My First Xyzs

[TheEffinZ]

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[center][center]Okay so this is my first time doing Xyzs (Exceed), so don't be afriad to be harsh.
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[center][center]No.80 Gigaflame Dragimera
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[center][center][color=#ff0000][size=5][spoiler=lore][/size][/color]2 Level 5 monsters
Once per turn; detach 1 Xyz-Material monster from this card to destroy 1 monster on your opponents field with less ATK than the detached monsters ATK. You must pay 400 Life Points every turn if this card has no Xyz-Material monsters attached to this card.[/spoiler]
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[center][center]And the Chaos Number form.
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[center][center][color=#ff0000][size=5]Chaos No.80 Teraflame Dragimera[/size][/color]
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[center][center][color=#ff0000][size=5][spoiler=lore][/size][/color]"No.80 Gigaflame Dragimera" + 2 Level 5 monsters
Once per turn; detach 1 Xyz-Material monster from this card to destroy all monsters on your opponents field with less ATK than the detached monsters ATK and inflict 300 points of damage to your opponents Life Points for every monster destroyed. You must pay 600 Life Points every turn if this card has no Xyz-Material monsters attached to this card. If this card is destroyed by the result of battle, Special Summon 1 "No.80 Gigaflame Dragimera" from your Graveyard to your field with its ATK reduced by 500 points.[/spoiler]
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[BFG Studios]

Its best to stay away from Number monsters since they are a plot device for the YGO series, ZEXAL

Other than the names, the OCG could use some work
The major change you should make is make it say "Xyz Material", not "Xyz-Material" like you have it

for now ill go with a 8/10