Peizur Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [i][b][img]http://i1222.photobucket.com/albums/dd491/Peizur/Izadoshi-1.jpg[/img][/b][/i][center][center][i][b]This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by removing from play one Dark Paladin, and one Sorcerer of Dark Magic from you Graveyard. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every Spellcaster Type Monster in your Graveyard. As long as this card remains Face-up on the Field, you can negate the activation of Spell and Trap cards, and destroy them.[/b][/i] Hi, this is my first card, so it probably has TONS of errors. Comment and tell me what I did wrong. Thanks.[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 You forgot the quotation marks around the monster's names in the lore... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peizur Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Darn, I'm gonna try again, but other than that, what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 I think its really good, except you forgot the hyphen in between Spellcaster and type...it should be Spellcaster-type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peizur Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 XD why don't you give me all the mistakes at once? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Well Dark Paladin isn't too hard, but Sorceror of Dark Magic might be it's also a bit weak, don't see this getting more than 2700 atk anyway make it 400 atk per spellcaster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peizur Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1315780678' post='5508228'] Well Dark Paladin isn't too hard, but Sorceror of Dark Magic might be it's also a bit weak, don't see this getting more than 2700 atk anyway make it 400 atk per spellcaster [/quote] Maybe, but I have a spellcaster deck in real life, so I figured it would be too powerful if I summoned it late in the duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 then maybe make it 350 atk per spellcaster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peizur Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Sounds good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 np, I just feel if you keep it at 300, then maybe lower the level a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 12, 2011 Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 The Level in this card is how you can negate the Spells and Traps + there's a chance that this card is Summoned at the late duel. But good card can be used in a fast/quick duel. So, i suggest to raise it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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