amiryadid Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Thats my 2nd deck already and i think i realy improved,theres my 1st deck [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/261383-druid-set-complete/"]http://forum.yugiohc...d-set-complete/[/url] This is a LIGHT based deck,Rate and Comment [b][size=6]Monster Cards[/size][/b] [size=6][size=4][img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/4064/475262.jpg[/img] [size=8][b]X3[/b][/size][/size][/size] [size=6][size=4]For each LIGHT card in your field this card gains 200 ATK[/size][/size] [size=6][size=4][img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/4064/475262.jpg[/img][size=7] [size=8][b]X2[/b][/size][/size][/size][/size] [size=6][size=4][size=7][size=4]When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, increase your Life Points by the amount of Damage this card dealt.[/size][/size][/size][/size] [img]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/4064/475262.jpg[/img] When this card attacks it gains 500 ATK points. If this card is destroyed by a DARK monster you may pay 500 Life Points to place it in your hand. [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/4064/475262.jpg[/img] Tribute 1 LIGHT monster to destroy a monster on your opponents side of the field. [img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/4388/475262ll.jpg[/img] This card may Destroy a Spell or Trap card instead of attacking. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/4064/475262.jpg[/img] A Holy Prince from the Elvish Kingdoms. [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/4064/475262.jpg[/img] Once per turn,During your main phase you can remove from play a LIGHT type monster from your graveyard to increase this card's ATK and DEF by 300. [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/2756/475262i.jpg[/img] For every LIGHT type WARRIOR monster on the field this card gains 300 ATK points. [img]http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/4064/475262.jpg[/img] He won his title when a lightning hit his sword and was splitted in the middle. [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/1135/475262v.jpg[/img] [size=8][b]X2[/b][/size] If this card is used to Synchro Summon a LIGHT type monster Increase the DEF of the monster by 400. This card may be summoned in face-up defense position. [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/4064/475262.jpg[/img] When a DARK type monster attacks this card,the monster is destroyed during the End Phase of the same turn. [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/479/475262f.jpg[/img] When this Monster attacks a DARK type monster it gains 500 ATK points. For each DARK type monster in you'r opponents Graveyard this card gains 100 ATK points. [img]http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/4064/475262.jpg[/img] This card is treated as an "Order" monster. [img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/4064/475262.jpg[/img] You must have "Castle of Light" on the field to Summon this card,you must also Tribute LIGHT type monsters who's equal star level 7. When this card is only the field you may negate the effect of Spell,Trap or Effect cards by discarding a card from your hand. [size=6][b]Ritual/Fusion/Synchro Cards[/b][/size] [size=4][img]http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4064/475262.jpg[/img][/size] "Tignar,Emperor of the Order"+"Foiran,Angel of Light" This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this card destroyes a monster increase your Life Points by the amount of the destroyed monster ATK.If "Castle of Light" is on the field this card doesn't get an ATK bonus but it may attack twice. [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/4064/475262.jpg[/img] "Liradric,Captain of the Order"+"Seagan,Hutner of the Undead" When this card is Fusion Summoned to the field you gain 500 Life Points for each LIGHT type monster in the graveyard. When this card destroyes a DARK monster inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/4064/475262.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner+1 or more non-Tuner monsters. When this card is Successfully Synchro Summoned to the field Remove cards from your gravyard from play to destroy cards on your opponents side o f the field (Up to 5 cards). Increase the ATK of all LIGHT monsters on the field by 800. [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/6600/475262vb.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Special Summoned,This card can only be summoned by the effect of "Mask of Light". As long as this card is on the field no DARK type monsters can be summoned,every DARK monster summoned or on the field is destroyed. Inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent for each DARK type monster destroyed by this effect. [size=6][b]Spell Cards[/b][/size] [size=6][size=4][img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/1722/475262e.jpg[/img][/size][/size] [size=6][size=4]Increase the ATK and DEF of all monsters on the field by an amount equal to their level X100[/size][/size] [size=6][size=4][img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/4064/475262.jpg[/img] [size=8][b]X2[/b][/size][/size][/size] Increase the ATK and DEF of all LIGHT type monsters by 400. Decrease the Level of all LIGHT type monsters by 1, including the ones in your hand, may decrease the amount of monsters needed to be tributed for a tribute summon [img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/4064/475262.jpg[/img] Increase the ATK of a monster equipped with this card by 500. When a monster equipped with this card destroyes a monster,you may return 1 LIGHT card from the graveyard to your hand. [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/4064/475262.jpg[/img] [size=8][b]X2[/b][/size] Remove from play from your side of the field or your graveyard fusion materials that are listed on a LIGHT type fusion monster card and special summon that monster to your side of the field. [size=4][img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/6074/475262q.jpg[/img][/size] Add monster cards that were removed from play and monsters from your graveyard to your hand. Decrease your Life Points by 500 Life Points and discard a card from your hand for each card you add to your hand. [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/4064/475262.jpg[/img] Special Summon a level 5 or more LIGHT type monster from your hand/deck to the field. Destroy the monster in the End Phase of the turn this card was activated. [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4064/475262.jpg[/img] This card is used to Ritual Summon "Thrérion the Masked Light",you must also Tribute monsters who's equal star level is 8 [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/6074/475262q.jpg[/img] Tribute a monster from your side of the field to revive a monster from your graveyard with a level equal or lower to the tributed monster's level. [img]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/4064/475262.jpg[/img] Until