The Immortal Plane [Earthbound Support]

[Lunar Origins]

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[center][center]Once per turn, if you control no monsters: you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Immortal" card from your hand. When a face-up "Immortal" card you control is destroyed: Special Summon 1 "Immortal" card from your deck with less ATK than the destroyed monster. If this card would be destroyed by an effect that does not target it: negate the effect of that card and destroy it; then, destroy 1 monster you control.
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[center][center]Select 1 "Immortal" monster you control; destroy it and Special Summon 2 "Immortal Ascendant" tokens (Fairy-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1400/DEF 1400) to your side of the field in face up ATK position.
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[LC]

Plane seems a bit Op'd being able to bring out more immortals when one is destroyed, some drawback would be nice. 2nd one is has a fair effect. Correct OCG would be, Select 1 "Immortal" monster you control; destroy it. Special Summon 2 "Immortal Ascendant" tokens (Fairy-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1400/DEF 1400) to your side of the field in face up ATK position. Not sure on the first one though. 7.5/10

[ragnarok1945]

"When a face-up "Immortal" card you control is destroyed: Special Summon 1 "Immortal" card from your deck with less ATK than the destroyed monster"

This part makes Plane OPed. At the very least the special summoned monster should only last for 1 turn on the field before being destroyed itself

[Havok_SCO]

Yeah plane seems way to OP'd. Instead I would say something like:

"Once per turn, while you control no monsters. Remove from play 1 "Earthbound Immortal" from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Earthbound Immortal" of a different name from your hand. That monster cannot attack directly while this card is face-up on the field."