Dr. Lecter Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 This is my first, I didn't know how to word it exactly so I tried my best, please let me know what you think. And if you have advice I'd love to hear it. [img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/2532/464091.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 nice... hurts you more though, I'd switch it so you discard and they take burn damage... Wonderful first card, you should of put this in realistic cards! 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Lecter Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Thanks haha is the OCG good though? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.B X Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 Am not sure what the effect is exactly because of the way its worded, but ill try to fix it. OCG Correction: Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points. If you do, your opponent must select 2 cards from his/her hand and discard them. Been a while since I rated a card, but until you correct the OCG errors ill give it a 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Lecter Posted August 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [quote name='M.B X' timestamp='1312625627' post='5419123'] Am not sure what the effect is exactly because of the way its worded, but ill try to fix it. OCG Correction: Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points. If you do, your opponent must select 2 cards from his/her hand and discard them. Been a while since I rated a card, but until you correct the OCG errors ill give it a 4/10. [/quote] thanks, but the other version of this card is in realistic cards now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duck_Sauce Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 Minor OCG errors, but good card overall, especially for your first. Nice and balanced. Artwork: 10/10 Effect Balance: 10/10 OCG: 9/10 Overall: 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
おジャマ・キング Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 It's OP and has bad OCG... 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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