PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 9, 2011 Report Share Posted August 9, 2011 At cousin's house and due to boredom.. I started this Thunder archtype called "Hurricanos". Back at home and trying to think about cards... I decided to start a Sub-Archtype for the Hurricanos called: "T.S." [(Thunder Storm)] Most of them will be tuners and Synchros. [spoiler=(Monsters)] [spoiler=(Will of Lightning)] [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/8418/398660r.jpg[/img] Cannot be Special Summoned. If you do not control a face-up "Hurricanos" monster, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, if this card is targeted for an attack, destroy the attacking monster and banish this card during the end of the Battle Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Lightning Wolf)] [img]http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4411/398660.jpg[/img] If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card destroys a monster by battle, return the destroyed monster to the bottom of your opponent's deck. [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Wings of Lightning)] [img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/2526/398660c.jpg[/img] Cannot be Special Summoned except by it's own effect. If a "Hurricanos" monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon this card from your deck. Select 1 monster from your graveyard and banish this face-up monster and the selected monster in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Synchro monster from your Extra Deck (this is treated as a Synchro Summon),whose Level equals the total Levels of the banished monster and negate it's effect. Banish the Synchro during the 2nd Standby Phase after this card's activation. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=(Sychros)] [spoiler=(T.S. Dragon)] [img]http://i54.tinypic.com/2a4vdrm.jpg[/img] 1 "Hurricanos" tuner + 1 or more "Hurricanos" non-tuners. When this card is Synchro Summoned, select 1 monster your opponent controls. Special Summon 1 "Storm Token"(Thunder-Type/Light/Level 6/ATK ?/DEF ?). The token's ATK and DEF equals the Original ATK and DEF of the selected monster. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 Nice, its been awhile since I've seen Thunder types! for Lightning wolf: all you need is This card inflicts Piercing damage, not the whole defense thing. 8/10 I'd really like to see more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1312934558' post='5428983'] Nice, its been awhile since I've seen Thunder types! for Lightning wolf: all you need is This card inflicts Piercing damage, not the whole defense thing. 8/10 I'd really like to see more! [/quote] umm...thanks for the rating... And I'm still afraid to post a tuner for this archtype.... DX I will post it 1 day...maybe today...idk.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dontgetmadgetglads Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 in general the cards are fine but you should change how you word them. for example: insted of putting "If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent" you should put "if this card attacks a defence position monster with lower DEF then this cards ATK, inflict the differance as battle damage". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 [quote name='dontgetmadgetglads' timestamp='1312938325' post='5429104'] "if this card attacks a defence position monster with lower DEF then this cards ATK, inflict the differance as battle damage". [/quote] >_> http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/250644-konami-new-card-grammar-rules/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 I would like to see tuner and Synchro first. Shame the 2nd card only have 1600, make it 1800 and it will be used in Generic. But rather OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 too long since I've seen Thunder support 2nd card is a bit weak though, make it 1900 atk and you'll be good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 These look good so far, although, the first one needs a better picture, its very blurry. And |I agree with the above; Raise the 2nd's ATK to 1800-1900 and maybe make it a level 4? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordanPark24 Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 Do you need all the spoilers? Just post the cards okay? I don't feel like going through spoiler after spoiler to find your cards. I know they're nifty little gadgets, but don't over use them. ANYWAY The first one's effect was messed up in the begging. I think you meant, "This card cannot be Special Summoned." Otherwise, pretty cool! Thunder-Types are such a rare breed nowadays. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 [quote name='JordanPark24' timestamp='1312954760' post='5429580'] Do you need all the spoilers? Just post the cards okay? I don't feel like going through spoiler after spoiler to find your cards. I know they're nifty little gadgets, but don't over use them. ANYWAY The first one's effect was messed up in the begging. I think you meant, "This card cannot be Special Summoned." Otherwise, pretty cool! Thunder-Types are such a rare breed nowadays. [/quote] Do you want me to post all the monsters in 1 Spoiler and let them be all unorganized? Fixed Wolf's effect. Added Wings of Lighting(I know some of you saw this one) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 it's Winged Beast, not Winged-Beast "Select 1 monster from your graveyard and banish this face-up monster and the selected monster in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Synchro monster from your Extra Deck (this is treated as a Synchro Summon),whose Level equals the total Levels of the banished monster and negate it's effect" <---you might want to limit that to once per turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordanPark24 Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 [quote name='✪✪✪~Star~✪✪✪' timestamp='1313001447' post='5430684'] Do you want me to post all the monsters in 1 Spoiler and let them be all unorganized? Fixed Wolf's effect. Added Wings of Lighting(I know some of you saw this one) [/quote] I'd rather have them all in one spoiler and look at all the monsters in one shot than have to open each spoiler to view each separate card. It's just time consuming to both write out the spoiler tags and click through them. Most people just do: [spoiler=Monsters]Monster cards appear here[/spoiler]. It seems a lot easier and if you have a set with more than five cards, it becomes extremely tedious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted August 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2011 Added and Started T.S. Sub-Type!!! Added T.S. Dragon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted August 11, 2011 Report Share Posted August 11, 2011 Thunder Archtype?!?!? Wow! It's been a while seeing one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 11, 2011 Report Share Posted August 11, 2011 plain effect You should have also put restrictions on the token usage or something like that, otherwise it's going to be XYZ or synchro food right off the bat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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