-Chaos Zero- Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 here is my new cars took me an hour editing :/ but here it is - [IMG]http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff406/chaos-zero1/ycm/oulTakerTangu.jpg[/IMG] Effect [i]2 level 4 monsters[/i] [i]When this card attacks an opponents monster or is attacked by an opponents monster, detatch an Xyz Material Monster and activate the following effect[/i] [i]*Change the Battle Position of the targeted monster for the attack[/i] [i]* halve this cards attack and reduce the targetted monster for the attacks ATK to 0[/i] [i]* pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 banished Zombie-Type monster (that monster cannot attack during the Battle Phase)[/i] i just read the ocg updates from icy so now i dont have all the old stuff in me head (removed from play etc) please comment and rate Zero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 I like your card. It fits well in a zombie deck. But i think you should reduce its attack to 2400 - 2500 and put some restrictions for the summoning. For example 2 Level 4 Zombie-Type monsters. You should also put some restrictions for the zombie type monster that you can Special Summon because as it is now you can Special Summon 1 zombie monster level 8 with 2800 atk. When this card attacks an opponents monster or is attacked by an opponents monster, detatch an Xyz Material Monster and activate [u]the following effect.[/u] ( you should say 1 of the following effects.) [u]halve this cards attack and reduce the targetted monster for the attacks ATK to 0[/u] (You should say : halve this card's ATK and select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. That monster's ATK is reduced to 0 until the End Phase.) 8,5 / 10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☼◄Firewolf►☼ Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 Good Job, 9/10.:--) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Chaos Zero- Posted September 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 thanks for the comments i did 2800 becasue half of that is still a reasonable chunk of damage which can be done for a hard card to summon, thanks for the ocg fix btw Zero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 I'm surprised you allowed all 3 effects there nothing wrong in that since you can only do it twice, so l'll give this 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Chaos Zero- Posted September 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 thanks for the rate mate appreciate it Zero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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