falconfy118 Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 these are other cards of my Angel Card Set. i hope you'll like them [img]http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/9479/462923.jpg[/img] Effect: 1 "Angel" tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters. When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your opponent’s Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent’s Life Points. When this card declares an attack You can change the battle position of the Attack Target. When this card is selected as an Attack Target, you can change this card's battle position. [img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/9479/462923.jpg[/img] Description: This Angel was banned by Heaven because of his sin. But he learned to get by on his own... [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/9479/462923.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is Tribute Summoned by tributing 1 "Angel" monster, select 1 monster and 1 Spell or Trap card on the field: Destroy the selected cards. [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/9479/462923.jpg[/img] Effect: Once per Duel, When this card is sent to the graveyard, You can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this card in Defense-position with 500 ATK and DEF. Please comment and vote them!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 [center][center]Simiel is a bit weak. No protection built in, though I like the effect. [/center][/center] [center][center]Ophiel is a Normal Monster, nuff said. Art is GREAT, Image credit to Google or someone specific? [/center][/center] [center][center]Monarch should say "When this card is Tribute Summoned by tributing 1 "Angel" monster, select 1 monster and 1 Spell or Trap card on the field: Destroy the selected cards." [/center][/center] [center][center]Noriel is broken, if it wasn't a Tuner it wouldn't be. Make the effect either:[/center][/center] [center][center]A) Once per duel[/center][/center] [center][center] B ) Only cost a discard and usable once per turn [/center][/center] [center][center]The OCG fixes for all of them (Excluding Monarch, which was already fixed) [/center][/center] [center][center]"When this card declares an attack: You can change the battle position of the attack target. When this card is selected as an Attack Target, you can change this card's battle position." [/center][/center] [center][center]Normal card is Normal. [/center][/center] [center][center]"When this card is sent to the graveyard: You can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this card in Defense-position with 500 ATK and DEF."[/center][/center] [center][center]^^^ Is incase you don't edit the effect based on my judgement. [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 6, 2011 Report Share Posted August 6, 2011 for Simiel, if you're going to change its battle position you might as well also say it can do trample damage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
falconfy118 Posted August 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 [quote name='Therrion' timestamp='1312639648' post='5419355'][center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]Art is GREAT, Image credit to Google or someone specific? [/quote] image credit to [size=6][b][url="http://wen-m.deviantart.com/"]Wen-M[/url][/b][/size], on deviantART. [quote name='Therrion' timestamp='1312639648' post='5419355'][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]Simiel is a bit weak. No protection built in, though I like the effect. Ophiel is a Normal Monster, nuff said. Art is GREAT, Image credit to Google or someone specific? Monarch should say "When this card is Tribute Summoned by tributing 1 "Angel" monster, select 1 monster and 1 Spell or Trap card on the field: Destroy the selected cards." Noriel is broken, if it wasn't a Tuner it wouldn't be. Make the effect either: A) Once per duel B ) Only cost a discard and usable once per turn The OCG fixes for all of them (Excluding Monarch, which was already fixed) "When this card declares an attack: You can change the battle position of the attack target. When this card is selected as an Attack Target, you can change this card's battle position." Normal card is Normal. "When this card is sent to the graveyard: You can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this card in Defense-position with 500 ATK and DEF." ^^^ Is incase you don't edit the effect based on my judgement [/quote] [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1312670542' post='5420091'] for Simiel, if you're going to change its battle position you might as well also say it can do trample damage [/quote] modifications applied thanks for the help and thanks for correct my english mistakes xD[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 7, 2011 Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 all right, now with the modifications, I can give your card 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
falconfy118 Posted August 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1312742639' post='5422484'] all right, now with the modifications, I can give your card 8.3/10 [/quote] thank you!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 Simiel is a weak Avenging Knight Parshath imo I don't know So I'm not really a fan Ophiel I think its okay to give 4 star 1900 atk monsters effects now but it is okay as it is I guess Azreal is a pretty decent Noriel is a weaker bulb, but if you took away "when sent to the graveyard part" and say "special summon from the graveyard" by paying the cost or something like that then I think you have the right idea now. As it is now if you don't pay the cost immediately then you loose the ability Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
falconfy118 Posted August 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 [quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1312816084' post='5424886'] Noriel is a weaker bulb, but if you took away "when sent to the graveyard part" and say "special summon from the graveyard" by paying the cost or something like that then I think you have the right idea now. As it is now if you don't pay the cost immediately then you loose the ability [/quote] I think that can activate its effect in every moment is overpowering! Special Summon a tuner monster only when you need it... :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 [quote name='falconfy118' timestamp='1312894264' post='5427318'] I think that can activate its effect in every moment is overpowering! Special Summon a tuner monster only when you need it... :/ [/quote] But it would still have the once per duel clause that's better than either have to have it come back again right after it was sent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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