cRAGLE 62 Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 [img]http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/6097/162501.jpg[/img] [img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is Special Summoned, it gains 500 ATK and DEF. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of "Forsaken Lands-Dead Space" increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 1000 instead. When this card is destroyed except as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, add 1 "Forsaken" monster from your Deck to your hand. [img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Forsaken Lands- Dead Space. When this card is destroyed except as a result of battle, Special Summon any "Forsaken" monsters used to Tribute Summon this card. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, destroy all Defense Position monsters they control. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, send the top 3 cards of their Deck to the Graveyard. If there is a Monster Card amongst them, you may Special Summon that monster to your side of the field in Attack Position. It cannot attack or be used as a Synchro Material monster. [img]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Lore:If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of "Forsaken Lands- Dead Space" you can destroy one monster your opponent controls. If you use this effect, Special Summon one "Forsaken" monster from your Graveyard during the End Phase, except "Cyria-Forsaken Hunter". It is destroyed during the End Phase of your next turn. [img]http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/6097/162501.jpg[/img] [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Yes, I know there are no Trap ritual cards, but I wanted to try something different. Give my your ideas [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/9357/162501s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set this card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of either "Quest for the Damned" or "Condemned Journey" If this card was Summoned by the effect of "Quest for the Damned", it gains the following effect: Once per turn, you can return 1 removed from play "Forsaken" card to your Graveyard to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If this card was Summoned by the effect of "Condemned Journey", it gains the following effect: Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Forsaken" monster with 1300 or less DEF from your removed from play zone. [img]http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Lore: Activate only when there are 6 or more "Forsaken" monsters with different names removed from play. Both players select 1 card in their Graveyard and add it to their hand, then, depending on which type of card your opponent chose, you may activate 1 of the following effects. Monster: You may Special Summon 1 of your removed from play "Forsaken" monsters. Spell: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points. Trap: Your opponent cannot conduct their next Battle Phase. [img]http://img542.imageshack.us/img542/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 "Forsaken" monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, all cards you control are destroyed, except this card. Monsters destroyed by this effect are removed from play. You can then destroy cards on your opponent's side of the field equal to the number of cards you destroyed by this card's effect. [img]http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/6097/162501.jpg[/img] [img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/9357/162501s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/6097/162501.jpg[/img] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/6097/162501.jpg[/img] [img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/1143/162501u.jpg[/img] Maybe a bit overpowered, but it was meant to be similar to Infernity Barrier.... [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Lore: Activate only while you have 7 or more "Forsaken" monsters with different names removed from play. Send all cards you control to the Graveyard then destroy all cards your opponent controls. Then, you can Special Summon up to 3 Level 4 or lower "Forsaken" monsters from your removed from play zone. These monsters are treated as though they have been Summoned by the effect of "Forsaken Lands - Dead Space". This is meant to be overpowered. It's the win condition [img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Lore:You can discard 1 "Forsaken" monster from your hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Forsaken" monster with 2000 DEF or less from your Hand or Deck, except "Keyazi- Forsaken Warlock". If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Forsaken Lands - Dead Space", you can also Special Summon monsters from your Graveyard, and banished monsters . [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/8261/162501l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/8757/162501h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/1342/162501f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img806.imageshack.us/img806/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, you can discard a card from your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Forsaken" monster from your Graveyard. Remove it from play during the End Phase. If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Forsaken Lands- Dead Space", increase this card's ATK by 800. [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned. If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Forsaken Lands- Dead Space", infict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. When this card attacks, change the Battle Position of the attack target. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can add 1 "Forsaken Lands- Dead Space" from your Deck to your hand. [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/6468/162501i.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, you may Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Forsaken" monster from your hand. While this card is face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot select another "Forsaken" monster as an attack target. [img]http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/6097/162501.jpg[/img] [img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to 400x the number of your removed from play "Forsaken" monsters (MAX. 4) This card cannot attack during the turn you use this effect. If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Forsaken Lands - Dead Space" it can attack during the turn you use this effect. [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/2889/162501v.jpg[/img] Lore: [1 "Forsaken" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters] This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. (Damage Calculation is applied normally) When this card battles, you may add 1 Trap Card from your Deck to your Hand. While this card is face-up on the field, once per turn during either player's turn, you may activate a Trap Card from your hand. [img]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/6097/162501.jpg[/img] [img]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/6468/162501i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/1840/162501d.jpg[/img] Lore: 1 "Forsaken Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned you can destroy all cards on the field. If you have 5 or more "Forsaken" monsters removed from play when you use this effect. this card is not destroyed. If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponents Life Points, you may remove from play 1 card in their Graveyard. [img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6097/162501.jpg[/img] Lore: If this card is the only card in your hand during your Standby Phase, you may Special Summon it. When this card is Special Summoned, you can add 1 "Forsaken" card from your Deck to your hand, except "Vyrdun - Forsaken Scout". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cRAGLE 62 Posted May 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2012 advice appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ASDss Posted May 5, 2012 Report Share Posted May 5, 2012 Some pics are overused... like the first one And the field is pretty overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJP12409 Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 The field also makes the summon of some monsters impossible, such as Drahn - Foresaken Paladin. Because it is impossible to summon paladin in the first place, you cannot use the field effect to summon another because the field spell specifically says "1 monster of the same name." Im not going to read all of the cards, but that mistake stuck out to me. Try reworking your cards a bit (balance is the biggest issue; if you're having trouble, compare your card to the effects of official cards. If your card seems like a MUCH better option, its overpowered. Also, don't be afraid to mention that a card would be limited or semi-limited if you're having trouble balancing the card.) Again, more of a work-in-progress and needs some balancing and card compatibility fixing, but a nice set in general. Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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