special Summoned (from your Extra Deck) by banishing the above cards from either Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization".) You cannot Special Summon this card if you control a "Pure-World Tribe King". Once per turn: You can Special Summon 1 banished Xyz Monster in face-up Defense Position. Face-up monsters your opponent controls lose ATK equal to half the combined ATK of all monsters Special Summoned by this effect. If a monster Special Summoned by this effect is changed to Attack Position: Destroy it. When this card leaves the field: Destroy all monsters Special Summoned by this effect. When this card destroys a monster by battle: Inflict 400 damage to your opponent x the Level of the destroyed monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 3, 2011 Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 artwork is perfect for Unicorn though I´d still put some sort of restriction on the summoned monsters Ocean´s Fury is slight OPed though, put restrictions on those summoned monsters 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted August 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 4, 2011 Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 King, when will the next update for this be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted August 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 Heavy Metal Beetle and Divine Ruler's Idol added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 idol is a bit meh for just protecting the monsters better for 1 turn for each detached XYZ monster I was hoping you'd have an effect for adding attachments to it as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [b]Dreadnought Dragon[/b][b] [/b]added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 the only thing you need to change in Dreadnaught Dragon is the ability to reattach more XYZ material back onto it beyond that everything looks fine the way it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted August 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted August 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 Harpie Shredder added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 yeah now that is MUCH better than the Harpie Ladies crap that exists now though I'm still unsure how well this would work in a Harpy Deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted August 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2011 [color=#ff8c00][b]Totem Avatar [/b][/color][color=#000000][b]The Totems: Kingdom Come [/b][/color][color=#4b0082][b]Great Catastrophe Tribe Apocalypse[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted August 21, 2011 Report Share Posted August 21, 2011 I can't speak for any other cards when when I looked at Dreadnought Dragon my very first thought was I WANT THAT CARD! I can imagine putting it in a dragon deck and summoning it really easily with Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon and White Night Dragon/Blue-Eyes White Dragon. Deck Devastation Virus + 3000 ATK monster + Easy Summon conditions = SUPREMELY OVERPOWERED CARD! Anyway lez stop oozzing awesomeness for a second and get to the point of it all. Change it's effect. Right now the Deck Devastation Virus effect makes it extremely overpowered and it doesn't change the Speed of dragon decks at all. In a hypothetical Scenario that this card ever became real, I'd much rather want a balanced card that increases the speed of my Dragon Deck than a supremely oped card. I think you should change it's effect to something along the lines of Genesis Dragon. Placing monsters from your Deck, Graveyard and/or even Removed from play to your hand. This would play well with Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon, Light and Darkness Dragon, Dragon's Mirror, Dragon Ravine, and Synchros which would increase it's speed to a level where it can compete with decks like Blackwing and Six Samurai for usability. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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