Darklord Draxon Posted August 4, 2011 Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 Comment, rate, criticism, Like, and/or Dislike would be appreciated. Hope you like. [spoiler= Elemental HERO Dragon Neos][img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/552/254867f.jpg[/img] LORE: [b]1 Dragon-type Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner "Elemental HERO" monsters[/b] [b]When this card is Synchro Summon: target 1 "Elemental HERO" or 1 Dragon-type monster from your Deck and send that card to your Graveyard. Once per turn: you can select and activate one of the following effects. 1: You can tribute 1 monster you control to Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Elemental HERO" or Dragon-type monster in your Graveyard. 2: You can tribute 1 "Elemental Hero monster you control; select up to 2 spell or trap cards on the field and destroy the selected cards. 3: you can tribute 1 Dragon-type monster you control to target 1 monster your opponent controls and banish that card. All "Elemental HERO" and Dragon-type monsters you control gain 300 ATK and DEF, except "Elemental HERO Dragon Neos".[/b][/spoiler] I also added a Tuner so it makes it more easier to summon my "E-Hero" Synchro [spoiler= Neo-Spacian Prodigy Dragon][img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/5613/254867g.jpg[/img] LORE: [b]When this card is Normal Summon: you can target 1 "Elemental HERO" monster in your Graveyard and Special Summon that monster. While this card is in your Graveyard: you can banish 2 "Elemental HERO" monsters in your Graveyard to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. You can only use the effect of "Neo-Spacian Prodigy Dragon" once per Duel.[/b][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 4, 2011 Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 [center][center]Okay, the ATK and DEF are great, balanced.[/center][/center] [center][center]The double MST effect is exceptional, the same for Karma Cut.[/center][/center] [center][center]Just remove the last effect that would Summon something when it destroyed, orelse its death would lead to another one.[/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]7.8/10[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 I'm guessing you drew those yourself, which are reasonable for the art for Prodigy Dragon, I know too frequently is too much, but why only ONCE per duel? Seems a bit too rare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklord Draxon Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 @[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/59518-therrion/"]Therrion[/url]: Thanks for the comments rates and criticisms. I made a minor change to the last eff so now its different. I hope it is more to your liking. @[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/86789-ragnarok1945/"]ragnarok1945[/url]: Well I am glad you asked that. Prodigy dragon is like that cuz you can use "cards of consonance" on it and it's prefect if you want to use Dragon Neos effect but i guess i can make it once per turn unless ppl think it is a little too broken. And Yes i did draw those myself. @Everyone: check out these cards. I love the concept I came up with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [center][center]I apologize, I didn't see the second card. Nice art btw[/center][/center] [center][center]The once per duel is a nice effect on it. I dislike how it goes perfect with two Level 4 E-Heros.[/center][/center] [center][center]Maybe make the Synchro Lv. 9 so it requires a Level 3 like Avian and Burstinatrix [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]8/10 [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='Therrion' timestamp='1312522276' post='5415873'] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]I apologize, I didn't see the second card. Nice art btw [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]The once per duel is a nice effect on it. I dislike how it goes perfect with two Level 4 E-Heros. [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]Maybe make the Synchro Lv. 9 so it requires a Level 3 like Avian and Burstinatrix [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]8/10 [/quote] If you make it level nine you could just use white stone of legend and get a blue eyes out of it lol As for the cards themselves I think I entered the same contest lol and I like yours better than mine. It is very balanced and tuners that can revive themselves should have some drawback (notice how all of them do) so you could either go the route of Bulb and Spore, but the only other option I see is doing like Plague where he banishes himself. Great cards[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklord Draxon Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 @[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/59518-therrion/"]Therrion[/url]: it would be nice if the synchro was level 9 but i thought "Why don't i make the summoning requirements obvious" and you don't have to use the tuner i made to Synchro Summon it. Like you can use a "Debris Dragon" with 2 level 3 "Elemental Hero monsters like avian and burstinatrix. Just giving you some possibilities on the how to some it with changing the level of the synchro. It also gives the spell "Hero's Bond" a new meaning. @ [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/348533-beginning446/"]Beginning446[/url]: Thanks for the comments and criticisms. But I was having trouble making the eff of Prodigy Dragon. I thought the normal summon eff is basic. But i needed a way to special summon it from the Grave with out making it broken. What is your opinion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Like I said it either has to be once per duel (spore and bulb) or it has to remove itself (Plague) those are really your on two options lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 [quote name='Darklord Draxon' timestamp='1312512260' post='5415567'] @[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/59518-therrion/"]Therrion[/url]: Thanks for the comments rates and criticisms. I made a minor change to the last eff so now its different. I hope it is more to your liking. @[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/86789-ragnarok1945/"]ragnarok1945[/url]: Well I am glad you asked that. Prodigy dragon is like that cuz you can use "cards of consonance" on it and it's prefect if you want to use Dragon Neos effect but i guess i can make it once per turn unless ppl think it is a little too broken. And Yes i did draw those myself. @Everyone: check out these cards. I love the concept I came up with. [/quote] all right that makes sense. You going to add more to the archetype here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklord Draxon Posted August 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 @[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/86789-ragnarok1945/"]ragnarok1945[/url]:Well I guess I can make more Elemental Hero Dragn-type monsters to help out Dragon Neos. Just give me some time to create the new architype. I thought that Prodigy Dragon's eff to get stratos was a good combo but I guess creating an architype will work too. @[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/348533-beginning446/"]Beginning446[/url]: Ok thanks for teh opinion. I guess I will keep it ass a spore or Glow-up Bulb eff then. I want it so that you can special it once but after that you are on your own. cuz if it had that plague eff to banish itself then ppl will abuse Prodigy Dragon and activate cards like burial from a D.D. or if ppl actually use it Return from the D.D. so that i my opinion on it. @everyone: Anyone else can help and comment and rate and etc. Look at them and see what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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