Dr. Lecter Posted August 7, 2011 Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 I made these cards, I hope you like them [img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/2532/464091.jpg[/img][img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/2532/464091.jpg[/img] [img]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2532/464091.jpg[/img][img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/2532/464091.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 7, 2011 Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 [center][center]First and foremost, your improving [/center][/center] [center][center]Less OCG flaws then earlier cards.[/center][/center] [center][center]Tariji: Underpowered, alot of 900's can attack directly already, and look at Drill Barnacle. Maybe add a 2nd effect that activates when she hits them directly. Like "When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent by a direct attack: Add 1 "Ninja" or "Cover of Night" from your deck to your hand.[/center][/center] [center][center]Amuri: Underpowered also. -2 in hand (himself and the Ninja) for +1 on field, and the +1 is only a 1200 monster. Make a triggered effect attached that triggers when he is Summoned, like: "When this card is Summoned: Change 1 monster on the field to face-down Defense position. If "Cover of Night" is on the field; you can instead destroy 1 card on the field."[/center][/center] [center][center]Telika and all them are also underpowered XD (Were you scared of making to good cards?) There is a 2000 guy who can select opponent's attacks for free. Give him a slight power boost (to 2200, perhaps) but keep the cost. Also, OCG fix: "Pay 500 Life Points: You can change the target of an opponent's attacking monster."[/center][/center] [center][center]Cover of Night is basic, and I don't like that. Make it unique! Something that helps Ninja's other then just ATK boost. Like "Increase the ATK and DEF of "Ninja" monsters by 500. During your Standby Phase: Flip all "Ninja" monsters face-down. Each time a "Ninja" is Flip Summoned, return 1 card on the field to the owner's hand."[/center][/center] [center][center]8.4/10[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Lecter Posted August 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 thanks hahaha I wasn't scared just bored and had nothing better to do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 7, 2011 Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 [center][center]Nobody likes just beatdown (Besides every Protaginist in Yugioh Anime)[/center][/center] [center][center]Always try to add something that doesn't just increase/decrease attack or Summon itself or only attacks directly/can't be destroyed by battle.[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 7, 2011 Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 much better, however the first card is to weak... he really summed it up... there's nothing much for me to say... your getting better though! 7/10 8.5/10 wit corrections! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Lecter Posted August 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 thanks i'm glad you like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 7, 2011 Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 Taiji is meh. 900 atk is nothing, so you should have said each time it attacks successfully, you boost its atk by 300 or something Telika's effect is also meh. The trap card Shift can do similarly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 7, 2011 Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1312688918' post='5421105'] Telika's effect is also meh. The trap card Shift can do similarly [/quote] patrician of darkness does the same with no drawback and 2000 ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 7, 2011 Report Share Posted August 7, 2011 yeah and that's why Patrician of Darkness is better since you don't have to pay LP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas-Koot Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 Nice Cards And The First Picture Is Cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 I agree with the majority in terms of the flaws Aesthetic wise why is that group of five samurai called ninja? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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