Dr. Lecter Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 Do you have any suggestions for this card. If you've followed my work am I getting better? Tell me what you think. [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/2532/464091.jpg[/img] Lore When this monster is destroyed by an opponent's effect flip 2 coins. 2 Heads: Your opponent shuffles his/her Deck. You select one card randomly. Call it Trap, Spell, or Monster. If you call it right draw 2 cards, if you call it wrong discard 2 cards, if you cannot, pay 1000 Life points. 2 Tails: Equip this card to 1 of your opponents monsters. After 3 turns both cards are banished. 1 Heads and 1 Tails: Equip this card to 1 of your opponents monsters. Decrease the ATK and DEF of that monster by 800. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 When this monster is destroyed by an opponent's effect flip 2 coins. 2 Heads: Your opponent shuffles his/her Deck. You select one card randomly. Call it Trap, Spell, or Monster. If you call it right draw 2 cards, if you call it wrong discard 1 card, if you cannot, pay 1000 Life points. 2 Tails: Equip this card to 1 of your opponents monsters. After 2 turns both cards are banished. 1 Heads and 1 Tails: Equip this card to 1 of your opponents monsters. Decrease the ATK and DEF of that monster by 800. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Lecter Posted August 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 So I should change the amount of turns before the two cards are banished?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 Yes, and discard 1 i believe. Other that, this one is too slow and situational. Plus 800 is rather little, make it 1000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 [center][center]There are better cards in a Level 4 form, though. (Blast Sphere, I do believe, is better.)[/center][/center] [center][center]The banish should just happen imediatly, the chances of effects destroying are low, and they just wouldn't target this card.[/center][/center] [center][center]The Heads effect is fine, and the H/T effect should just flat out reduce, instead of wasting space saying its equipped, though does add more interesting features to the card.[/center][/center] [center][center]Playability: 5/10 (Tribute monsters aren't all that really good anymore.) OCG: 8/10 (More then usually given to old OCG, but you are newer then some people.) Balance: 10/10 (Nothing Overpowered about it.) Creativity: 7/10 (Better then most other cards you have made, your improving ) Name: 4/5 Pic: 5/5 Total: 39/50 (7.8/10)[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 8, 2011 Report Share Posted August 8, 2011 2 tails effect it's not too likely to get pulled off for waiting 3 turns you should have made it at most 2 turns, but beyond that everything else is fine the way it is 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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