Lakendawn Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 OK, my first finished set, please give constructive advice so that I can learn from my mistakes. [img]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/9316/481598p.jpg[/img] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/6900/481598.jpg[/img] [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/6900/481598.jpg[/img]Sorry, I would have to fix my spells and traps first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Valkyrus Posted September 14, 2011 Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 You center too much around ATK/DEF gains. During this time and age, that sort of strategy rarely works, therefore it's a bad strategy. Your OCG is really bad too, you need to lurk here more or read your own real card's effects more to learn how to do it properly. But anyways, for your Normal Monsters, they're not bad, but then again, they're only Normal Monsters. Your pictures could be better too. All the cards which only give your monsters extra ATK/DEF points are no good. "The shield of unending bounds" has a real life twin called "Shrink" " Earthly Vortex" is quite situational, but when it hits, it hits hard... So I'm not sure if it isn't OP'ed. Maybe have the monsters be send to the Graveyard instead of being banished. Earthly Champion wouldn't be bad if you didn't have its Fusion materials be so many and so specific. Make it for example " Any 3 "Earthly monsters" without specifying them and have them be 3 or 4 instead of 5. basically all cards are bad, but don't worry, you're new and everyone has to start somewhere. So lurk more, read more and play more and you'll start making better cards in no time ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☼◄Firewolf►☼ Posted September 18, 2011 Report Share Posted September 18, 2011 [i]Good job for your first finished set, i give you a 7/10...;--)[/i] [i]The next time you make a set, try to use better pictures (only if you can find better pictures).;--)[/i] [i]The pictures you used are not bad, but they are not very good...;--)[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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