Yu-Gi-Oh Fanatic Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Hello everyone I am new here and I would like to announce the making of my first card. I have great experience playing yugioh and I hope I can transfer that into card making. Well here you go, I call it "Oky" The Demon of Great Return: I hope you like it and I would like suggestions, OCG grammer mistakes, and or complements and keep in mind that this is my first card. By see you next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Title:"Oky" --> OkyThe --> theEffectAdd that when it's Summoned, it must be in Defense Position."While this card is in face-up Attack Position, this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle."Incredible for your first card.9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Great for your first card! And yeah, Oky not "Oky" 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fundors rider Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 This card iz cool, i'm newly registered here and i love it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Perhaps give it a background but its very good for your first ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fundors rider Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Here is my first card. I like it and i hope u do 2. I think i should change the effect as its not very good :???. Please give suggestions (attatched to post) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu-Gi-Oh Fanatic Posted February 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Hey thanks for the comments a set is coming up soon since I got the day off thank god Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Here is my first card. I like it and i hope u do 2. I think i should change the effect as its not very good :???. Please give suggestions (attatched to post) Excuse me I know your new so im not gonna shout like other members but as a friendly heads up, it is Forbidden to post your cards in other peoples threads ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fundors rider Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 :oops: whoops sorry, i guess i should have made my own thred. soooo sorry everybody... :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Nice for your first card, well done. ^^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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