Fundors rider Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 I've started my cards. My first card ever...Xaran the angel of deathhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/attachment.php?aid=22749(I really should get another effect; any suggestions?)Number 2...Minean of shadow.http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/attachment.php?aid=22750 Do u like them any tips and improvements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Please post IMG codes, when you do i shall rate them ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteamboatStitch Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Ok, Minean is a normal monster, but I see no errors with it. People tend to dislike the Normies around here.Xaran is way over-powered. I mean to the max. I don't even think making it more hard to summon would curb that. Also, effects don't need to be typed in all-caps. (LIKE THIS) 6/10 overall, good effort, but needs improvements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fundors rider Posted February 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 is that right?(they r now hyperlinked):???: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteamboatStitch Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 It's best to use IMG codes. Get a Photobucket account and upload your pictures there, then copy/paste the IMG code into your post. Then your picture will be desplayed, no clicking needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fundors rider Posted February 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 OK sure i'll do that....thanks. In the meantime i have changed Xaran [attachment=22753] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteamboatStitch Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 The effect is better but still overpowered. (also noticed some grammar/OCG errors which I can help with if you like.) I propose adding a Star Level limit to the monsters that Xaran can bring back from the Graveyard. After all, being able to bring back 1 Dark monster from the Graveyard each End-Phase is quite a feat, especially if your or your opponent's deck is filled with powerful Dark types (e.g. Summoned Skull, Dark Magician etc.) so adding a limit to the Star Level, or adding a cost to your Lifepoints per summon would greatly help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fundors rider Posted February 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 Thanks :-D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteamboatStitch Posted February 13, 2008 Report Share Posted February 13, 2008 No problem, if you ever want to ask more questions, don't be afraid to, you can message me via PM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bleyy Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 They are good, although there are minor errors in the writing of that angel of death (you said: 'summon dark monster', it should be 'summon 1 Dark monster'), and it is a overpowered, seeing as you only have to sacrifice 2 monsters to get this super-powered card. I would say if you want to keep the effect, make the monster weaker. Overall:7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lurker77 Posted February 14, 2008 Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 (you said: 'summon dark monster'' date=' it should be '[b']Special Summon[/b] 1 DARK monster'), I do agree that the star level should be higher and his ATK should be lower. like 2000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fundors rider Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Thanks guys for all your replies.I'll get on with editing my cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fundors rider Posted February 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 [/font]Xaran the angel of death.How about now, he has less attack , he can only summon at a cost of 200 life points and he can only summon monsters with a defense of less than 1500 points. [attachment=22964] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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