13L00P3R Posted August 22, 2011 Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 [center][center]Legendary Doom Knight, Hellion[/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/2249/164060.jpg[/img][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] Lore:[/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]"Doomcaliber Knight" + "Legendary Fiend" This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Fusion Summon with the above Fusion Material Monsters. This card gains the effect of 1 the Fusion Material monsters listed above. During your Standby Phases, you can Banish 1 Fiend-Type monster from your hand and use the Banished cards effect. If you use this effect you cannot use the effect of The Fusion Material monster.[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineSkyDragonOsiris Posted August 22, 2011 Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 First, you may want to fix the "This card cannot be Normal Summoned, Set or Special Summoned except by this cards effect. To Fusion Summon this card you have to use the Fusion Material monster listed above" to "This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Fusion Summon with the above Fusion Material Monsters." Seriously, How do you gonna Normal Summon or Set a Fusion monster? Secondly, this Fusion Monster gets the effects of its Fusion Material Monsters". Do you think it's to OPed? I think you should fix this to: "This card gains the effects of 1 of its Fusion Material Monsters". Finally, for a Level 8 monster, do you think it's a bit too weak for this card to have only 1800 ATK. I think it's better for this card's ATK to be at least 2500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13L00P3R Posted August 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 Yeah originally It wasn't going to be a fusion so I didn't think about the summoning. Yeah I didn't wanted it to be OPed but three effects is a little much. So I'll edit it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2011 Report Share Posted August 22, 2011 nothing too new effect is reasonable, though it has no effects of its own, a little meh but overall it should be fine. Still, if it's going to gain the banished monster effect, that should only last for 1 turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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