Thunder Lasher Dragon

[Varionius]

[img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/554/thunde1.png[/img]

[spoiler'Lore']When a Monster you control is destroyed, activate one of the following effects:
*Destroy 1 card on the field.
*Pay 500 Life Points: Add 1 Trap card from your graveyard to your hand.
When this card battles a monster, activate one of the following effects:
*This card gains 300 ATK until the End Phase.
*Select 1 Spell or Trap card on the field; Destroy it.
*Place 1 Thunder Counter on this card. When this card is removed from the field: Monsters your opponent control lose 500 ATK and DEF for turns equal to the number of Thunder Counter(s) on this card.[/spoiler]

[Mecha Love]

May I ask why it is a Ritual Monster?

[Varionius]

It isn't this is a ritual, this is a ritual: [spoiler'_'] [img]http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/b/b2/Demise,KingofArmageddonDR04-EN-SR.png[/img] [/spoiler], mine is much darker.

[Therrion]

[center][center]Nice Obelisk-ish background.[/center][/center]
[center][center]For future reference, many RC users don't like fake-like backgrounds, I on the otherhand like it... XD[/center][/center]
[center][center]1) Make it not recycle Spells, to recycle Spells, 500 LP isn't enough. Recycling Spells usually requires many cards to do.[/center][/center]
[center][center]2) Not being able to die by Card Effects should be removed. The card is very easy to Summon via Darkness Metal.[/center][/center]
[center][center]Playability: 7/10
OCG: 7/10 [Old OCG]
Balance: 8/10
Creativity: 9/10
Total: 31/40[/center][/center]

[Varionius]

Tnx, edited.

[Therrion]

[center][center]Much better now [/center][/center]
[center][center]Don't know if you noticed, but you didn't link new Lore.[/center][/center]
[center][center]OCG: "When a Monster you control is destroyed, activate one of the following effects: *Destroy 1 card on the field. *Pay 500 Life Points: Add 1 Trap card from your graveyard to your hand. When this card battles a monster, activate one of the following effects: *This card gains 300 ATK until the End Phase. *Select 1 Spell or Trap card on the field; Destroy it. *This card gains 50 ATK. *Place 1 Thunder Counter on this card. When this card is removed from the field: Monsters your opponent control lose 500 ATK and DEF for turns equal to the number of Thunder Counter(s) on this card."[/center][/center]

[Mecha Love]

Obelisk Blue = Isn't a background for Realistic Cards.
Next closest card frame = Ritual. Hence me stating it was a Ritual monster.
A very subtle fix I'd go for. Make the second effect [When this card battles a monster...] on a new line. It looks as though its part of the last effect.

[Varionius]

Tnx, edited.

[ragnarok1945]

for the battling a monster effect, the 50 atk boost isn't really needed, it's too small

just keep the 300 atk gain for 1 turn and that's enough

[MibeR]

[quote]Obelisk Blue = Isn't a background for Realistic Cards.[/quote]
They for Divine.

Try to reorganize the effect. My eyes hurt. Like this

When a Monster you control is destroyed, activate one of the following effects:
*Destroy 1 card on the field.
*Pay 500 Life Points: Add 1 Trap card from your graveyard to your hand.
When this card battles a monster, activate one of the following effects:
*This card gains 300 ATK until the End Phase.
*Select 1 Spell or Trap card on the field; Destroy it.
*This card gains 50 ATK.
*Place 1 Thunder Counter on this card. When this card is removed from the field: Monsters your opponent control lose 500 ATK and DEF for turns equal to the number of Thunder Counter(s) on this card.

[Varionius]

@Ragnarok, Syns: Tnx, Edited.

[groniack]

I like this card. It gives you many options to defeat your opponent . I like this kind of cards and the template is good too.

9,3 / 10

keep it up

[Varionius]

Tnx for the rating, groniack.

[☼◄Firewolf►☼]

Wow Awesome Card, Awesome Effect, Awome Picture And It's Balanced!:--)
I Give You A 9.8/10 For This Card!:--)

[Varionius]

Tnx.

[☼◄Firewolf►☼]

[quote name='Wyren' timestamp='1313860729' post='5457110']
Tnx.
[/quote]
Your Welcome.:--)

[ragnarok1945]

[quote name='Wyren' timestamp='1313823101' post='5456601']
@Ragnarok, Syns: Tnx, Edited.
[/quote]

np, now I can give you 9.2/10 for your modifications

[Varionius]

Tnx.