Spirit/Dark monsters

[Worm Victory]

I've been getting into making Yu-Gi-Oh cards again and need a rating on this card. If it goes well...I'll be making a set of cards like this one. Plz rate nice
EDIT: Ill be updating with more cards.
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This card can be Normal Summoned without tributes if you control 2 or more Spellcaster-Type monsters. If this card is removed from play, Return it to its owner's hand. This effect cannot be negated. This card gains 300 ATK each time a Spell card is removed from play. During the end-phase of the turn this card was Special Summoned or Normal Summoned, Return it to it's owner's hand unless you discard 1 DARK monster with a level of 7 or more.

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Banishing 4 Face-up Spirit monsters on your side of the field. Twice per turn, You may activate one of the following effects.
- When an opponent's monster attacks a Face-up Spirit monster, Discard 1 card to reduce its ATK by 400 for each card in your hand.
- When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card that targets a Face-up Spirit monster, Negate it and have your opponent gain 1000 Lifepoints.
- If this card would be removed from the field by an effect of a card or by battle, Banish one Spirit monster from your hand or from your side of the field and pay 1000 Lifepoints.

[ragnarok1945]

these ones don't fit the standard characteristics of spirit monsters

you might want to look into that part first

[Worm Victory]

[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1315361889' post='5497639']
these ones don't fit the standard characteristics of spirit monsters

you might want to look into that part first
[/quote]

I dont see why they have too.