♠Decietful King♠ Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 [center][center][spoiler=JP001][/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://i756.photobucket.com/albums/xx203/Sawoe/PhotonKnightFYCM.jpg[/img][/center][/center] [center][center][i][color=#696969][size=3][b]Name: Photon Knight[/b][/size][/color][/i][/center][/center] [center][center][i][color=#696969][size=3][b]Rank: 4 Attribute: LIGHT Type/Subtype: Warrior/Exceed/Effect Lore:[/b][/size][/color][/i] [b][color=#696969][i]3 Level 4 Monsters[/i] [i]If this card is successfully Xyz Summoned: draw 1 card if it is a Level 4 LIGHT monster place it on this card as a Xyz Material Monster. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card; banish 1 card in your Graveyard and inflict damage on your opponent equal to the number of cards he controls x200. If this card has no Xyz Material Monsters on it: it cannot attack.[/spoiler][/i][/color][/b][/center][/center] [center][center][spoiler=EN002][/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://i756.photobucket.com/albums/xx203/Sawoe/PhotoGigantes-2.jpg[/img][/center][/center] [center][center][i][color=#696969][size=3][b]Name: Photon Gigantes[/b][/size][/color][/i][/center][/center] [center][center][i][color=#696969][size=3][b]Leve[/b][/size][/color][/i][i][color=#696969][size=3][b]l: 4[/b][/size][/color][/i][/center][/center] [center][center][i][color=#696969][size=3][b]Attribute: LIGHT Type/Subtype: Machine/Effect Lore:[/b][/size][/color][/i] [color=#696969][b][i]This card gains 200 ATK for each LIGHT monster in your Graveyard. When this card battles a Monster your opponent controls: You can pay up to 800 Life Points to Special Summon 1 LIGHT monster in your hand, that Level equals the amount of Life Points payed divided by 200, after battle calculation; that card cannot be used in a Synchro Summon.[/spoiler][/i][/b][/color][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][color=#696969][b][i][img]http://i756.photobucket.com/albums/xx203/Sawoe/PhotonKing.jpg[/img][/i][/b][/color][/center][/center] [center][center][i][color=#696969][size=3][b]Name: Photon King - Angelus[/b][/size][/color][/i][/center][/center] [center][center][i][color=#696969][size=3][b]Rank: 4[/b][/size][/color][/i][/center][/center] [center][center][i][color=#696969][size=3][b]Attribute: LIGHT Type/Subtype: Fairy/Xyz/Effect Lore:[/b][/size][/color][/i][/center][/center] [center][center][color=#696969][i][b]3 Level 4 Monsters [/b][/i][/color][/center][/center] [center][center][color=#696969][i][b]When this card is succesfully Xyz Summoned: You can detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card to banish 1 card on the field. Once per turn, during your Main Phas 1: You can detach up to 2 Xyz Material Monsters to shuffle cards in to your Deck equal to the cards detached from this card, then draw 2 cards. If you draw a monster with same name as a detached monster increase your Life Points by 300 x the monster’s Level.[/b][/i][/color][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][color="#696969"][b][i][img]http://i756.photobucket.com/albums/xx203/Sawoe/PhotonStrike.jpg[/img][/i][/b][/color][/center][/center] [center][center][i][color=#696969][size=3][b]Name: Photon Strike[/b][/size][/color][/i][/center][/center] [center][center][i][color=#696969][size=3][b]Level: N/A[/b][/size][/color][/i][/center][/center] [center][center][i][color=#696969][size=3][b]Attribute: Spell Type/Subtype: Equip Spell Lore:[/b][/size][/color][/i][/center][/center] [center][center] [color="#696969"][b][i]This card can only be equipped to a LIGHT monster. If your opponent attacks a LIGHT monster you control; activate this card from your hand. If this card is equipped by this effect; Your monster cannot be destroyed by battle and all battle damage including that monster is halved. If not: the equipped monster gains 500 ATK.[/i][/b][/color] [/center][/center] [list] [/list] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepywood Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 eeh. I wouldn't use it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted September 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 [quote name='Sleepywood' timestamp='1315671099' post='5504611'] eeh. I wouldn't use it. [/quote] Any comments on why not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepywood Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 [quote name='♠Decietful King♠' timestamp='1315675888' post='5504781'] Any comments on why not? [/quote] sure thing; it isn't the easiest thing to get out on the field first off. It has nothing over two Xyz that need 2 materials instead of three. (if you can get three out odds are you can get four) Not to mention his ability isn't as good as let's say, negating a summon, or an attack, or attacking again once this turn. But I could see this being useful, I mean if you altered it a little bit and made it need Xyz materials instead of three I'd be much more likely to put maybe 1-2 copy(ies) of it in my extra deck. It could also have more attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 the burn effect is too small to make too huge a difference I'd make it 500 per card he controls or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted September 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 Well I'll add another one and try to edit the effect a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 all right, for Gigantes that LIGHT summon monster you need to pay a bigger price. 400 LP is virtually nothing, and you can still use it for XYZ food so make it 800 or more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 [quote name='Sonic Dragon' timestamp='1315677927' post='5504862'] 6/10 [/quote] That is the best Constructive Criticism I have ever seen... >_> With Gigantes, ...well...is good in any Light deck... But I think it can easily be used to summon Kristya, Hyperion, BEYD, and especially Galaxy (Well it is a Photon Monster so no s***) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted September 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 I edited Gigantes' effect to see if it could be more balanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 Photon Gigantes would gain much ATK in a Lightsworn Deck . The effect is very good but i think that you should say that it can't Special Summon another Photon Gigantes by its effect. Because this way you can Special Summon again and if you have another Photon Gigantes he can Special Summon another LIGHT monster. So you can Summon 3 more monsters. Otherwise the card is good. 9/ 10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Thank:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted September 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 Well I just added two new cards. A new Xyz monster and an Equip Spell Card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 14, 2011 Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 well Angelus's LP gain effect is a bit TOO specific, and overall I'm unsure how practical it'd be after all, you'd only gain 1200 LP........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted September 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 Should I change the attack gain to equal the drawn card's ATK? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 15, 2011 Report Share Posted September 15, 2011 well yeah but then it still has to have limits so it's not TOO huge a gain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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