Darkrain35 Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 I hope you like it if you want different description just comment ALPHA WAR MACHINE [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/3139/479099.jpg[/img] BETA WAR MACHINE [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/3610/479099r.jpg[/img] ULTIMATE WAR MACHINE [img]http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/3139/479099.jpg[/img] MACHINE TURRET [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3139/479099.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 Er... There a bit too simple to be an Archetype. Making 'Ultimate War Machine' a Fusion of the first 2 would work better. Making Alpha and Beta's ATK and DEF different would help too (Maybe make one Attack based and the other Defense?) I would also add some effects to spice things up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 All your cards are very simple but they do their job. in the effect of ultimate war machine you should say -> You can Special Summon this card by tributing "Alpha War Machine" and "Beta War Machine". Maybe you should add an additional effect to make "Ultimate War Machine" stronger. Since it is 1 of your first posts these cards are very good. But next time try making them more complicated and less simple. 9/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 Shame Ultimate War Machine has no effects while on the field Machine Turret is meh for 800 atk gain Lightning Blade does the same thing for warrior monsters 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkrain35 Posted September 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Thanks for your comments i said it in my first post i dont know english so good so my descriptions can be wrong. and in my next sdet im gonna do spellcaster type monsters and spell-trap cards. i need pictures so if u know some good spellcaster pictures tell me where can i get them And for war machines i will make alpha for atk and beta for def. I think ultimate is good i wont touch it. i'll make machine turret atk gain 600 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 [quote name='Darkrain35' timestamp='1314947240' post='5486039'] Thanks for your comments i said it in my first post i dont know english so good so my descriptions can be wrong. and in my next sdet im gonna do spellcaster type monsters and spell-trap cards. i need pictures so if u know some good spellcaster pictures tell me where can i get them And for war machines i will make alpha for atk and beta for def. I think ultimate is good i wont touch it. i'll make machine turret atk gain 600 [/quote] Just because you think it's good doesn't make it good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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