[Miror B.] Negima! Magister Negi Magi [Your.DEK] 15/Holy crap this is getting big.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Yes. A Pop Culture set in the Your.DEK brawl. Gonna get huge I promise you :3

Anyway, set's based off of the manga [url="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Negima!_Magister_Negi_Magi"]Negima! Magister Negi Magi[/url]. Note, this is not Negima Neo!, so no Suka cards, even though I'll end up using pics from Neo since they are the better ones.

The theme is sort of an /Assault Mode theme from the game, though I plan to alter it by making it more meta worthy, one of those being allowing them to be Summoned from the freaking hand ):<.

I'm attempting new OCG, and no I won't post lore unless it's unreadable, so don't ask otherwise.

Amyway, on to the cards!

[spoiler=Negi Springfield and the Main Spell!]
[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/NegiSpringfield-PactioMaster.png[/img]

[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/Pactio.png[/img]
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[spoiler=Power Characters]
[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/InvincibleFigher-JackRakan.png[/img]
[spoiler=Jack Rakan's Lore]

1 Tuner + 1 or more "Pactio" monsters
Cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon or its own effect. This card gains attacks equal to the number of non-Tuners used to Synchro Summon it. When this monster attacks a Defense Position monster: You can inflict piercing damage to your opponent; Any battle damage inflicted this way is halved. At the end of the Battle Phase: Destroy all monsters that battled with this card. During the End Phase if this monster was sent to the Graveyard by your opponent's card: Banish 1 level 6 or higher monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon this card.
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[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/AgelessMage-KonoeKonoemon.png[/img]
^I think I got it wrong but I basically said you can't Special Summon him from the extra deck except by Synchro Summon.
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[spoiler=Side Characters and support spells]
[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/AnyaCocolova.png[/img]

[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/ChamotheErmine.png[/img]

[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/BotchedPactio.png[/img]
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[spoiler=Student #8: Kagurazaka Asuna]
[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/KagurazakaAsuna.png[/img]

[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/KagurazakaAsuna-Pactio.png[/img]
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[spoiler=Student #13: Konoe Konoka]
[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/KonoeKonoka.png[/img]

[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/KonoeKonoka-Pactio.png[/img]
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[spoiler=Student #20: Nagase Kaede]
[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/NagaseKaede.png[/img]

[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/NagaseKaede-Pactio.png[/img]
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[spoiler=Student #27: Miyazaki Nodoka]
[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/MiyazakiNodoka.png[/img]

[img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/Mahou%20Sensei%20Negima%20dot%20dek/MiyazakiNodoka-Pactio.png[/img]
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You can take as long as you want to rate or hate, so long as you also elaborate.

[Nine Breaker]

[font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][color=#800000]Negima? Never seen it. Your cards do have solid effects and nice pictures. I especially like the Pactio! picture. Looks like you'll be able to get some strong monsters out easy with Pactio! At least with what you have now nothing looks broken to me. I'd like to see what else you come up with.[/color][/font]

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

[quote name='Nine Breaker' timestamp='1313267000' post='5439934']
[font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif][color=#800000]Negima? Never seen it.[/color][/font]
[/quote]
Get off YCM. Go to a manga reading place. Read it. NAO!

But thanks for the comment.

[▼AlcaNdeR▼]

Never seen this manga. Cards are good and play well together, nothing seems broken to me neither, yet. Pictures are good but a bit blurry, seen some minor OCG errors.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

[quote name='▼AlcaNdeR▼' timestamp='1313278764' post='5440449']
yet.
[/quote]
Yet (:<

[quote name='▼AlcaNdeR▼' timestamp='1313278764' post='5440449']
Pictures are good but a bit blurry, seen some minor OCG errors.
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Pictures will probably stay blurry since Manga/Anime shots are hard to find :/

Also, please point out the errors, I can't fix what I don't know.

[▼AlcaNdeR▼]

[b]For Pactio! Master:[/b]
"If this card attacks a Defense Position monster: destroy that monster with this card's effect. (Just the 'immediately' word isn't required).
[b]Pactio!:[/b]
"Tribute 1 monster you control: Special Summon 1 monster whose name includes the Tributed monster's name from your hand or Deck."
[b]Asuna:[/b]
just the piercing effect should be: "inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent" same for the other card.

And that's it. I said they are minor.

[Glogatha]

Agreed with the above except, I'm pretty sure immediatly isn't required, but makes the effect better, anywho, decks that rely on a specific card(s) have hard times...
anyways, I like them, just don't get caught without Negi or Pacito! D:

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Immediately prevents flip effects from activating.

Othwise ty and I'll fix it.

[burnpsy]

Asuna needs to be immune to Spells.[/referenceonlyMirorwillget]

Also, add some sort of effect on Negi's card to allow him to enter Raiten Sousou form, or it'll just make the form suck when you add it later (unless you intend to give Eva that effect).

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

[quote name='burnpsy' timestamp='1313284132' post='5440652']
Asuna needs to be immune to Spells.[/referenceonlyMirorwillget]
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[img]http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/13954825/images/1298094248879.jpg[/img]

I'll either try to work that into Asuna, or I'll just make a different form. Not sure if it would be OP'd with that effect added in or not.

[burnpsy]

I added to my post while you were replying.

But yeah, how did you forget that? lol

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

I don't even know how i forgot. I guess the series just hadn't pointed it out for a while.

The set's still progression. I'll work on the Magica Erebia stuff further down the road.

[burnpsy]

OK then.

In any case, if I may suggest this:

Make Chamo with an effect that adds Pactio to your hand from the grave/deck.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

I remember last time I made Chamo a trap that did something then did exactly what you said, since I couldn't really see him as a very good monster at the time.

Just wait for Rakan though. He's just screaming to be a huge OP'd beatstick.

[burnpsy]

TBQH, I was gonna make this for Your.DEK, but you beat me to it.

I had a few ideas on making the concept work without Pactio needing to be a seperate card.

Oh well, time to go come up with a re-worked idea for my Your.DEK.

And yeah, Rakan HAS to be OP'd.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Updated four more cards, and yes Anya is foreshadowing Synchro Monsters.

[T3RA PROWL3R]

This WILL get big.

Read/watched the Anime/Manga (English > Jap + Subs IMO) a long time ago; Gotta do it again.


[quote name='burnpsy' timestamp='1313284132' post='5440652']
Asuna needs to be immune to Spells.[/referenceonlyMirorwillget]
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:I

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

[quote name='T3RA PROWL3R' timestamp='1313392464' post='5444460']
This WILL get big.
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Hell yeah.

[T3RA PROWL3R]

Can't wait to see it when it is done.

[Lucas-Koot]

Good Cards, But Pactio! Has A Very High Defence, I Know Its Pop Culture Cards, But Still A High Defence.:--)
I Give It A 8.7/10.:--)

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

What do you mean by Pactio! having a high defense? It's a Spell Card :/

[T3RA PROWL3R]

I think he was talking about Konoe.

2500 ATK and 3000 DEF

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Big update with 7 new cards including a "Pactio!" tuner and Jack Rakan the overpowered freak that just won't die (though the card doesn't do him justice due to balance issues). Also, if anyone can find a good pic of Nagase Kaede with her Pactio cloak artifact, please let me know.

Also, Konoka having so much attack and defense shouldn't be an issue since it's a Semi-Nomi.

[burnpsy]

Why can't you just use the pactio card art?

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

I don't like the white in the background.