BFG Studios Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/8885/390021n.jpg[/img] Lore: [b]As long as this card remains face-up on the field, if it inflicts damage to your opponent: The ATK of a monster they control is lowered by half of the same amount. If this card is destroyed by battle: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower WATER monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field.[/b] The first effect i picture is like drowning other monsters and your opponent... the second effect is you can get the card back that you used to Tribute Summon this card... or just any other card Hope you like and tell me what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 Possibly add a limit or drawback to the second effect. There are a number of pretty good WATER monsters out there, and you have a whole attribute at your disposal if it is an attribute based deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted September 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 i guess you're right, thx for the idea edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
â–¼AlcaNdeRâ–¼ Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 Hmmm About the first effect, the lower ATK is temporary? I have no problems with the second effect though maybe just by negating its effect the turn it is Special Summoned? I like the card anyway. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted September 10, 2011 Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 I would definitely use this card in a WATER Deck if it was real. Very good card. 9,2/10 good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted September 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2011 thanks for the good ratings and feedback... i hopefully fixed the confusion... I dont usually make specific cards like this, so its kind of new glad you like em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 2nd effect is the only one that's a bit too much I'd only make that monster stay on the field for 1 turn because you said it can be destroyed in ANY way by your opponent, which makes it a bit too easy to pull off now, on the other hand if it must be destroyed in a SPECIFIC way....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 thanks for the less op'd idea... i made it so that it needs to be destroyed by battle... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [b]If this card inflicts damage to your opponent: The ATK of a monster they control is lowered by the same amount as long as this card remains face-up on the field >> this is bit too much, since you an lowered opp more than 2100 ATK? it makes this card is invincible to beat by battle. Make it half or even amount/3[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 i guess that was a little op'd, i changed it... and did some re-wording as well now i think it is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [quote name='BFG Studios' timestamp='1315716983' post='5506540'] thanks for the less op'd idea... i made it so that it needs to be destroyed by battle... [/quote] I'd also say by your opponent, or you'd just kill it yourself to pull the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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