Dragon Spear Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [size=5]Hello there, card makers and judgers alike. This is a set I am working on consisting of space-centred cards. I plan to have a mix of vanillas, support cards, fusions and of course effect monsters. When finished I hope it shall have at maximum around 30 cards.[/size] [size=5]Here is the progress so far, please C&C, suggest improvements and so forth. I will most probobly be updating once per day or every other day.[/size] [spoiler=Spells] .[img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/1328/480885.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore][size=4]When a "Galactic Guardian" monster is sent to the graveyard you may special summon that monster to the field by paying life points equal to that monster's level x100.[/size][/spoiler] [img]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4369/480885o.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]All "Galactic Guardian" monsters gain 1000 defence. When an opponent inflicts damage tribute a "Galactic Guardian" monster whos attack and defence equal the damage taken instead.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps] [img]http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/1328/480885.jpg[/img] [img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/1328/480885.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore] [size=4]When you have no cards on your side of the field and the opponent directly attacks you with a monster of 7 stars or higher, destroy all cards on the field.[/size][/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 There are Several OCG errors.. You don't tribute lifepoints. You PAY. Stars = Level Galactic Universe is pretty good... Self burn to Special Summoned a destroyed monster. But put in the Beginning: "Once per turn, during the Battle Phase;" Land of the Guardians is useless. And it's effect is kind of dull. Planet Eating Vortex Its Inflict Direct Damage for each monster on the field. Honest truth, even Just Deserts is better then this. I do enjoy Last Defense though. Probably the only card in this set that I don't mind. I'm not going to rate the set because I don't f***ing know what a Galactic Guardian is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Spear Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [quote name='✪✪✪~Star~✪✪✪' timestamp='1315738734' post='5506843'] There are Several OCG errors.. You don't tribute lifepoints. You PAY. Stars = Level [b][i]Thanks, I wan't too sure on that one.[/i][/b] Galactic Universe is pretty good... Self burn to Special Summoned a destroyed monster. But put in the Beginning: "Once per turn, during the Battle Phase;" [b][i]Would that be "Once per turn, during the battle phase self burn to special summon a destroyed monster" ?[/i][/b] Land of the Guardians is useless. And it's effect is kind of dull. [b][i]Yeah I just wanted to increase attack and defence of the monsters, cause it's a field, but didn't really know how much to portion it.[/i][/b] Planet Eating Vortex Its Inflict Direct Damage for each monster on the field. Honest truth, even Just Deserts is better then this. [b][i]Ok, thanks. How could I make it better than Just Desserts?[/i][/b] I do enjoy Last Defense though. Probably the only card in this set that I don't mind. [b][i] Probaly my favourite.[/i][/b] I'm not going to rate the set because I don't f***ing know what a Galactic Guardian is. [/quote] Thankyou, I'll update in a while. A Galactic Guardian is just a prefix I'll add, like Six Samurai. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [quote name='Dragon Spear' timestamp='1315740057' post='5506854'] Thankyou, I'll update in a while. A Galactic Guardian is just a prefix I'll add, like Six Samurai. [/quote] Your welcome. I will look forward to see the monsters so I can rate them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 i like the idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Spear Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [b]UPDATE: Ok I updated the "pay" and "level". I changed Land Of The Guardians' effect a bit, hopefully it's a bit better now. Planet Eating Vortex had an effect change. [/b] There isn't a galactic universe in there? :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Spear Posted September 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 [size=5][b]BUMP[/b][/size] Should have some more cards up tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LinkTheGHhero14 Posted September 12, 2011 Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 I think this is a neat idea. Can't wait to see the rest of the set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Spear Posted September 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 Thanks, could anyone reccomend an image source for spacey armoured kinda people? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
▪ατємυ▪ Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 I was hoping for this to be all Spells and Traps, but I saw "Monster(s)" in the text. As Star said, there are OCG errors, but I like your idea and the pictures are well. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Spear Posted September 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 Thanks, I want to get to work on more cards but I need a decent image site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☼◄Firewolf►☼ Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [i]Pictures are okay, effect are cool, but the cards are not awesome.;--)[/i] [i]I give you a 7.5/10 for the cards.;--)[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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