the end phase of this turn,if you have "Threrion the Masked Light" on the field,Double the battle damage caused by all LIGHT type monsters on the field,excluding "Threrion the Masked Light". [img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/4064/475262.jpg[/img] Draw cards until you draw a LIGHT type monster card or a card with "Holy" in its name,than discard cards until you have 6 in your hand,for each card discarded to the graveyard increase your life points by 500. You must show your opponent every card you draw. [img]http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/4064/475262.jpg[/img] Activate when you have at least 3 monsters on the field,and one of them is a LIGHT type card. Tribute all the monsters on the field besides the LIGHT type monster,Grant that monster immunity from Spell,Trap and Effect cards and double the ATK of that monster until the End Phase of the turn this card was activated. [size=6][b]Trap Cards[/b][/size] [size=6][size=4][img]http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/4064/475262.jpg[/img][/size][/size] [size=6][size=4]Activate this card when your opponent declares an attack on a LIGHT monster on your side of the field, Equip this card to the attacked monster,increase its DEF by 500 and all of your opponents attacks must target the equipped monster.[/size][/size] [size=6][size=4][img]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/4064/475262.jpg[/img][/size][/size] As long as this card is on the field,you may remove LIGHT type monsters from your graveyard to activate one of the following effects: 1)Inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the level of the tributed monster X100 2)Increase your Life Points equal to the level of the tributed monster X100. [img]http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/4064/475262.jpg[/img] Activate this card when your opponent declares an attack,increase the DEF of all monsters on your side of the field by 500. [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/7696/475262l.jpg[/img] Activate when a monster on your side of the field is destroyed,return it to your hand instead (Damage calculations is applied normally). [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/3378/475262x.jpg[/img] Pay 1500 Life Points to activated this card. When your opponent's attacks a LIGHT monster you control,destroy the attacking monster at the end of the Battle Phase. [img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/4064/475262.jpg[/img] Use this card when your opponent inflicts battle damage to your Life Points,destroy all the cards on the field and increase your Life Points by the number of cards destroyed X500. [img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/4972/475262wy.jpg[/img] Activate when you'r opponent revives a monster, Destroy the revived monster and revive a LIGHT type monster from your graveyard with the same Level as the destroyed monster. [img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4064/475262.jpg[/img] Special Summon to your side of the field monsters from your hand and graveyard that include "Order" in their name,Pay 1000 Life Points for each monster you choose to summon. [size=6][b]That's it guys,tell me what you think,rate and comment [/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepywood Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 I see a lot of careless mistakes. Example: Once per -------turn,During------ your main phase you can remove from play a LIGHT type monster from your graveyard to increase this card's ATK and DEF by 300. (Not spacing) I like the overall concept. But the 2000 def tuner is way OP. a four star tuner that gives a bonus? Make his defense low to balance that out. It's much better than it sounds it you take into consideration all the things this card would be capable of. Favorite card: Blue mistress. (But make her attack 1000, because her ability is extremely good. If you do you should also make her level 3) Least favorite: Clider Warrior of Order (There are plenty of cards like him) Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Newsd Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 II Love The Cards But Some Of The Pics Looks SMashed In The Frame and some of em are a bit op'ed But Other That I Love Your Set 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiryadid Posted September 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 tried to fix the pictures,cant do better ,thanks for the good comments i shall re-balance those cards you guys stated,but i didnt understand what you ment when you said Not spacing,so if you could explain yourself better it would be real good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepywood Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 [quote name='amiryadid' timestamp='1315003652' post='5487522'] tried to fix the pictures,cant do better ,thanks for the good comments i shall re-balance those cards you guys stated,but i didnt understand what you ment when you said Not spacing,so if you could explain yourself better it would be real good [/quote] You use commas, and when you do you don't space. Like this: "Hi,I'm alex." Rather than this: "Hi, I'm alex." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiryadid Posted September 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 OH thanks for the comment i would fix it but its alot of work and im kinda tired so i guess ill edit it later,besides that im realy happy because of the good comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiryadid Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 Re-Balanced this card: [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/860/475262j.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
junk sorcerer Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 the amount of tribute cards are spot on. the cards are great ,but there isn't any real wow a few high attack cards but no majour effects.another thing why have a card with retributing aura when you could have sakuretsu armor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiryadid Posted September 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 Because its a continuing card,and not all the people have sakurestu armor,and i didnt give high ATK cards a real good effect because people will say their over powered. if you got any suggestions of cards i should add an effect to than just tell me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiryadid Posted September 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2011 Fixed the effects of those 2,they werent realy balanced and spelled correctly [img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/4064/475262.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KitoMP Posted September 7, 2011 Report Share Posted September 7, 2011 Pretty good set some effects are a little exagerated according to the monster lvl and atk, but i liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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