Enma Ai Posted August 22, 2011 Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 Just a Fusion Monster Ive wanted to do for a while, tell me what you think :] [img]http://i1213.photobucket.com/albums/cc469/ZoidRose/MusicianLord.png[/img] [b]vvvvvv READ [i]THIS[/i] EFFECT vvvvvv[/b] [i]Musician King + 1 Spellcaster-Type Monster[/i] [i]This card can not be destroyed by monsters or monster effects with 2000 or less original ATK. Once per turn you can select 1 Spellcaster-Type monster in your Graveyard and Banish it, this card gains ATK equal to half the selected monsters ATK until the End Phase.[/i] If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle you can Banish 1 Fusion Monster in your Graveyard to negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster. Please give any suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Knight Posted August 22, 2011 Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 Too annoying to summon, honestly. Only decent way would be to Instant Fusion Musician King and then summon this, but that's far too much trouble to go through for something with barely any self-protection and a very weak secondary effect. Make it more worthwhile to get out. What would be OP'ed on anything else, would be a nice fit for this guy. Personally, I might give it an effect to make a non-Tuner into one once per turn. It would almost make sense with it being a musician and whatnot. *crickets* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted August 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 I edited the effect to make using the musician king more worth while. Thanks for the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suibon Posted August 22, 2011 Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 [center][center][font=courier new,courier,monospace]I quit honestly thought the image was that of a fireman. I still can't quite get it yet.[/font][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][font=courier new,courier,monospace]Anyhow (corrections in [b]bold[/b]):[/font][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][font=courier new,courier,monospace][b]"[/b]Musician King[b]"[/b][/font] + [b]1[/b] [font=courier new,courier,monospace]Spellcaster[b]-[/b]Type monster[/font][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][font=courier new,courier,monospace][quote]This card can only be Fusion Summoned with the above [b]F[/b]usion[b]-M[/b]aterial monsters. This card cannot be destroyed[b] by battle or by the effects of Effect Monsters with 2000 ATK or less[/b]. Once per turn, you can [s]remove 1 Spell[/s][s]caster-Type monster in your Graveyard from play[/s] [b]Banish 1 Spellcaster-Type monster in your Graveyard[/b]. If you do, this card gains ATK equal to the [b]Banished monster's ATK[/b] until the End Phase.[/quote][/font][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][font=courier new,courier,monospace]I agree with Ibashi effect-wise.[/font][/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted August 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 [quote name='Suibon' timestamp='1313982150' post='5461428'] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][font=courier new,courier,monospace]I quit honestly thought the image was that of a fireman. I still can't quite get it yet.[/font] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][font=courier new,courier,monospace]Anyhow (corrections in [b]bold[/b]):[/font] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][font=courier new,courier,monospace][b]"[/b]Musician King[b]"[/b][/font] + [b]1[/b] [font=courier new,courier,monospace]Spellcaster[b]-[/b]Type monster[/font] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][font=courier new,courier,monospace]I agree with Ibashi effect-wise.[/font] [/quote] lol what? You didnt make any corrections.... my effects were already like that, you just put in your own errors and corrected them... >.>[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suibon Posted August 22, 2011 Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 [center][center][font=courier new,courier,monospace]Read the quote. You'd notice the difference between your effect before you added that last line and the quote I have in my first post here are different. Where the differences are, there's your corrections.[/font][/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted August 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 Oh right didnt see that, its hard to see bolded text in quote boxes. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 22, 2011 Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 Don't add the "can only be fusion summoned with the above monsters". It's hard enough to get it out as is. With that line it rules out replacing Musician King with King of the Swamp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted August 22, 2011 Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 Fixed Lore: [i]Musician King + 1 Spellcaster-Type monster[/i] Can only be Fusion Summoned with the above fusion material monsters. Cannot be destroyed by the effects of monsters with an original ATK of 2000 or less. Once per turn: You can send 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from your Graveyard to your Banish Pile; This card gains ATK equal to half the banished monster's ATK until the End Phase. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle: You can send 1 Fusion Monster from your Graveyard to your Banish Pile; negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster. [quote name='Miror B.' timestamp='1313985041' post='5461528'] Don't add the "can only be fusion summoned with the above monsters". It's hard enough to get it out as is. With that line it rules out replacing Musician King with King of the Swamp. [/quote] This. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted August 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 I already removed that in the effect below it, I sort of had to since Witch of the black forest is banned and that means no l3git musician king. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suibon Posted August 22, 2011 Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 [quote name='Remnants' timestamp='1313985446' post='5461541'] Fixed Lore: [i]Musician King + 1 Spellcaster-Type monster[/i] Can only be Fusion Summoned with the above fusion material monsters. Cannot be destroyed by the effects of monsters with an original ATK of 2000 or less. Once per turn: You can send 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from your Graveyard to your Banish Pile; This card gains ATK equal to half the banished monster's ATK until the End Phase. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle: You can send 1 Fusion Monster from your Graveyard to your Banish Pile; negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster. [/quote] [center][center][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Official card grammar is so confusing.[/font][/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2011 Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 [i]Once per turn you can select 1 Spellcaster-Type monster in your Graveyard and Banish it, this card gains ATK equal to half the selected monsters ATK until the End Phase[/i] That effect is OPed, even if it is just 1 turn Suppose you banish Sorceror of Dark Magic? Its atk will jump to 4200. You might want to put a cap on the limit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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