Dwarven King Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Thoughts/Comments/Ratings/Etc. :3 [spoiler=Field Swarm][img]http://img803.imageshack.us/img803/8916/180134.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Defense][img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/8916/180134.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Field Protector][img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/1773/180134g.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Double Attack][img]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/8916/180134.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Tuner][img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/8428/180134h.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Defense Smasher][img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8916/180134.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Big Card][img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/7642/180134w.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Big Ritual][img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/8916/180134.jpg[/img] [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/8916/180134.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spell!][img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/8916/180134.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRAP!][img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/8072/180134s.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Protective Spell][img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/8916/180134.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Synchro][img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/8916/180134.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Bump? :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas the Flame Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Front Line Soldier is OPed because you need restrictions on the summoned monsters Pikeman isn't too much different from Little Winguard's effect Hammer Wielder's trample is good, but I kind of hoped for another effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1315018504' post='5488010'] Front Line Soldier is OPed because you need restrictions on the summoned monsters Pikeman isn't too much different from Little Winguard's effect Hammer Wielder's trample is good, but I kind of hoped for another effect [/quote] Make Frontline into either a searcher like Mother Grizzly? And what effect were you expecting from Hammer Wielder? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Add lores :3 cannot see images :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 But...that takes SO much time...and I'm eating greasy food right now. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
â–¼AlcaNdeRâ–¼ Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 My review. [spoiler='Dwarven Front Line Soldier'] OCG correction: [i]"When this card is targeted for an attack: You can Special Summon 1 "Dwarven Front Line Soldier" from your hand or Deck in face-up Attack Position."[/i] Love the picture, effect seems okay. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Dwarven Pikeman'] OCG correction: [i]"During your End Phase, if this card is in Attack Position: Change it to Defense Position."[/i] really don't see the use of this card's effect, but IMO it would be better if you boost it's ATK to 1600 and his DEF to 1900 or maybe 2000. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Dwarven Protector'] OCG correction: [i]"While you control this card: "Dwarven" monsters cannot be targeted for an attack except this card. When this card is destroyed by battle: Battle Phase ends."[/i] I like this effect, it's helpful; not the same for the picture thought, I don't like it. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Dwarven Veteran'] OCG correction: [i]"This card can attack twice during each Battle Phase."[/i] Simple but you might want to add some drawback here. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Dwarven Explosive Engineer'] OCG correction: [i]"When this card leaves the field to the Graveyard: Destroy 1 Spell/Trap Card on the field. "[/i] I'ts okay but picture it's a little bit plain just for the BG. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Gorlak'] OCG correction: [i]"[/i]If this card attacks a Defense Position monster: Inflict Piercing Battle Damage to your opponent.[i]"[/i] An okay card. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Dwarven King'] OCG correction: [i]"[/i]When this card declares an attack: It must attack all monsters your opponent controls if possible; this card cannot attack directly.[i]"[/i] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Grimnir'] OCG correction: excluding the Ritual effect. [i]"For each "Dwarven" monster you control: This card gains 100 ATK. If this card attacks: Your opponent cannot activate any Spell/Trap Card(s) until the end of the Damage Step.[/i][i]"[/i] I love the picture, for the effect I don't see any problem at all. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Enraged Grimnir'] OCG correction: [i]"[/i][i]When this card is Synchro Summoned: destroy up to 2 Spell/Trap Card(s) on the field. For each "Dwarven" monster in your Graveyard: This card gains 200 ATK. [/i][i]If this card attacks: Your opponent cannot activate any Spell/Trap Card(s) until the end of the Damage Step.[/i][i] "[/i] the effect it's okay, picture is bad. [/spoiler] I'll add the other card's review later (Dwarven Rage, The Shield and the Trap Card). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted September 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 Sorry about the OCG. Most of those cards were made before the new OCG, and I didn't feel like changing them. So I just stayed with the older version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 3, 2011 Report Share Posted September 3, 2011 [quote name='Dwarven King' timestamp='1315024554' post='5488263'] Make Frontline into either a searcher like Mother Grizzly? And what effect were you expecting from Hammer Wielder? [/quote] I'm not too sure, just more than trample. If you come up with one, I'll look again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwarven King Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 Hmm...tough one. Let me think on this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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